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Si votre enfant est en classe de 1ère, vous avez forcément entendu parler de l’essai du bac de français, une des épreuves que les élèves redoutent tant. Et ça tombe bien, en tant que prof au lycée j’ai eu l’habitude de travailler avec des collègues en littérature. De l’introduction à la conclusion, je vous explique tout ce qu’il faut savoir pour aider votre enfant à réussir son essai avec brio ! Et s’il passe un Bac général, continuez à lire, les explications marchent aussi pour la dissertation !

Un essai en littérature

De manière générale, un essai désigne une œuvre littéraire dans laquelle l’auteur défend un point de vue ou une conviction personnelle, en utilisant des arguments logiques et des procédés littéraires afin de convaincre le lecteur. 

Essais littéraires, exemples :

Parmis les essais littéraires les plus célèbres, nous pouvons citer :

• Essais , de Michel de Montaigne
• Pensées , de Blaise Pascal
• Propos sur les pouvoirs , d’Alain

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L’essai au Bac de Français 

📝 L’essai en Français fait partie des épreuves proposées lors du Bac de Français, en classe de première. 

Pour rappel, les candidats peuvent choisir entre :

➡️ Le commentaire de texte (noté sur 20). 

➡️ La contraction de texte suivie d’un essai (les deux étant notés sur 10).

L’essai est une question de culture générale , qui fait écho au sujet abordé lors de la contraction de texte, et qui demande au candidat d’utiliser ses connaissances et de suivre une méthodologie précise .

☝️ À savoir : les lycéens ont deux heures pour rédiger un essai de Français, qui doit faire environ 1,5 page de long. 

La méthodologie d’un essai obéit à des règles simples mais précises. Ce qui est valorisé est la structure, les arguments et les exemples. Voyons cela en détail.

Analyser le sujet

🧐 Pour faire un essai, il est important de commencer par analyser le sujet afin de comprendre le thème et d’en dégager les principaux mots-clés. 

✅ À partir de là, votre enfant pourra noter au brouillon toutes les idées qui lui viennent en tête, les ordonner et construire un plan.

L’importance de la structure

La structure d’un essai est la même que celle d’une dissertation. Écrire un essai nécessite donc d’organiser ses idées en différentes parties qui suivent un plan détaillé et apparent. 

1️⃣ Une introduction qui présente le sujet et l’angle sous lequel vous allez l’aborder.

2️⃣ Un développement , en deux ou trois parties de même longueur, dont chacune correspond à une idée principale. 💡

Mais ce n’est pas tout 🤯 ! Chaque partie est elle-même divisée en deux ou trois sous-parties dans lesquelles il faut présenter un argument suivi d’un exemple.

3️⃣ Et enfin, une conclusion qui répond à la question posée et propose d’autres pistes de réflexion.

Attention, il faut veiller à :

👉 Sauter une ligne après l’introduction, entre chaque partie du développement et avant la conclusion.

👉 Au sein de chacune des deux (ou trois) parties du développement, aller à la ligne et faire un alinéa à chaque nouvel argument.

👉 À la fin, prendre au moins 10 minutes pour relire son essai et corriger les fautes de grammaire ! 🧐

L’introduction d’un essai, comme d’une dissertation, se compose de trois parties :

1️⃣ Une phrase d’accroche : il s’agit d’attirer l’attention du lecteur en le projetant immédiatement dans le sujet. 

Par exemple :

• Un fait d’actualité (« Aujourd’hui, en France… »).
• Un fait historique (« La Renaissance est une période où règne la censure… »).
• Une idée reçue (« Nous avons souvent tendance à penser que...»).

2️⃣ La problématique , c’est-à-dire le problème soulevé par la question. 

« Comment les auteurs de la Renaissance ont permis l’émergence de la démocratie moderne ? »

3️⃣ L’annonce du plan : il s’agit, en une ou deux phrases, d’annoncer le développement qui va suivre. Généralement comme ceci :

« Dans une première partie, nous verrons que les auteurs de la renaissance… avant d’analyser la façon dont la monarchie… Enfin, nous verrons comment….  »

👍 Pour plus de détails, je vous invite à lire cet article écrit par Manon. Il est entièrement consacré à l’écriture d’une introduction, avec des exemples utilisables dans un essai de Français pour le Bac !

👨‍🏫 C’est le dernier souvenir que le correcteur a du travail de votre enfant, il ne faut donc pas la négliger ! La conclusion se compose de deux parties.

1️⃣ Une synthèse de l’essai : il s'agit de résumer en deux phrases l’ensemble de l’essai pour répondre à la question posée de manière nuancée.

2️⃣ L’ouverture : cela peut sembler paradoxal mais la conclusion n’est pas une fin en soi. Il faut élargir la question posée en proposant au correcteur d’autres pistes de réflexion en lien avec le sujet.

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Dans votre parcours scolaire, vous allez devoir produire beaucoup d’écrits académiques, dont quelques-uns seront en anglais. Il n’est pas anodin de rédiger un essay (une dissertation en anglais).

Pas de panique, nous allons vous expliquer comment faire un bon essay dans la langue de Shakespeare !

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La structure d’un essay, exemple d’essay, qu’est-ce qu’un essay  .

Un essay est une dissertation en anglais. Cet exercice académique doit respecter une méthodologie très différente des règles de la dissertation française.

L’ essay doit être personnel et mettre en exergue la position de l’auteur sur le sujet. N’hésitez pas à donner votre avis en argumentant fortement dans cette dissertation en anglais.

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Voici 6 consignes que vous devez suivre pour réussir votre dissertation en anglais. Il vous faut les respecter à la lettre !

1. Soyez concis

Un essay ne doit pas faire 20 pages. Vous aurez normalement des consignes de taille précises. Le respect du nombre de mots dans un essay fait partie des critères de notation et vous pouvez être pénalisé en cas de manquement.

Exemple de consigne pour un essay

Your essay should not be longer than 500 words (+ or – 10%). Otherwise, we will subtract 5 points to your final grade.

2. N’utilisez pas les contractions

Dans un essay, les contractions sont interdites. Elles ne s’utilisent pas dans les écrits académiques.

3. Utilisez des mots de liaison

Il est très important de structurer votre essay avec des mots de liaison. Ainsi, le lecteur saura où vous en êtes dans votre démonstration.

4. Utilisez “I” et pas “we”

En français, il est d’usage d’employer “nous” ( we ) dans les dissertations. Toutefois, pour un essay , on privilégie le “je” ( I ).

La dissertation en anglais est plus personnelle et vous devez vous approprier l’argumentation.

5. Ne soyez pas neutre

En français, nous faisons souvent un plan de type “thèse, antithèse, synthèse” sans vraiment prendre partie.

Pour un essay , vous devez choisir votre camp ! Exprimez votre opinion personnelle et argumentez jusqu’au bout.

6. Utilisez des exemples et données

Pour chaque grande idée, il faudra illustrer vos propos avec des exemples concrets et des données (chiffres, pourcentages, …)

Vous pouvez utiliser des formulations clés pour structurer votre essay .

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How to Write an Essay: Step by Step Guide With Examples

An essay is a brief writing that explains, analyzes and interprets a topic; it’s a summary of a particular topic in which the author also expresses an opinion.

The essay is a very useful, practical and simple learning and expression tool and it has rules, specifications or details regarding its format and content you must know to be able to do it correctly. Some of the most frequent questions about the essay are:

Does the essay need a title? How many paragraphs does an essay have? Does it have headings and a conclusion? Does the essay have a full stop? Are the introduction, body and conclusion on separate pages? How do you make the cover of an essay?

Those are some of the various questions that come up when you need to do an essay, all of which are addressed here.

Table of Contents

What is an essay.

An essay is a short writing that explains, analyzes, and interprets a topic. It is an explanatory and analytical summary of a specific topic, where the author not only exposes or explains the subject but also, based on solid information, expresses an opinion on it.

The difference between an essay and the informational text you can see everywhere, is  that an essay is freer, and its parts are not separated by headings.

The format of an essay and most common doubts

The format of an essay refers to the arrangement or location of each of its parts; it is the order of its components that is visually perceived and that gives the essay better appearance and organization.

This is done according to the APA format and it’s norms are the ones that are below

• Font: Arial or Times New Roman, number 12.
• Leading: Leading is the vertical space between each line and must be 1.5.
• Margins : 2.54 cm lower, upper and right margins.
• The text must always be justified , that a text is justified means that the lines have to be aligned, so they create the shape of a square. However, there can be cases when this can’t be achieved, like when you write a list.
• The headings “Introduction”, “Body” and “Conclusion ” are not written in the essay. They essay is written continuously, and you should avoid placing such headings.

The essay does have each of these parts but they are not identified as in a monographic work, but rather they are written one after another. An example of an essay can be seen at the end of this article.

• Full stop. The essays do have a full stop, after each paragraph.
• Paragraphs : An essay needs to have at least 5 paragraphs, and each paragraph must have a minimum of 3 lines and a maximum of 10 lines.

The parts or structure of an essay

The structural organization of an essay comprises three fundamental parts:

• Introduction.
• Conclusion.

The introduction 

The introduction, as its name implies, introduces the reader to the essay with following steps:

• Expression of a general idea. It consists of expressing a broad or macro idea of the topic, for example, if an essay is going to be about a type of personal pronoun , it begins with the definition of pronoun. Or, if it’s about a sport like soccer, it begins with the definition of sport.
• Indication of a less general idea. The topic begins to be reduced and concentrated. For example, after having defined what a sport is, it is mentioned that there are many sports and one of them is soccer and present a definition of soccer.
• Indication of an update . The purpose is to locate the essay in time and space, that is, in the historical moment and / or geographical location where it has context. If you talk about human rights violations , here you write about the violations that are currently taking place and the geographical place of interest where they take place.
• An exemplification . Here you could write cases in which human rights have been violated.
• Presentation of the problem, topic, question, this will depend on the type of essay .  The most common essay that is frequently assigned to students is expository, which consists of developing the topic through explanations, comparisons, and exemplifications. Here is where the fundamental idea of the essay is located and that is placed last.

The body of the essay

The body consists of the points that develop the essay in depth. In the example of the essay about soccer, the body could have the history of soccer, the rules of the game, the most important championships, etc

Form and organization the body

• Each topic should be covered in a separate paragraph.
• Each topic, preferably, should be introduced by a connector (Regarding… As regard… With respect to…)
• The development must contain more information than the introduction and conclusion because it constitutes the detailed information of the essay.

The conclusion 

• The conclusion is preferably written in a single paragraph, and it is also preferred that it be the same or similar in size to that of the introduction. It starts with a connector (To finish…. In conclusion…)
• There should be a mention of one or two topics covered in the body.

Here goes the author’s personal opinion, (You, the person doing the essay, your opinion) an essay has, of course, personal opinions in its body, however, in the conclusion these must be emphatic.

To make it clear that the author is giving his or her opinion, he or she can use phrases such as “In my opinion…” “I think…” “I hold that …” “From my perspective … etc.

In the last part, you write what you think about the subject, if it’s a typical expository essay. What appears here depends on the type of essay, it can be the answer to the question, or the solution of the problem as the case may be.  

• References go in a separate page that starts with the heading “References”. Add only those that have been cited, not the texts you read to do the essay.
• References must be placed in alphabetical order and according to APA standards.

Example of references

Savater, F. (1991). Ética para Amador. Barcelona: Ariel.

Thomas, Ann and Aron Thomas, Jr. (1956 ). Non-intervention: The law and its import in the Americas . Dallas, Texas: Southern Methodist University Press.

Transtle. (2022). How to Write an Essay: The Ultimate Step by Step Guide. Transtle . Available: https://www.transtle.com/general-learning/how-to-write-an-essay/ [Consulted: 2022, January  24th].

Walzer, M. (2000). Just and Unjust Wars: A Moral Argument with Historical Illustrations.  (3rd edn.).  New York: Basic Books.

Example of an essay

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Essai : la méthode pour le bac technologique (avec PDF à télécharger)

Si vous êtes en série technologique et que vous passez le bac de français cette année, vous pourriez avoir besoin de la méthode de l’essai.

Cette épreuve introduite par la réforme du lycée de 2018 va de paire avec la contraction de texte et propose son lot d’écueils à éviter.

L’essai se rapproche de la dissertation, mais vous n’avez que 2 heures pour le traiter. Il faut donc parvenir à vite rassembler vos connaissances sur le sujet, et à organiser vos idées dans un plan précis. Pour un exemple d’essai rédigé : c’est ici .

Qu’est-ce qu’un essai ?

L’essai est un exercice de réflexion qui partage de nombreux points communs avec la dissertation. Vous devez répondre à une question posée en mobilisant vos connaissances littéraires, scolaires et personnelles.

L’essai et la contraction de texte sont réunis dans une seule et même épreuve. La question posée pour l’essai s’appuie donc généralement sur le texte contracté. L’objet d’étude concerné par cette épreuve est toujours le même : “ la littérature d’idées du XVIe siècle au XVIIIe siècle “

La méthode de l’essai : quels sont les attendus ?

Comment répondre à un essai ? La réponse est : en démontrant une réflexion construite .

Le but de l’essai est de montrer que vous êtes capable d’argumenter et de mobiliser votre culture littéraire. Le correcteur attendra de vous :

• Un travail construit (introduction – développement construit – conclusion)
• Des arguments variés appuyés sur des exemples concrets.
• Des références au texte contracté, à l’œuvre au programme et à votre culture personnelle.
• Un vocabulaire riche, une syntaxe rigoureuse et une orthographe correcte.
• Un plan qui envisage tous les aspects de la question (ouverture d’esprit !)

En d’autres termes, il ne s’agit pas simplement de répondre en une phrase à la question posée. Le bac de français marque la fin de votre cursus de français dans le secondaire. Ses épreuves ont pour but d’évaluer vos acquis sur l’ensemble de ce cursus.

Pensez donc que le correcteur attendra de vous que vous remobilisiez ce que vous avez pu travailler pendant toutes ces années : votre réflexion a été formée à l’instar de votre culture et de votre rédaction, utilisez-les pour répondre à l’essai !

Comment préparer votre brouillon ?

Comme pour toute épreuve, et même si vous avez moins de temps que pour le commentaire littéraire, il est nécessaire de préparer votre travail au brouillon. Voici la méthode pour préparer efficacement le brouillon de votre essai.

La première chose est d’analyser le sujet (définir les mots principaux et le reformuler –  vérifier si c’est une question ouverte ou fermée ).

Pour cela rien de plus simple, cherchez si le sujet demande à être validé ou invalidé (réponse par oui, je suis d’accord , ou non, je ne suis pas d’accord ) ou s’il vous demande de lister plusieurs arguments et idées (sujet commençant par un mot interrogatif ).

Exemple de question fermé e : “Pensez-vous que la littérature soit une arme efficace pour lutter contre les inégalités ?”

Exemple de question ouverte : “En quoi la littérature peut-elle s’avérer efficace pour lutter contre les inégalités ?”

Si la question est  fermée , vous chercherez un plan  dialectique , si la question est  ouverte , vous chercherez un plan  thématique .

Quelle est la différence entre un plan dialectique et un plan thématique ?

Un plan dialectique envisage la réponse à la question posée sous la forme d’une discussion . Il propose donc des arguments allant dans le sens du sujet (thèse), des arguments montrant les limites de la thèse (antithèse), et parfois, des arguments permettant de dépasser l’opposition de la thèse et de l’antithèse (synthèse ou dépassement).

Un plan thématique propose plusieurs arguments allant dans le sens du sujet. En fait, un plan thématique est utilisé quand le sujet demande des éléments de réponse particuliers. Par exemple, à la question “pourquoi faut-il lire ?” on répondrait par un plan thématique : I. Lire pour se détendre ; II. lire pour se cultiver ; III. Lire pour développer ses capacités cognitives.

Comment trouver des idées pour un essai ? La méthode du tableau :

Vous devrez mobiliser toutes vos connaissances autour du sujet. Pour cela utilisez un tableau comme suit :

Commencez par remplir ce qui vous vient en tête (un argument a besoin d’un exemple, mais l’exemple peut faire naître l’argument). Donc si vous pensez en premier à un discours vus en cours, ou à un livre lu, inscrivez-le dans la colonne exemple, puis cherchez quel argument mettre à côté.

Il est primordial que votre devoir intègre des arguments et exemples issus :

• du texte de la contraction
• de l’œuvre du programme étudiée
• de votre culture personnelle (livres lus, actualité, cours des années précédentes …)

Pour cette raison, je vous conseille de réaliser une fiche développée de la séquence sur la littérature d’idées .

Essayez d’apprendre des citations issues de l’oeuvre au programme, et de retenir quelques mots de chacun des textes du parcours. Quand vous voyez sur votre temps libre quelque chose qui vous fait penser à cette thématique, notez-le également. Vous arriverez ainsi mieux préparé, et avec des exemples en tête !

Une fois que vous avez trouvé vos arguments et exemples, organisez-les dans un plan construit (idéalement 2 ou 3 grandes parties avec chacune 2 sous-parties contenant 1 argument et 1-2 exemples)

Terminez votre brouillon en rédigeant l’introduction (phrase d’accroche, annonce du sujet et définition des termes importants, annonce du plan).

Comment rédiger l’essai ?

Il ne vous reste plus qu’à passer du brouillon au propre. Pour cela, recopiez l’introduction, puis rédigez votre développement en reprenant et développant vos arguments et en les articulant avec les exemples que vous avez trouvés.

Rappelez-vous que l’organisation est la clé. Essayez d’être aussi fluide que possible. Idéalement, vos parties sont reliées par des transitions, et vous passez d’une idée à l’autre dans un ordre logique. Un bon devoir ressemble davantage à un raisonnement suivi qu’à une liste d’idées.

Respectez les alinéas, faites des phrases courtes et claires, relisez-vous bien pour vérifier la syntaxe et l’orthographe.

Finissez par la conclusion en suivant l’ordre habituel (résumé du développement, rappel du sujet, réponse au sujet, ouverture facultative).

La méthode de l’essai au format PDF

Voici la méthode présentée dans cet article au format PDF. Vous pouvez la télécharger gratuitement pour vos révisions !

Enfin, si vous cherchez la méthode de la contraction de texte, la voici : https://la-classe-du-litteraire.com/contraction-de-texte-methode-et-exemple/

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FCE Essay Examples:  Topic (Environment) 

Example exam task:, example answer (grade: 3), example answer:.

I think that my country has problems with pollution to the environment like all other countries. This problem is normal for Russia. We have big problems with transport because there are too much cars in our country. And because of that we have problems with atmospeer, air in my city and in all Russia is really dirty and sometimes I can’t make a sigh because it smells around me and of course around that cars on the road. I’ve heard about tradition of one country. They don’t go anywhere by car one day a month or a year, they just use bycicle or their feet. I think it could be very good if we had a tradition like that.

So, what about the rivers and the seas? Yeah, there are some really good and clean rivers and seas where you can go, but there are not many of them. Once I saw the river OB in my city, it was about two years ago but I stil remember that in some places it was not blue, it was green or purple I didn’t really understand because it had different colours.

I don’t know what should we do. Maybe we should just open our eyes and look what we did. But Russian people don’t care about the world around them many people care only about themselves an that’s all.

So, the best idea is look around and try to do something good for our planet and for us and our children.

FCE, CAE, CPE

Practice, write & improve, examiners comments & grade:, example answer (grade: 3-4).

To begin with pollution and damage to the environment is the most serious and difficult problem for countries of all over the world. Scientists of different countries predict a global ecocatastrophe if people won’t change their attitude to our planet.

First of all a huge damage to the environment brings a transport. People can’t imagine their living without cars, buses, trains, ships and planes. But it’s an open secret that one of disadvantage of these accustomed things is harmful exhaust. Needless to say that use of environment friendly engines helps us to save atmosphere from pollution.

In addition to this our rivers and seas are in not less danger situation. It’s a fact of common knowledge that numerous factories and plants pour off their waste to ponds. Obviously that cleaning manufacturing water helps to avoid extinction of ocean residents.

Apart from this I’m inclined to believe that every person can and must contribute to solving this important problem. Doing a little steps for protection our environment every day we will be able to save our Earth. And it’s a task of each of us.

Model Answer (Grade: 5)

DEVELOPMENT VS ENVIRONMENT

If we surf the web looking for pollution and environmental catastrophes, we will find out that every country in the world suffers them. This is a natural consequence of the struggle between development and environment.

If a country decided to live isolated from the rest of the world, living on what it can naturally grow and produce, it surely wouldn’t be highly polluted. But we all want exotic food and technological items from all over the world, so we have to pay the price.

Investing on electrical transport would benefit the environment a lot. Even more if this electricity came from a natural source of energy like wind, rivers and solar boards. It’s difficult to achieve this because petrol companies will fight against these actions.

We also have to take care of our rivers and seas. We all have heard about factories throwing highly toxic substances to rivers, without minimizing their poisoning effects. A really strict law should be applied to fine these factories and make them change their policy.

But what about ourselves? We also can do a lot! If, when possible, we bought larger packs of food, we would be producing less rubbish. And this is only an example!

FCE Essay Examples: Topic (Fashion) 

In today’s world, the fashion industry has a strong importance in people’s lives. The fashion industry say to the society what to wear and creates new types of clothes all the time.

Some people claim that the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives, they say that the fashion industry creates clothes that the society has to wear. Furthermore, the clothes’ price is extremely high and people, who can’t afford it, should not be in the society.

In the other hand, the fashion industry guide the people to be in a good appearance, because, nowadays, the appearance of the person is more important than the person itself.

In my opinion, the fashion industry doesn’t has a bad influence on people’s lives. It’s something which was created to help people what to wear.

Example Answer (Grade: 4)

Fashion industry is very a discussed subject nowadays: they create and design new clothes everyday in order to satisfy some people needs.

There are many people who claim that the fashion industry is important and good for society. According to them, this industry design beautiful clothes and thanks to that every person can wear shirts, trousers or any acessory which is on today’s fashion.

On the other hand, the fashion industry in some people opinion, controls the market of clothes and because of that they can’t wear what they want to. In addition, the industry can increase the price of clothes, forcing people who don’t want to be “oldfashioned” to buy and pay a large amount of money to keep “beautiful”.

In my opinion, we can’t let the fashion industry decide what we must or musn’t wear. We shouldn’t judge people for its appearance,because that is not important. We must wear whatever we like, want and feel confortable with.

The society we live today is characterised by technology in constant development, fast speed processes, information travelling and getting to people at a blink of an eye and a complex web of social networking. In this context, the fashion industry is becoming increasingly important and having a more and more paramount role in our lives.

On one hand, the fashion industry is undeniably a source of profit and income. It hires millions of people all over the world and generates millions of dollars every year. Furthermore, such profitable business is also believed to be able to spread and make known the culture of a people, encouraging and enhancing a better understanding of each other.

Nevertheless, for those who are neither impressed nor motivated by numbers and figures, the fashion industry is seen as one which segregates people, isolating those who not fit their laws and commands. It is stated that people place too much importance on appearance and the material, world, sadly true, and the fashion industry just spurs on such situation. Moreover, not only are the costs of fashion item unrealistically high, it is thought to be a money better spent on more pressing issues, such as poverty and hunger.

I do believe that the fashion industry, as it is today, has a harmful effect, because it values a minority of people in detriment to the majority. However, it has such a wide reach that, it put into a good use, it can save lives.

FCE Essay Examples: Topic (Languages) 

“There are more reasons to learn a foreign language than to pass a test”

Everything around us revolves around language(s), it is the most important thing in our lives. Society would just not function without it. They are It is our future and I would personaly love to learn as many as I possibly can.

Not everything in life is done because it is necessary. Learning a new language can be a lot of fun. Many people only do it as a hoby, or their knowledge is something that brings them pride and pleasure.

Secondly, we have people who do it simply to challenge themselves. Truly I believe that having a great outcome that stems from your hard work and dedication to learn something new is a wonderful way to challenge prove your ability to yourself and others. Then there is travelling. It is very important to be able to understand and have a conversation with someone abroad, unless you would like to get lost or worse.

To conclude, I think that learning a new language is an amazing thing no matter why you do it. It is always better to do things out of enjoyment, but even if you do it for a test, that knowledge will always be useful.

Learning a a foreign languages is very important nowadays. English, in particular, is essential because it allows is spoken all over the world. That’s the reason why we start studying it from the age of six years old. Going abroad and being able to speak to native people is very satisfying and that’s why I want to improve my knowledge about foreign languages.

I decided to take this exam to know how high my level of English is, but also because I need this certification to go abroad next summer. I really want to come back to Cornwall, an amazing region in the South-West of England. I’ve been there twice with my family, but now I want to go alone. Only being there to England I can really improve my English comprehension and speaking skills.

Fortunately I can will have some English lessons which taught in English at university and I can’t wait for it because it will be an interesting challenge for me. Studying foreign languages is essential to live and to travel. It isn’t simple and I surely have to challenge myself everyday, but the result is so satisfying that we I can’t do without it.

FCE Essay Example: Topic (History) 

A very common topic that is being discussed nowadays is wether schools should teach subjects that some may consider useless later in life. A clear example is history, since it is quite difficult to learn and does not help us in day-to-day activities.

However, many people do not realize the importance of it or that it affects our lives today. For example, our political system would not be this way if it weren’t for the Ancient Greeks, numerous politicians and wars who helped shape democracy and our constitution. Yet it is still thought that it’s useless.

In addition, it is very important that we never forget about our past since we must know where we were standing years ago. Moreover, there are some things, such as World War II, that we have to remember to prevent them from happening again. We should also know where we we were standing a century ago: our origins, our identity. The more you learn about your ethnicity, the better.

All in all, I think that it is extremely important to learn about one’s own country’s history. Anyone who gets the chance to do this should not waste it, since they are very fortunate to have this opportunity

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Comment faire l'introduction d'un essai

Qu'est-ce qu'un essai ? L'essai est un texte dans lequel l'auteur expose et argumente le point de vue qu'il porte sur un sujet en particulier (il peut être social, culturel, politique…). L'essai est généralement utilisé dans des contextes académiques, mais de nos jours, de nombreux auteurs publient des essais accessibles à tous. En effet, la vente de ce genre littéraire a beaucoup augmenté au cours des dernières années.

Chaque essai, comme chaque auteur, est totalement différent. Cependant, il existe des règles fondamentales concernant la structure d'un essai, et qui permettent de rendre le texte accessible et clair aux yeux des lecteurs. Si vous envisagez d'en rédiger un, il est indispensable de savoir comment commencer votre essai, et donc comment faire l'introduction d'un essai . Dans cet article de toutCOMMENT, nous vous expliquons ce qu'est l'introduction d'un essai, de quoi elle se compose, ainsi que d'autres points qui pourraient vous être utiles.

Comment commencer l'introduction d'un essai

Comment faire l'introduction d'un essai académique, comment écrire un essai.

Qu’est-ce qu'une introduction pour un essai ? Avant de savoir comment faire l’introduction d’un essai, vous devez prendre en compte le fait que c’est la première partie qui expose au lecteur le sujet à traiter, et c’est ce qui vient juste après le titre de l’essai. Les lecteurs ne sont pas forcément des experts du sujet qu’ils vont lire, c’est pour cette raison que l’introduction doit être claire et doit montrer que vous maîtrisez ce sujet. Si vous vous demandez comment commencer une introduction pour un essai , vous pouvez par exemple commencer par définir les termes de base de votre sujet, ou bien faire un rappel du contexte historique ou des théories qui l’entourent. Dans cet article, nous allons vous expliquer quels sont les mots à utiliser pour commencer une introduction d’un essai, et quelle structure elle doit avoir.

En général, ce type de texte est divisé en plusieurs parties de base, que vous devez absolument connaître pour bien apprendre comment faire une introduction pour un essai :

• L’introduction (dont nous parlerons dans cet article).
• L e développement du texte : partie dans laquelle vous exposerez vos idées, vos opinions, vos accords et/ ou désaccords justifiés et argumentés.
• La conclusion : partie dans laquelle vous passerez en revue toutes les idées développées tout au long de votre texte, en exposant vos résultats finaux.
• Les annexes : on peut faire apparaître ou non les annexes dans un essai. Cela dépendra si vous avez consulté des sources spécifiques, si vous avez cité des auteurs et leurs œuvres, etc.

Il existe différents types d’essai , tels que les essais littéraires, critiques, scientifiques ou narratifs. Le langage et le vocabulaire de votre essai, ainsi que son objectif, doivent être adaptés au genre dont votre essai va faire partie. Cependant, de manière générale, tous les types d’essais doivent contenir les mêmes parties.

Si vous souhaitez en savoir plus sur la structure des essais, et comment développer chaque partie, nous vous invitons à consulter l'article Quelle est la structure d'un essai .

La première chose que vous devez savoir sur la façon de rédiger une introduction pour un essai est de savoir exactement de quoi vous allez parler. Vous voulez exprimer votre opinion et votre réflexion sur la politique actuelle d’un pays ? Vous souhaitez analyser et faire connaître au monde entier vos idées sur la société de consommation ? Il existe de nombreux sujets à aborder et à traiter dans un essai . L’important est de savoir clairement sur quoi vous voulez écrire, et pourquoi. Si vous vous demandez comment rédiger un essai , et par conséquent, une introduction, gardez ces quelques questions à l’esprit :

• Comment vous allez introduire le sujet que vous allez aborder.
• Quel style d’écriture vous allez utiliser : votre essai prend-il la forme d’un dialogue dans lequel deux personnes posent des questions et donnent des réponses au sujet principal ? Ou au contraire, s’agit-il d’un récit divisé en plusieurs chapitres, dans lesquels sont présentées les différentes parties de votre raisonnement ?

N’oubliez pas que ce que vous dites est aussi important que la manière dont vous le dites, surtout si vous souhaitez que votre œuvre soit lue par le plus de personnes possible.

La façon de commencer une introduction est une tâche aussi importante que la rédaction de l’essai en lui-même. Grâce à une bonne introduction, vous serez en mesure de capter l’attention du lecteur. Pour faire une bonne introduction, il est important de commencer votre essai par une phrase dite « d’accroche » , qui indique clairement de quoi vous allez parler. Si vous voulez que l’introduction de votre essai soit efficace, vous devez tenir compte des conseils suivants :

• Structurez l’introduction de manière claire avec des paragraphes bien distincts.
• Utilisez un style académique ou plus spécialisé si le texte est destiné à des experts.
• Si vous souhaitez rédiger des essais destinés au grand public, utilisez un langage qui, bien que formel, peut être compris sans avoir besoin d’utiliser des dictionnaires spécialisés.
• Si vous devez utiliser un terme spécifique, expliquez-le de façon claire en utilisant des annotations ou des exemples illustratifs.

Vous devez également expliquer le sujet dont vous voulez parler, et en même temps, mettre le lecteur en situation. Pour donner un exemple d’introduction d’un essai universitaire , dire que « Les téléphones portables détruisent les relations sociales, et je suis contre », est différent que de commencer votre texte comme ceci :

"Aujourd’hui, en raison des grands changements sociaux et technologiques que nous vivons, nos relations interpersonnelles ont été diminuées par l’utilisation des téléphones portables et, par conséquent, des réseaux sociaux. Nous utilisons tous ces canaux de communications virtuels pour créer de nouvelles amitiés, et même des relations amoureuses. Viendra-t-il un moment où les progrès technologiques finiront par annuler, voire transformer les sentiments des êtres humains ? Perdrons-nous nos aptitudes innées à la communication et à la vie sociale au profit d’un monde exclusivement virtuel ?".

L’idée est de donner au lecteur la possibilité de se mettre dans le contexte et, si possible, de s’identifier ou de comprendre le problème, l’idée ou la théorie dont vous allez parler ensuite. N'hésitez pas à consulter cet autre article de toutCOMMENT, dans lequel nous vous expliquons Comment écrire un essai argumenté .

Dans le cas des essais (aussi appelés mémoires, thèses…) universitaires ou académiques, toute introduction commence par ce que l’on appelle une « hypothèse ». En suivant cette hypothèse, et l’utilisant comme fil conducteur, vous allez développer et argumenter l’ensemble de votre essai.

Contrairement aux essais non-universitaires, il est impératif de connaître en profondeur le sujet que vous voulez développer dans un essai universitaire, ainsi que les opinions d’autres auteurs sur ce sujet. Pour cela, il est essentiel que vous fassiez des recherches afin de maîtriser votre sujet. Par exemple, si vous décidez de faire un essai sur l’astronomie, alors que vos connaissances sur le sujet sont très limitées, cela n’a aucun sens.

Il est tout aussi important de savoir comment commencer une introduction pour un essai, que de savoir ce que vous ne devez jamais mettre dans cette partie. Trop d’informations dès le début du texte épuiseront l’intérêt du lecteur avant qu’il ne tourne la première page. Par conséquent, n’incluez jamais les éléments suivants dans votre introduction :

• Les conclusions : les conclusions de votre essai doivent être comme la cerise sur le gâteau. Il faut toujours les laisser pour la fin. Cet article sur Comment faire une conclusion de dissertation pourrait vous intéresser.
• Propositions ou solutions aux problèmes posés : personne ne connaît la solution avant de savoir quel est le problème, donc ne soyez pas pressé et ne prenez pas d’avance sur les faits.

Maintenant que vous savez ce qu’est l’introduction d’un essai et comment en faire une, vous devez apprendre à la développer correctement. La rédaction d’un essai est une tâche minutieuse qui demande du travail et des efforts, mais c’est un travail gratifiant qui vous permet d’exprimer vos idées et de vous exposer à vos lecteurs. Si vous envisagez de rédiger un essai, il est important, en plus de la motivation, de posséder les outils suivants :

• Compétences rédactionnelles : Elles sont essentielles pour exprimer et argumenter ce que vous voulez transmettre au public. Oubliez les monosyllabes et les phrases courtes, la lecture d’un essai doit fournir des informations et des opinions, mais la lecture doit également être une action satisfaisante et enrichissante.
• Une bonne orthographe : avant de commencer à écrire, vous devez apprendre l’orthographe. Cet article qui vous donne des astuces pour écrire sans faire de fautes d'orthographe pourrait peut-être vous aider.
• Esprit de synthèse : il est important de développer le sujet et vos opinions, mais si vous allez trop loin dans vos explications et que vous vous égarez, le lecteur risque de se désintéresser et d’arrêter de lire.
• Compétences de communication orale : bien sûr, ce n’est pas toujours nécessaire, mais la plupart des essais universitaires comportent une présentation orale au cours de laquelle l’auteur doit présenter son travail et ses résultats devant un public. Si vous pensez que vous n’êtes pas un grand orateur, cet article sur Comment améliorer sa diction peut vous aider, et si vous souhaitez des informations pour vous aider à préparer votre présentation orale, n'hésitez pas à consulter cet article : Comment défendre ma thèse avec succès .

Pour faire un essai, et cela concerne également la façon de rédiger un essai universitaire, il est recommandé de suivre la structure suivante :

• L’introduction : qu’il s’agisse d’exposer une hypothèse sur les rayons gamma, ou vos idées sur la perte du romantisme dans le football au profit de l’argent et des grands médias, le début de votre essai doit être accrocheur pour ainsi capter l’attention des lecteurs.
• Le développement et les ressources : dans cette partie, vous développerez vos idées, vous argumenterez et défendrez votre position, et vous essaierez de convaincre les lecteurs grâce au matériel dont vous disposez. Si votre essai est à but universitaire, vos meilleurs atouts seront les statistiques, les données, les citations bibliographiques, les exemples (tous prouvés par des références bibliographiques). Si votre essai n’est pas académique et est plus informel, vous pouvez le développer à travers des exemples ou des situations analysés de votre point de vue.
• La conclusion : la conclusion doit être la touche finale ou, comme nous l’avons dit, la cerise sur le gâteau. Dans cette partie, vous résumerez, renforcerez et réaffirmerez les opinions exprimées tout au long du texte, en les montrant au lecteur de manière élaborée et convaincante. Attention : il ne s’agit pas de répéter toujours la même chose, mais de proposer au lecteur votre pourquoi du comment et vos conclusions.
• La bibliographie : cette partie est essentielle dans tout essai universitaire, et, presque toujours, dans le reste des essais. Personne ne naît enseignant et tous les écrivains, aussi observateurs, intelligents et réfléchis soient-ils, ont besoin de s’abreuver à la fontaine de connaissances des autres auteurs. Essayez toujours de donner du crédit aux auteurs dont les idées vous ont inspiré. Cela ne fera que renforcer l’importance et la maîtrise de votre travail.

Ecrire un essai est une tâche gratifiante qui vous permettra de mieux vous connaître, et de montrer au monde qui vous êtes ! Bon courage !

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Need to defend your opinion on an issue? Argumentative essays are one of the most popular types of essays you’ll write in school. They combine persuasive arguments with fact-based research, and, when done well, can be powerful tools for making someone agree with your point of view. If you’re struggling to write an argumentative essay or just want to learn more about them, seeing examples can be a big help.

After giving an overview of this type of essay, we provide three argumentative essay examples. After each essay, we explain in-depth how the essay was structured, what worked, and where the essay could be improved. We end with tips for making your own argumentative essay as strong as possible.

What Is an Argumentative Essay?

An argumentative essay is an essay that uses evidence and facts to support the claim it’s making. Its purpose is to persuade the reader to agree with the argument being made.

A good argumentative essay will use facts and evidence to support the argument, rather than just the author’s thoughts and opinions. For example, say you wanted to write an argumentative essay stating that Charleston, SC is a great destination for families. You couldn’t just say that it’s a great place because you took your family there and enjoyed it. For it to be an argumentative essay, you need to have facts and data to support your argument, such as the number of child-friendly attractions in Charleston, special deals you can get with kids, and surveys of people who visited Charleston as a family and enjoyed it. The first argument is based entirely on feelings, whereas the second is based on evidence that can be proven.

The standard five paragraph format is common, but not required, for argumentative essays. These essays typically follow one of two formats: the Toulmin model or the Rogerian model.

• The Toulmin model is the most common. It begins with an introduction, follows with a thesis/claim, and gives data and evidence to support that claim. This style of essay also includes rebuttals of counterarguments.
• The Rogerian model analyzes two sides of an argument and reaches a conclusion after weighing the strengths and weaknesses of each.

3 Good Argumentative Essay Examples + Analysis

Below are three examples of argumentative essays, written by yours truly in my school days, as well as analysis of what each did well and where it could be improved.

Argumentative Essay Example 1

Proponents of this idea state that it will save local cities and towns money because libraries are expensive to maintain. They also believe it will encourage more people to read because they won’t have to travel to a library to get a book; they can simply click on what they want to read and read it from wherever they are. They could also access more materials because libraries won’t have to buy physical copies of books; they can simply rent out as many digital copies as they need.

However, it would be a serious mistake to replace libraries with tablets. First, digital books and resources are associated with less learning and more problems than print resources. A study done on tablet vs book reading found that people read 20-30% slower on tablets, retain 20% less information, and understand 10% less of what they read compared to people who read the same information in print. Additionally, staring too long at a screen has been shown to cause numerous health problems, including blurred vision, dizziness, dry eyes, headaches, and eye strain, at much higher instances than reading print does. People who use tablets and mobile devices excessively also have a higher incidence of more serious health issues such as fibromyalgia, shoulder and back pain, carpal tunnel syndrome, and muscle strain. I know that whenever I read from my e-reader for too long, my eyes begin to feel tired and my neck hurts. We should not add to these problems by giving people, especially young people, more reasons to look at screens.

Second, it is incredibly narrow-minded to assume that the only service libraries offer is book lending. Libraries have a multitude of benefits, and many are only available if the library has a physical location. Some of these benefits include acting as a quiet study space, giving people a way to converse with their neighbors, holding classes on a variety of topics, providing jobs, answering patron questions, and keeping the community connected. One neighborhood found that, after a local library instituted community events such as play times for toddlers and parents, job fairs for teenagers, and meeting spaces for senior citizens, over a third of residents reported feeling more connected to their community. Similarly, a Pew survey conducted in 2015 found that nearly two-thirds of American adults feel that closing their local library would have a major impact on their community. People see libraries as a way to connect with others and get their questions answered, benefits tablets can’t offer nearly as well or as easily.

While replacing libraries with tablets may seem like a simple solution, it would encourage people to spend even more time looking at digital screens, despite the myriad issues surrounding them. It would also end access to many of the benefits of libraries that people have come to rely on. In many areas, libraries are such an important part of the community network that they could never be replaced by a simple object.

The author begins by giving an overview of the counter-argument, then the thesis appears as the first sentence in the third paragraph. The essay then spends the rest of the paper dismantling the counter argument and showing why readers should believe the other side.

What this essay does well:

• Although it’s a bit unusual to have the thesis appear fairly far into the essay, it works because, once the thesis is stated, the rest of the essay focuses on supporting it since the counter-argument has already been discussed earlier in the paper.
• This essay includes numerous facts and cites studies to support its case. By having specific data to rely on, the author’s argument is stronger and readers will be more inclined to agree with it.
• For every argument the other side makes, the author makes sure to refute it and follow up with why her opinion is the stronger one. In order to make a strong argument, it’s important to dismantle the other side, which this essay does this by making the author's view appear stronger.
• This is a shorter paper, and if it needed to be expanded to meet length requirements, it could include more examples and go more into depth with them, such as by explaining specific cases where people benefited from local libraries.
• Additionally, while the paper uses lots of data, the author also mentions their own experience with using tablets. This should be removed since argumentative essays focus on facts and data to support an argument, not the author’s own opinion or experiences. Replacing that with more data on health issues associated with screen time would strengthen the essay.
• Some of the points made aren't completely accurate , particularly the one about digital books being cheaper. It actually often costs a library more money to rent out numerous digital copies of a book compared to buying a single physical copy. Make sure in your own essay you thoroughly research each of the points and rebuttals you make, otherwise you'll look like you don't know the issue that well.

Argumentative Essay Example 2

There are multiple drugs available to treat malaria, and many of them work well and save lives, but malaria eradication programs that focus too much on them and not enough on prevention haven’t seen long-term success in Sub-Saharan Africa. A major program to combat malaria was WHO’s Global Malaria Eradication Programme. Started in 1955, it had a goal of eliminating malaria in Africa within the next ten years. Based upon previously successful programs in Brazil and the United States, the program focused mainly on vector control. This included widely distributing chloroquine and spraying large amounts of DDT. More than one billion dollars was spent trying to abolish malaria. However, the program suffered from many problems and in 1969, WHO was forced to admit that the program had not succeeded in eradicating malaria. The number of people in Sub-Saharan Africa who contracted malaria as well as the number of malaria deaths had actually increased over 10% during the time the program was active.

One of the major reasons for the failure of the project was that it set uniform strategies and policies. By failing to consider variations between governments, geography, and infrastructure, the program was not nearly as successful as it could have been. Sub-Saharan Africa has neither the money nor the infrastructure to support such an elaborate program, and it couldn’t be run the way it was meant to. Most African countries don't have the resources to send all their people to doctors and get shots, nor can they afford to clear wetlands or other malaria prone areas. The continent’s spending per person for eradicating malaria was just a quarter of what Brazil spent. Sub-Saharan Africa simply can’t rely on a plan that requires more money, infrastructure, and expertise than they have to spare.

Additionally, the widespread use of chloroquine has created drug resistant parasites which are now plaguing Sub-Saharan Africa. Because chloroquine was used widely but inconsistently, mosquitoes developed resistance, and chloroquine is now nearly completely ineffective in Sub-Saharan Africa, with over 95% of mosquitoes resistant to it. As a result, newer, more expensive drugs need to be used to prevent and treat malaria, which further drives up the cost of malaria treatment for a region that can ill afford it.

Instead of developing plans to treat malaria after the infection has incurred, programs should focus on preventing infection from occurring in the first place. Not only is this plan cheaper and more effective, reducing the number of people who contract malaria also reduces loss of work/school days which can further bring down the productivity of the region.

One of the cheapest and most effective ways of preventing malaria is to implement insecticide-treated bed nets (ITNs).  These nets provide a protective barrier around the person or people using them. While untreated bed nets are still helpful, those treated with insecticides are much more useful because they stop mosquitoes from biting people through the nets, and they help reduce mosquito populations in a community, thus helping people who don’t even own bed nets.  Bed nets are also very effective because most mosquito bites occur while the person is sleeping, so bed nets would be able to drastically reduce the number of transmissions during the night. In fact, transmission of malaria can be reduced by as much as 90% in areas where the use of ITNs is widespread. Because money is so scarce in Sub-Saharan Africa, the low cost is a great benefit and a major reason why the program is so successful. Bed nets cost roughly 2 USD to make, last several years, and can protect two adults. Studies have shown that, for every 100-1000 more nets are being used, one less child dies of malaria. With an estimated 300 million people in Africa not being protected by mosquito nets, there’s the potential to save three million lives by spending just a few dollars per person.

Reducing the number of people who contract malaria would also reduce poverty levels in Africa significantly, thus improving other aspects of society like education levels and the economy. Vector control is more effective than treatment strategies because it means fewer people are getting sick. When fewer people get sick, the working population is stronger as a whole because people are not put out of work from malaria, nor are they caring for sick relatives. Malaria-afflicted families can typically only harvest 40% of the crops that healthy families can harvest. Additionally, a family with members who have malaria spends roughly a quarter of its income treatment, not including the loss of work they also must deal with due to the illness. It’s estimated that malaria costs Africa 12 billion USD in lost income every year. A strong working population creates a stronger economy, which Sub-Saharan Africa is in desperate need of.  

This essay begins with an introduction, which ends with the thesis (that malaria eradication plans in Sub-Saharan Africa should focus on prevention rather than treatment). The first part of the essay lays out why the counter argument (treatment rather than prevention) is not as effective, and the second part of the essay focuses on why prevention of malaria is the better path to take.

• The thesis appears early, is stated clearly, and is supported throughout the rest of the essay. This makes the argument clear for readers to understand and follow throughout the essay.
• There’s lots of solid research in this essay, including specific programs that were conducted and how successful they were, as well as specific data mentioned throughout. This evidence helps strengthen the author’s argument.
• The author makes a case for using expanding bed net use over waiting until malaria occurs and beginning treatment, but not much of a plan is given for how the bed nets would be distributed or how to ensure they’re being used properly. By going more into detail of what she believes should be done, the author would be making a stronger argument.
• The introduction of the essay does a good job of laying out the seriousness of the problem, but the conclusion is short and abrupt. Expanding it into its own paragraph would give the author a final way to convince readers of her side of the argument.

Argumentative Essay Example 3

There are many ways payments could work. They could be in the form of a free-market approach, where athletes are able to earn whatever the market is willing to pay them, it could be a set amount of money per athlete, or student athletes could earn income from endorsements, autographs, and control of their likeness, similar to the way top Olympians earn money.

Proponents of the idea believe that, because college athletes are the ones who are training, participating in games, and bringing in audiences, they should receive some sort of compensation for their work. If there were no college athletes, the NCAA wouldn’t exist, college coaches wouldn’t receive there (sometimes very high) salaries, and brands like Nike couldn’t profit from college sports. In fact, the NCAA brings in roughly $1 billion in revenue a year, but college athletes don’t receive any of that money in the form of a paycheck. Additionally, people who believe college athletes should be paid state that paying college athletes will actually encourage them to remain in college longer and not turn pro as quickly, either by giving them a way to begin earning money in college or requiring them to sign a contract stating they’ll stay at the university for a certain number of years while making an agreed-upon salary.  

Supporters of this idea point to Zion Williamson, the Duke basketball superstar, who, during his freshman year, sustained a serious knee injury. Many argued that, even if he enjoyed playing for Duke, it wasn’t worth risking another injury and ending his professional career before it even began for a program that wasn’t paying him. Williamson seems to have agreed with them and declared his eligibility for the NCAA draft later that year. If he was being paid, he may have stayed at Duke longer. In fact, roughly a third of student athletes surveyed stated that receiving a salary while in college would make them “strongly consider” remaining collegiate athletes longer before turning pro.

Paying athletes could also stop the recruitment scandals that have plagued the NCAA. In 2018, the NCAA stripped the University of Louisville's men's basketball team of its 2013 national championship title because it was discovered coaches were using sex workers to entice recruits to join the team. There have been dozens of other recruitment scandals where college athletes and recruits have been bribed with anything from having their grades changed, to getting free cars, to being straight out bribed. By paying college athletes and putting their salaries out in the open, the NCAA could end the illegal and underhanded ways some schools and coaches try to entice athletes to join.

People who argue against the idea of paying college athletes believe the practice could be disastrous for college sports. By paying athletes, they argue, they’d turn college sports into a bidding war, where only the richest schools could afford top athletes, and the majority of schools would be shut out from developing a talented team (though some argue this already happens because the best players often go to the most established college sports programs, who typically pay their coaches millions of dollars per year). It could also ruin the tight camaraderie of many college teams if players become jealous that certain teammates are making more money than they are.

They also argue that paying college athletes actually means only a small fraction would make significant money. Out of the 350 Division I athletic departments, fewer than a dozen earn any money. Nearly all the money the NCAA makes comes from men’s football and basketball, so paying college athletes would make a small group of men--who likely will be signed to pro teams and begin making millions immediately out of college--rich at the expense of other players.

Those against paying college athletes also believe that the athletes are receiving enough benefits already. The top athletes already receive scholarships that are worth tens of thousands per year, they receive free food/housing/textbooks, have access to top medical care if they are injured, receive top coaching, get travel perks and free gear, and can use their time in college as a way to capture the attention of professional recruiters. No other college students receive anywhere near as much from their schools.

People on this side also point out that, while the NCAA brings in a massive amount of money each year, it is still a non-profit organization. How? Because over 95% of those profits are redistributed to its members’ institutions in the form of scholarships, grants, conferences, support for Division II and Division III teams, and educational programs. Taking away a significant part of that revenue would hurt smaller programs that rely on that money to keep running.

While both sides have good points, it’s clear that the negatives of paying college athletes far outweigh the positives. College athletes spend a significant amount of time and energy playing for their school, but they are compensated for it by the scholarships and perks they receive. Adding a salary to that would result in a college athletic system where only a small handful of athletes (those likely to become millionaires in the professional leagues) are paid by a handful of schools who enter bidding wars to recruit them, while the majority of student athletics and college athletic programs suffer or even shut down for lack of money. Continuing to offer the current level of benefits to student athletes makes it possible for as many people to benefit from and enjoy college sports as possible.

This argumentative essay follows the Rogerian model. It discusses each side, first laying out multiple reasons people believe student athletes should be paid, then discussing reasons why the athletes shouldn’t be paid. It ends by stating that college athletes shouldn’t be paid by arguing that paying them would destroy college athletics programs and cause them to have many of the issues professional sports leagues have.

• Both sides of the argument are well developed, with multiple reasons why people agree with each side. It allows readers to get a full view of the argument and its nuances.
• Certain statements on both sides are directly rebuffed in order to show where the strengths and weaknesses of each side lie and give a more complete and sophisticated look at the argument.
• Using the Rogerian model can be tricky because oftentimes you don’t explicitly state your argument until the end of the paper. Here, the thesis doesn’t appear until the first sentence of the final paragraph. That doesn’t give readers a lot of time to be convinced that your argument is the right one, compared to a paper where the thesis is stated in the beginning and then supported throughout the paper. This paper could be strengthened if the final paragraph was expanded to more fully explain why the author supports the view, or if the paper had made it clearer that paying athletes was the weaker argument throughout.

3 Tips for Writing a Good Argumentative Essay

Now that you’ve seen examples of what good argumentative essay samples look like, follow these three tips when crafting your own essay.

#1: Make Your Thesis Crystal Clear

The thesis is the key to your argumentative essay; if it isn’t clear or readers can’t find it easily, your entire essay will be weak as a result. Always make sure that your thesis statement is easy to find. The typical spot for it is the final sentence of the introduction paragraph, but if it doesn’t fit in that spot for your essay, try to at least put it as the first or last sentence of a different paragraph so it stands out more.

Also make sure that your thesis makes clear what side of the argument you’re on. After you’ve written it, it’s a great idea to show your thesis to a couple different people--classmates are great for this. Just by reading your thesis they should be able to understand what point you’ll be trying to make with the rest of your essay.

#2: Show Why the Other Side Is Weak

When writing your essay, you may be tempted to ignore the other side of the argument and just focus on your side, but don’t do this. The best argumentative essays really tear apart the other side to show why readers shouldn’t believe it. Before you begin writing your essay, research what the other side believes, and what their strongest points are. Then, in your essay, be sure to mention each of these and use evidence to explain why they’re incorrect/weak arguments. That’ll make your essay much more effective than if you only focused on your side of the argument.

#3: Use Evidence to Support Your Side

Remember, an essay can’t be an argumentative essay if it doesn’t support its argument with evidence. For every point you make, make sure you have facts to back it up. Some examples are previous studies done on the topic, surveys of large groups of people, data points, etc. There should be lots of numbers in your argumentative essay that support your side of the argument. This will make your essay much stronger compared to only relying on your own opinions to support your argument.

Summary: Argumentative Essay Sample

Argumentative essays are persuasive essays that use facts and evidence to support their side of the argument. Most argumentative essays follow either the Toulmin model or the Rogerian model. By reading good argumentative essay examples, you can learn how to develop your essay and provide enough support to make readers agree with your opinion. When writing your essay, remember to always make your thesis clear, show where the other side is weak, and back up your opinion with data and evidence.

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Essay Writing

Writing an essay isn’t exactly the most entertaining thing to do with your time. Correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling are essential writing skills to be observed in order to create a good essay. Some may even consider this a dreadful task to be done, spending hours on end just to form something worth reading.

Although for others, it’s easy as pie. They see it as a hobby or a career path, taking on part-time jobs in freelance writing . However, the ability to write good and effective essays isn’t a skill you are born with. It is commonly developed through experience and constant practice.

What is Essay Writing? Essay writing is the process of creating a structured piece of writing that presents ideas, arguments, or reflections on a specific topic. It’s a common form of academic assignment, often used in schools and universities to assess a student’s understanding and expression of various subjects. Essay writing helps students develop critical thinking and writing skills, enabling them to articulate their thoughts and ideas clearly and logically.

Structure/Format of Essay Writing

An essay typically starts with an introduction that introduces the topic and states the main point or thesis. The body, consisting of several paragraphs, each focuses on a specific idea or argument supporting the thesis, with evidence or examples. The essay concludes with a summary that reiterates the main points and restates the thesis, leaving the reader with a final thought. This structure helps organize ideas clearly and logically, making the essay easy to follow and understand.

Introduction

An introduction in essay writing serves as the opening paragraph that introduces the topic, provides context, and outlines the essay’s purpose, setting the stage for the main arguments and thesis statement.

Purpose: Introduces the topic, sets the tone, and presents the thesis statement. Key Elements: Engaging opening sentence, background information, thesis statement.

Body Paragraphs

A body paragraph is a section that presents a single main idea, supports it with evidence, and elaborates on it to strengthen the essay’s argument and structure.

Purpose: To develop and support the thesis statement. Structure: Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea or argument. Key Elements: Topic Sentence, Supporting Details and Analysis

A conclusion in essay writing summarizes key points, restates the thesis, and provides a final perspective, leaving a lasting impression.

Purpose: Summarizes the essay and reinforces the thesis statement. Key Elements: Summary of Main Points, Restatement of Thesis and Final Thoughts

Essay Writing Topics, Ideas with Samples

1. the impact of technology on society.

Introduction: Technology has become an integral part of our daily lives, revolutionizing the way we communicate, work, and live. This essay explores the profound impact of technology on society, delving into both the positive advancements and the challenges it presents. Body: 1. Advancements in Communication: Technology has transformed communication, breaking down geographical barriers and connecting people across the globe. Social media platforms, messaging apps, and video conferencing have revolutionized how we interact, fostering global communities and enabling instant information exchange. 2. Economic Transformation: The rise of the internet and e-commerce has reshaped the business landscape. Online marketplaces, digital payment systems, and automation have streamlined transactions and enhanced efficiency. However, the digital divide remains a concern, with disparities in access and opportunities between different socioeconomic groups. 3. Education and Learning: Technology has revolutionized education, providing access to a vast array of information and online courses. E-learning platforms offer flexible learning opportunities, making education more accessible to diverse learners. However, challenges such as information overload and the need for digital literacy skills persist. 4. Healthcare Innovations: Technological advancements in healthcare have led to improved diagnostics, treatment options, and patient care. Telemedicine facilitates remote consultations, enhancing healthcare accessibility. Artificial intelligence and data analytics have revolutionized medical research and personalized medicine, leading to breakthroughs in various fields. 5. Social Impact and Relationships: The pervasive use of technology has raised concerns about its impact on social relationships. While it facilitates connection, there are worries about the erosion of face-to-face interactions and the rise of online addiction. Balancing digital engagement with meaningful, in-person relationships has become a societal challenge. Conclusion: In conclusion, technology’s impact on society is multifaceted, bringing both opportunities and challenges. Embracing the benefits of technological advancements while addressing issues such as digital inequality, privacy concerns, and social disconnection is crucial. Society must navigate these complexities thoughtfully to ensure that technology continues to enhance our lives without compromising fundamental human values and connections.

2. Impact of Climate Change on Our Planet

Introduction Climate change, a critical global issue, has far-reaching impacts on our planet. It refers to significant changes in global temperatures and weather patterns over time. While climate has changed throughout Earth’s history, recent decades have seen unprecedented changes, largely attributed to human activities. This essay explores the impact of climate change on various aspects of our planet, including natural ecosystems, weather patterns, human health, and economic sectors. Impact on Natural Ecosystems One of the most visible impacts of climate change is on natural ecosystems. Rising temperatures and changing precipitation patterns are altering habitats globally. For instance, coral reefs, known as the rainforests of the sea, are experiencing widespread bleaching due to warmer oceans. Similarly, polar regions are facing melting ice, endangering species like polar bears and penguins. Forests are not immune either; increased temperatures and droughts lead to more frequent and intense wildfires, destroying vast areas and biodiversity. Weather Patterns and Extreme Events Climate change has significantly altered weather patterns, leading to more extreme and unpredictable weather events. The frequency and severity of droughts, heatwaves, hurricanes, and floods have increased. For example, hurricanes are becoming more intense due to warmer ocean waters, and rising sea levels are exacerbating coastal flooding. These extreme events not only cause immediate destruction but also long-term economic and social challenges. Human Health Concerns The impact of climate change on human health is increasingly evident. Higher temperatures contribute to heat-related illnesses and deaths. Changes in weather patterns also affect air quality, leading to respiratory issues. Furthermore, the spread of vector-borne diseases, such as malaria and dengue fever, is expected to increase as the climate warms, posing new health risks in regions previously unaffected. Economic and Social Impacts Economically, climate change affects various sectors, including agriculture, fisheries, and tourism. Changes in temperature and precipitation patterns disrupt food production, leading to food insecurity. Fisheries are impacted by ocean acidification and changing marine ecosystems, affecting livelihoods and food supplies. Additionally, tourism in areas like coastal regions and mountain ski resorts faces challenges due to changing climate conditions. Conclusion The impact of climate change on our planet is profound and multifaceted, affecting natural ecosystems, weather patterns, human health, and economic sectors. It is a global challenge that requires immediate and concerted efforts to mitigate and adapt to its effects. Addressing climate change involves reducing greenhouse gas emissions, preserving and restoring ecosystems, and developing sustainable practices. The time to act is now, to protect our planet for future generations.

3. Mental Health Awareness Among Youth

Mental health is a crucial aspect of overall well-being, especially among youth. It’s a pivotal period in life when individuals undergo significant physical, emotional, and social changes. Understanding and addressing mental health issues during these formative years are essential for fostering a healthy and productive society. Identifying Mental Health Issues in Youth Mental health issues can manifest in various ways, such as anxiety, depression, eating disorders, and behavioral problems. Often, these issues are misinterpreted as typical adolescent behavior, leading to a lack of proper intervention. Early identification of mental health issues is key to providing timely support and care. Signs of Mental Health Issues Changes in mood or behavior Withdrawal from social interactions Declining academic performance Changes in sleeping or eating patterns Expressions of hopelessness or worthlessness The Stigma Surrounding Mental Health One of the biggest challenges in addressing mental health among youth is the stigma associated with it. This stigma often leads to reluctance in seeking help and discussing mental health issues openly. Effects of Stigma Hesitation to seek help Lack of understanding from peers and adults Worsening of mental health conditions Creating a Supportive Environment Creating a supportive and understanding environment is vital in encouraging youth to speak about and seek help for their mental health issues. Strategies for Support Educating teachers and parents about mental health Implementing mental health programs in schools Providing access to counseling and psychological services Encouraging peer support groups The Role of Technology and Social Media In today’s digital age, technology and social media play a significant role in youths’ lives, impacting their mental health both positively and negatively. Impact of Digital Media: Social media can lead to issues like cyberbullying and unrealistic body image expectations. Technology can also be a tool for spreading awareness and providing access to resources. Conclusion Mental health awareness among youth is not just a necessity but an imperative for building a resilient, empathetic, and healthy society. Through education, support, and open conversations, we can empower our youth to face life’s challenges with strength and optimism. Creating an environment where mental health is prioritized and discussed openly will pave the way for a more understanding and supportive community, ensuring a brighter future for all.

4. Artificial Intelligence: Boon or Bane?

Introduction: In the realm of technology, artificial intelligence (AI) stands as a monumental innovation, reshaping how we live, work, and interact. But as with any significant technological advancement, AI’s impact on society sparks a crucial debate: Is it a boon or a bane? This essay delves into the multifaceted nature of AI, examining its benefits and challenges, ultimately aiming to provide a balanced perspective. The Boon of AI Enhancement of Efficiency and Productivity AI systems excel in processing vast amounts of data rapidly, significantly outpacing human capabilities. This trait has transformed industries by streamlining operations, from manufacturing with automated robotics to healthcare where AI aids in diagnosis and treatment planning. Innovation in Various Fields AI fosters innovation across diverse sectors. In education, personalized learning algorithms adapt to individual student needs, enhancing the learning experience. In environmental science, AI assists in climate modeling and conservation efforts, contributing to a more sustainable future. Improvement in Quality of Life AI’s impact on daily life is profound. Smart home devices offer convenience and enhanced security, while AI-driven personal assistants, like voice-activated systems, simplify tasks. Moreover, AI’s role in healthcare, from robotic surgeries to predictive diagnostics, has been life-altering for many. The Bane of AI Job Displacement Concerns One of the most significant fears surrounding AI is job displacement. Automation and AI systems could replace human roles, particularly in sectors like manufacturing and customer service, leading to unemployment and economic disparities. Ethical and Privacy Issues AI’s ability to analyze personal data raises privacy concerns. Issues like data misuse and surveillance have prompted debates on ethical guidelines and regulations. Furthermore, AI’s decision-making processes, if not transparent, can lead to ethical dilemmas in areas like law enforcement and lending. Dependency and Reduced Human Skill An over-reliance on AI could lead to a decline in critical human skills. For instance, excessive use of navigational AI may impair our natural sense of direction, and dependence on AI for decision-making could diminish our problem-solving abilities. Conclusion: AI, like any powerful tool, comes with its set of pros and cons. While it offers remarkable advancements and efficiencies, it also presents significant challenges and risks. The key lies in harnessing AI’s potential responsibly, with mindful consideration of ethical implications and a balanced approach to technology integration. By doing so, we can steer AI towards being more of a boon than a bane, ensuring it serves to enhance, rather than dictate, the course of human progress.

5. Sustainable Living and Environmental Conservation

Introduction Sustainable Living and Environmental Conservation are vital concepts in today’s world, as they focus on maintaining the health of our planet for future generations. This essay explores the importance of sustainable living and the various ways in which individuals and communities can contribute to environmental conservation. Understanding Sustainable Living Sustainable living refers to a lifestyle that attempts to reduce an individual’s or society’s use of the Earth’s natural resources. This practice advocates for: Reducing Carbon Footprint : Limiting activities that contribute to carbon emissions, such as excessive use of fossil fuels. Conserving Water : Implementing water-saving techniques like rainwater harvesting and fixing leaks. Minimizing Waste : Promoting recycling, composting, and the reduction of single-use plastics. Environmental Conservation: A Global Priority Environmental conservation involves protecting and preserving the natural world. Its significance lies in: Biodiversity Protection : Ensuring the survival of diverse species and ecosystems. Climate Change Mitigation : Addressing global warming through sustainable practices. Resource Preservation : Ensuring that natural resources are available for future generations. Implementing Sustainable Practices Adopting sustainable habits can have a profound impact. Key practices include: Energy Efficiency : Using energy-saving appliances and LED lighting. Sustainable Transportation : Favoring walking, cycling, and public transport over individual car use. Eco-Friendly Products : Choosing products with minimal environmental impact, like biodegradable packaging. Community and Global Efforts Beyond individual actions, larger scale efforts are crucial: Government Policies : Implementing regulations that promote sustainability, like renewable energy incentives. Corporate Responsibility : Encouraging businesses to adopt sustainable practices in their operations. Educational Initiatives : Raising awareness about environmental issues through education and community programs. Challenges and Future Perspectives While the journey towards sustainability presents challenges such as economic constraints and resistance to change, the future looks promising with technological advancements and increasing global awareness. It’s essential that: Innovation Continues : Developing new technologies for renewable energy and sustainable agriculture. Collaborative Efforts Increase : Fostering partnerships between governments, businesses, and communities. Sustainable Values Are Cultivated : Encouraging a cultural shift towards valuing and protecting our environment. Conclusion Sustainable living and environmental conservation are not just choices, but necessities for the health and survival of our planet. It’s a collective responsibility that requires the participation of individuals, communities, and nations. By embracing sustainable practices and advocating for environmental conservation, we can ensure a healthier, more equitable, and sustainable world for future generations.

6. The Influence of Social Media on Teenagers

In the digital age, social media has become a pivotal aspect of teenagers’ lives. Its impact is profound and multifaceted, influencing various aspects of their social, emotional, and educational development. This essay explores the positive and negative effects of social media on teenagers and suggests ways to mitigate its adverse impacts. Positive Impacts of Social Media 1. Connectivity and Socialization: Social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and Snapchat offer teenagers a space to connect with friends and family, fostering a sense of belonging and community. They can interact with peers from different parts of the world, learn about diverse cultures, and form new friendships. 2. Educational Resources: Platforms such as YouTube and educational blogs provide an abundance of learning materials. Teenagers can access tutorials, e-books, and online courses, aiding their academic growth and supplementing their school education. 3. Self-Expression and Creativity: Social media is a canvas for self-expression. Teenagers can share their thoughts, artwork, and achievements, receiving encouragement and feedback. This boosts their confidence and nurtures their creative talents. Negative Impacts of Social Media 1. Cyberbullying and Peer Pressure: The anonymity and distance provided by social media can lead to cyberbullying. Teens often face pressure to conform to certain trends or behaviors, affecting their mental health and self-esteem. 2. Distraction and Academic Decline: Excessive use of social media can become a major distraction, leading to reduced concentration and a decline in academic performance. The constant need to check notifications disrupts study routines and hinders productivity. 3. Mental Health Issues: Studies have linked prolonged social media use to mental health issues like anxiety, depression, and loneliness in teenagers. The pressure to maintain a certain image and the fear of missing out (FOMO) can be overwhelming. Mitigating the Negative Impacts 1. Educating on Digital Literacy: Schools and parents should educate teenagers about responsible social media usage. Understanding digital footprints, privacy settings, and the importance of online etiquette is crucial. 2. Encouraging Offline Interactions: Promoting real-life interactions and activities can balance online engagement. Participating in sports, clubs, and family activities helps develop social skills away from the digital world. 3. Setting Boundaries: Implementing rules on the amount of time spent on social media can be effective. Encouraging designated ‘tech-free’ times during meals or before bed can help in establishing healthy habits. Conclusion Social media’s influence on teenagers is undeniable. While it offers significant benefits in terms of connectivity, learning, and self-expression, the risks associated with cyberbullying, distraction, and mental health cannot be overlooked. By educating teenagers about the responsible use of social media and encouraging a balanced lifestyle, the negative impacts can be mitigated, harnessing its positive potential for their holistic development.

7. Equality and Diversity in the 21st Century

In the 21st century, the concepts of equality and diversity have evolved significantly, reflecting a world that is increasingly interconnected and diverse. This essay explores the importance of equality and diversity, their impact on society, and the challenges and opportunities they present in today’s global landscape. The Importance of Equality and Diversity Equality and diversity are foundational to a just and vibrant society. Equality ensures that every individual has an equal opportunity to make the most of their lives and talents. It is not only about treating individuals in the same way but also about recognizing and valuing differences to contribute and realize their full potential. Diversity, on the other hand, refers to the range of human differences, including but not limited to race, ethnicity, gender, gender identity, sexual orientation, age, social class, physical ability or attributes, religious or ethical values system, and national origin. Embracing diversity means understanding, accepting, and valuing differences between people. Impact on Society The synergy of equality and diversity has a profound impact on society. It fosters innovation and creativity by bringing together a wide range of perspectives and experiences. Organizations and societies that embrace diversity and equality tend to be more dynamic, creative, and successful. In education, a diverse and inclusive environment encourages critical thinking and exposes students to a broader range of perspectives, preparing them for global citizenship. Challenges and Opportunities Despite the clear benefits, achieving equality and diversity in the 21st century comes with challenges. Discrimination and inequality persist in many forms and settings. Stereotyping and prejudice can lead to exclusion and marginalization of certain groups. However, these challenges present opportunities. There is a growing awareness and activism around issues of inequality and discrimination. Technology and globalization have given rise to new platforms for voices advocating for change and equality. Role of Education and Policy Education plays a critical role in fostering equality and diversity. Curricula that incorporate diverse perspectives and histories can promote understanding and respect for differences. Policy-making also has a significant impact. Laws and regulations that promote equality, prevent discrimination, and protect the rights of minorities are essential for a fair society. Conclusion In conclusion, equality and diversity are not just ideals to be aspired to; they are essential components of a healthy, dynamic, and just society. The challenges in achieving these are substantial, but the opportunities they present are transformative. By embracing these principles, societies can build a foundation for a more inclusive, innovative, and equitable world.

8. The Future of Work Post-Pandemic

Introduction The COVID-19 pandemic has irreversibly transformed the landscape of work. As we transition into the post-pandemic era, it is vital to explore how these changes will continue to influence the workplace. This essay examines the emerging trends and potential future of work, considering the shifts in work culture, technology, and employee expectations. Shift to Remote and Hybrid Models One of the most significant changes is the widespread adoption of remote and hybrid work models. Companies have realized that many jobs can be done effectively from home, leading to a reevaluation of the need for physical office spaces. This shift has benefits such as reduced commute times and greater flexibility, enhancing work-life balance for employees. Increased Remote Opportunities : Companies are now more open to hiring remote employees, broadening the talent pool. Hybrid Work Environments : A blend of in-office and remote work is becoming the norm, offering flexibility and maintaining team collaboration. Technological Advancements The pandemic has accelerated the adoption of technology in the workplace. From virtual meetings to cloud-based collaboration tools, technology is at the forefront of this new work era. Collaboration Tools : Platforms like Zoom, Slack, and Microsoft Teams have become indispensable for remote teamwork. Artificial Intelligence and Automation : These technologies are streamlining processes and improving efficiency, but also raising questions about job security and skill requirements. Changing Employee Expectations Employees’ priorities and expectations have evolved, leading to a shift in workplace dynamics. Emphasis on Well-being : Workers are now more focused on mental health and work-life balance. Desire for Meaningful Work : There is a growing trend towards seeking work that is fulfilling and aligns with personal values. Challenges and Opportunities This new era of work is not without its challenges. Issues such as digital inequality, maintaining company culture, and managing remote teams effectively are at the forefront. However, these challenges also present opportunities for innovation and growth. Inclusive and Diverse Workplaces : Remote work allows for a more diverse workforce, but it requires deliberate efforts to ensure inclusivity. Sustainable Practices : The reduction in commuting and office usage can contribute to environmental sustainability. Conclusion The post-pandemic future of work is characterized by flexibility, technological integration, and a new set of employee expectations. While navigating this landscape presents challenges, it also offers opportunities for creating more inclusive, efficient, and fulfilling work environments. As we move forward, it is crucial for both employers and employees to adapt and embrace these changes to thrive in the evolving world of work.

9. Space Exploration and Its Importance

Space exploration , a journey into the unknown, the endless cosmos, holds a significant place in the advancement of human knowledge and technology. Over the years, exploring space has not only fueled our imagination but also brought about groundbreaking discoveries and innovations. This essay delves into the importance of space exploration, highlighting its impact on science, technology, and humanity. Unlocking the Mysteries of the Universe Space exploration allows us to understand the cosmos beyond our planet. Through missions like the Hubble Space Telescope and the Mars rovers, we have gained invaluable insights into the formation of galaxies, the lifecycle of stars, and the possibility of life on other planets. These discoveries not only satisfy our natural curiosity but also enhance our understanding of Earth’s place in the universe. Advancing Scientific Knowledge and Innovation The pursuit of space exploration has led to significant technological advancements. Innovations developed for space missions often find applications on Earth. For instance, satellite technology, essential for GPS and weather forecasting, was born out of space research. Similarly, advancements in materials science, robotics, and computer technology can all trace their roots back to space exploration. Inspiring Future Generations Space exploration stands as a testament to human ingenuity and perseverance. It inspires young minds to pursue careers in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM). The achievements of astronauts and the allure of exploring the unknown ignite the imagination of students, encouraging them to dream big and push the boundaries of what is possible. Fostering International Collaboration Space missions often require global cooperation, uniting countries in a common goal. International space stations and joint missions demonstrate how collaboration can transcend geopolitical boundaries, fostering peace and mutual understanding among nations. This cooperation in space exploration serves as a model for addressing other global challenges. Preparing for Future Challenges Understanding celestial phenomena like asteroids and solar flares is crucial for protecting Earth. Space exploration equips us with the knowledge and tools to predict and mitigate potential threats from space. Moreover, exploring celestial bodies like Mars or the Moon could pave the way for future colonization, ensuring the long-term survival of humanity. Economic Benefits Investing in space exploration has significant economic returns. It stimulates industries related to aerospace, engineering, and research, creating jobs and boosting economic growth. The technology developed often leads to new products and services, further enhancing economic development. Conclusion Space exploration is not just about reaching new frontiers but about the benefits it brings to life on Earth. It enriches our understanding of the universe, drives technological innovation, inspires future generations, fosters international cooperation, prepares us for future challenges, and stimulates economic growth. The journey into space, therefore, is not an optional pursuit but a necessary endeavor for the advancement and well-being of humanity.

10. Cultural Heritage and Its Preservation

Cultural heritage encompasses the traditions, values, and historical sites that are inherited from past generations. It is a reflection of a community’s identity and plays a crucial role in shaping the future. This essay explores the significance of cultural heritage and the importance of its preservation. The Essence of Cultural Heritage Cultural heritage is not just about historical artifacts and monuments. It includes intangible aspects like folklore, music, language, and rituals. These elements provide a sense of belonging and continuity in a rapidly changing world. For instance, traditional festivals and ceremonies are more than just events; they are the carriers of stories, beliefs, and customs. Threats to Cultural Heritage Cultural heritage faces numerous threats, including urbanization, environmental degradation, and globalization. Urban development often leads to the destruction of historical sites. Pollution can damage irreplaceable artifacts, and the global spread of a uniform culture threatens the uniqueness of local customs and traditions. Conflict and war also pose significant risks to cultural heritage, as seen in the destruction of historical sites in various parts of the world. Importance of Preservation Preserving cultural heritage is essential for maintaining community identity and fostering an understanding of our history. It aids in the retention of cultural diversity in a globalized world. For example, preserving indigenous languages helps maintain unique worldviews and knowledge systems. Methods of Preservation Digital Preservation: Technological advancements enable the digital preservation of cultural artifacts. Digitizing documents, artworks, and music ensures their longevity and accessibility to future generations. Legal Protections: Implementing laws to protect cultural heritage sites and practices is crucial. These laws can prevent unauthorized alterations to historical sites and safeguard intangible cultural elements. Community Engagement: Involving local communities in preservation efforts ensures that practices and sites are maintained in a culturally respectful and sustainable manner. Education and Awareness: Educating the public about the value of cultural heritage can foster a sense of responsibility towards preservation. School curricula that include local history and cultural studies can inspire younger generations to appreciate and preserve their cultural heritage. Conclusion Cultural heritage is a vital link to our past and a gift to our future. Its preservation requires collaborative efforts between governments, communities, and individuals. By valuing and protecting our cultural heritage, we ensure that the richness of our past continues to enlighten our present and guide our future.

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Exemple d'essai argumentatif sur le rapport parent-enfant (250 mots) - dalf c1, comme vous savez, la production écrite est une épreuve en deux parties . premièrement, on vous demandera de rédiger une synthèse de 1000 mots à partir de deux ou plusieurs documents. deuxièmement, vous devrez rédiger un essai argumentatif . vous aurez 2h30 pour terminer l'épreuve..

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salut! tu as un example pour le C2. Merci en avance.

Bonjour, il ne fallait pas mettre à la 1 personne?

Merci compris

Excellent travail, En effet, veuillez vous faire un exemple d'essai argumentatif en vue du DELF B2 S.V.P. D'avance merci,

Beau travail. Merci beaucoup

Merci beaucoup, dans exactement deux jours je vais subir le Dalf C1 . Mais sans vous cacher vous en etes responsable en partie de ma bonne preparation. merci encore...

simplement ;splendide .merci du fond du cœur.

En début de votre exposé, vous utilisez "qui" pour un sujet pluriel "les enfants"

En quoi cette texte est en essai

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Bonjour, J'ai bien lu un exemple très pertinent sur la préparation du DALF C1,c'est clair et intéressant. Je vous remercie.Mais si vous le permettez, j'ai une question à poser: Le titre est obligatoire? J'attends impatiemment votre votre réponse. N.B: Je préparerai mon examen DALF C2 au mois de novembre prochain. Bien à vous.

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Je suis ici pour témoigner de la façon dont ce puissant lanceur de sorts appelé Dr Padman m'a aidé à réparer ma relation. J'ai eu le cœur brisé quand mon amant m'a dit qu'il n'était plus intéressé à m'épouser parce qu'une autre dame avait utilisé une magie noire sur lui. J'ai pleuré et sangloté tous les jours, jusqu'à ce que ça devienne si grave que j'ai contacté Internet pour obtenir de l'aide, c'est alors que j'ai lu une critique sur l'excellent travail du Dr Padman, puis je l'ai contacté pour obtenir de l'aide pour retrouver mon amour et ma vie. , il m'a aidé à lancer un puissant sortilège d'amour et à ma plus grande surprise après 24 heures passées à faire le sortilège d'amour, mon amant est revenu sur ses genoux en me suppliant de lui pardonner.Nous sommes maintenant mariés heureux et tous nos remerciements vont au Dr Padman Wonders pour son aide me sauver ma relation, vous pouvez contacter le Dr padman par e-mail [email protected] ou [email protected] Site Web: https://padmanspell.com/index-3.html ou WhatsApp 19492293867

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Je suis ici pour témoigner de la façon dont ce puissant lanceur de sorts appelé Dr. Ogala m'a aidé à améliorer ma relation. J'ai eu le cœur brisé quand mon amant m'a dit qu'il n'était plus intéressé à m'épouser parce qu'une autre dame avait utilisé la magie noire sur lui. J'ai pleuré et sangloté tous les jours, jusqu'à ce que ça devienne si grave que j'ai contacté Internet pour obtenir de l'aide, c'est alors que j'ai lu une critique sur le Dr Ogala, puis je l'ai contacté pour obtenir de l'aide pour retrouver mon amour et ma vie. , il m'a aidé à lancer un puissant sortilège d'amour et à ma grande surprise après 24 heures à faire le sortilège d'amour, mon amant est revenu à genoux en me suppliant de lui pardonner. son adresse e-mail: [email protected] WhatsApp +2347049668119...

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The Common App essay prompt number six is as follows:

Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

In this prompt you are asked to describe something that you find incredibly interesting, so much so that you become completely enraptured by it. This might seem similar to the first question about an interest or identity but it’s more focused on expanding and deepening a seemingly small idea.

One example is that you could discuss an interest as simple as stars. You could describe star-gazing as a child. You counted the stars, then you recognized constellations, and now you’ve transformed that initial captivation into a deeper appreciation of the cosmos as a whole – into a love of astronomy and physics. 

Another example could be language, specifically describing how it has evolved and changed over the course of history, how it allows you to look deeper into different cultures, and how learning different languages stretches your mind.

As a final example, if you’re passionate about cooking or baking, you can use specific details by explaining in depth the intricate attention and artistry that you need to make a dish or a dessert. In particular, you can delve into why certain spices or garnishes are superior in different situations, how flavors blend well together and can be mixed creatively, or even the chemical differences between searing and grilling. 

For this common app prompt, you want to be extremely detailed. For example, instead of discussing a broad interest or topic, such as biology, talk about specific sub-topics or concepts, such as genetics or epigenetics. 

Use Sensory Imagery

Regardless of your topic, this prompt provides a great opportunity to display writing prose through elegant, specific descriptions that leverage your sensory imagery.

Describing the beauty of the night sky, the rhythms and sounds of different languages, or the scent of a crumb all shows passion and captivation in a really direct and evocative way. The key to writing this essay is answering the question of why it captivates you instead of simply saying, “I love cooking”, “I love surfing” or “I love star-gazing”. 

Play Off Your Senses

One important tip is to play off your senses by thinking about what you see, feel, smell, taste, and hear. If you’re talking about surfing, then the salty water, the weightlessness of bobbing over the waves, and the fresh air can cater to the senses. Alternatively for a less physical topic, you can elaborate on how your different senses might affect a train of thought and then use descriptions to show how deeply and vividly your mind dwells on the topic.

Well executed trains of thought or similar tactics are successful ways to convey passion for a certain topic and to answer the second part of the prompt: what or who you turn to when you want to learn more. You simply have to show how you interact with this interest via the person or the medium that you choose.

Brainstorm Your Essay

When brainstorming for this kind of essay, we suggest using a web diagram. This puts your topic that you’re passionate about in the center focus, and helps you think about the branching characteristics, themes, and concepts that are related to the idea.

Make sure to address for each branch why they engage and captivate you, as it will help you gauge the depth of the topic and whether you’ll be able to write out enough for this prompt.

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The Four Main Types of Essay | Quick Guide with Examples

Published on September 4, 2020 by Jack Caulfield . Revised on July 23, 2023.

An essay is a focused piece of writing designed to inform or persuade. There are many different types of essay, but they are often defined in four categories: argumentative, expository, narrative, and descriptive essays.

Argumentative and expository essays are focused on conveying information and making clear points, while narrative and descriptive essays are about exercising creativity and writing in an interesting way. At university level, argumentative essays are the most common type. 

In high school and college, you will also often have to write textual analysis essays, which test your skills in close reading and interpretation.

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Argumentative essays, expository essays, narrative essays, descriptive essays, textual analysis essays, other interesting articles, frequently asked questions about types of essays.

An argumentative essay presents an extended, evidence-based argument. It requires a strong thesis statement —a clearly defined stance on your topic. Your aim is to convince the reader of your thesis using evidence (such as quotations ) and analysis.

Argumentative essays test your ability to research and present your own position on a topic. This is the most common type of essay at college level—most papers you write will involve some kind of argumentation.

The essay is divided into an introduction, body, and conclusion:

• The introduction provides your topic and thesis statement
• The body presents your evidence and arguments
• The conclusion summarizes your argument and emphasizes its importance

The example below is a paragraph from the body of an argumentative essay about the effects of the internet on education. Mouse over it to learn more.

A common frustration for teachers is students’ use of Wikipedia as a source in their writing. Its prevalence among students is not exaggerated; a survey found that the vast majority of the students surveyed used Wikipedia (Head & Eisenberg, 2010). An article in The Guardian stresses a common objection to its use: “a reliance on Wikipedia can discourage students from engaging with genuine academic writing” (Coomer, 2013). Teachers are clearly not mistaken in viewing Wikipedia usage as ubiquitous among their students; but the claim that it discourages engagement with academic sources requires further investigation. This point is treated as self-evident by many teachers, but Wikipedia itself explicitly encourages students to look into other sources. Its articles often provide references to academic publications and include warning notes where citations are missing; the site’s own guidelines for research make clear that it should be used as a starting point, emphasizing that users should always “read the references and check whether they really do support what the article says” (“Wikipedia:Researching with Wikipedia,” 2020). Indeed, for many students, Wikipedia is their first encounter with the concepts of citation and referencing. The use of Wikipedia therefore has a positive side that merits deeper consideration than it often receives.

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An expository essay provides a clear, focused explanation of a topic. It doesn’t require an original argument, just a balanced and well-organized view of the topic.

Expository essays test your familiarity with a topic and your ability to organize and convey information. They are commonly assigned at high school or in exam questions at college level.

The introduction of an expository essay states your topic and provides some general background, the body presents the details, and the conclusion summarizes the information presented.

A typical body paragraph from an expository essay about the invention of the printing press is shown below. Mouse over it to learn more.

The invention of the printing press in 1440 changed this situation dramatically. Johannes Gutenberg, who had worked as a goldsmith, used his knowledge of metals in the design of the press. He made his type from an alloy of lead, tin, and antimony, whose durability allowed for the reliable production of high-quality books. This new technology allowed texts to be reproduced and disseminated on a much larger scale than was previously possible. The Gutenberg Bible appeared in the 1450s, and a large number of printing presses sprang up across the continent in the following decades. Gutenberg’s invention rapidly transformed cultural production in Europe; among other things, it would lead to the Protestant Reformation.

A narrative essay is one that tells a story. This is usually a story about a personal experience you had, but it may also be an imaginative exploration of something you have not experienced.

Narrative essays test your ability to build up a narrative in an engaging, well-structured way. They are much more personal and creative than other kinds of academic writing . Writing a personal statement for an application requires the same skills as a narrative essay.

A narrative essay isn’t strictly divided into introduction, body, and conclusion, but it should still begin by setting up the narrative and finish by expressing the point of the story—what you learned from your experience, or why it made an impression on you.

Mouse over the example below, a short narrative essay responding to the prompt “Write about an experience where you learned something about yourself,” to explore its structure.

Since elementary school, I have always favored subjects like science and math over the humanities. My instinct was always to think of these subjects as more solid and serious than classes like English. If there was no right answer, I thought, why bother? But recently I had an experience that taught me my academic interests are more flexible than I had thought: I took my first philosophy class.

Before I entered the classroom, I was skeptical. I waited outside with the other students and wondered what exactly philosophy would involve—I really had no idea. I imagined something pretty abstract: long, stilted conversations pondering the meaning of life. But what I got was something quite different.

A young man in jeans, Mr. Jones—“but you can call me Rob”—was far from the white-haired, buttoned-up old man I had half-expected. And rather than pulling us into pedantic arguments about obscure philosophical points, Rob engaged us on our level. To talk free will, we looked at our own choices. To talk ethics, we looked at dilemmas we had faced ourselves. By the end of class, I’d discovered that questions with no right answer can turn out to be the most interesting ones.

The experience has taught me to look at things a little more “philosophically”—and not just because it was a philosophy class! I learned that if I let go of my preconceptions, I can actually get a lot out of subjects I was previously dismissive of. The class taught me—in more ways than one—to look at things with an open mind.

A descriptive essay provides a detailed sensory description of something. Like narrative essays, they allow you to be more creative than most academic writing, but they are more tightly focused than narrative essays. You might describe a specific place or object, rather than telling a whole story.

Descriptive essays test your ability to use language creatively, making striking word choices to convey a memorable picture of what you’re describing.

A descriptive essay can be quite loosely structured, though it should usually begin by introducing the object of your description and end by drawing an overall picture of it. The important thing is to use careful word choices and figurative language to create an original description of your object.

Mouse over the example below, a response to the prompt “Describe a place you love to spend time in,” to learn more about descriptive essays.

On Sunday afternoons I like to spend my time in the garden behind my house. The garden is narrow but long, a corridor of green extending from the back of the house, and I sit on a lawn chair at the far end to read and relax. I am in my small peaceful paradise: the shade of the tree, the feel of the grass on my feet, the gentle activity of the fish in the pond beside me.

My cat crosses the garden nimbly and leaps onto the fence to survey it from above. From his perch he can watch over his little kingdom and keep an eye on the neighbours. He does this until the barking of next door’s dog scares him from his post and he bolts for the cat flap to govern from the safety of the kitchen.

With that, I am left alone with the fish, whose whole world is the pond by my feet. The fish explore the pond every day as if for the first time, prodding and inspecting every stone. I sometimes feel the same about sitting here in the garden; I know the place better than anyone, but whenever I return I still feel compelled to pay attention to all its details and novelties—a new bird perched in the tree, the growth of the grass, and the movement of the insects it shelters…

Sitting out in the garden, I feel serene. I feel at home. And yet I always feel there is more to discover. The bounds of my garden may be small, but there is a whole world contained within it, and it is one I will never get tired of inhabiting.

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Though every essay type tests your writing skills, some essays also test your ability to read carefully and critically. In a textual analysis essay, you don’t just present information on a topic, but closely analyze a text to explain how it achieves certain effects.

Rhetorical analysis

A rhetorical analysis looks at a persuasive text (e.g. a speech, an essay, a political cartoon) in terms of the rhetorical devices it uses, and evaluates their effectiveness.

The goal is not to state whether you agree with the author’s argument but to look at how they have constructed it.

The introduction of a rhetorical analysis presents the text, some background information, and your thesis statement; the body comprises the analysis itself; and the conclusion wraps up your analysis of the text, emphasizing its relevance to broader concerns.

The example below is from a rhetorical analysis of Martin Luther King Jr.’s “I Have a Dream” speech . Mouse over it to learn more.

King’s speech is infused with prophetic language throughout. Even before the famous “dream” part of the speech, King’s language consistently strikes a prophetic tone. He refers to the Lincoln Memorial as a “hallowed spot” and speaks of rising “from the dark and desolate valley of segregation” to “make justice a reality for all of God’s children.” The assumption of this prophetic voice constitutes the text’s strongest ethical appeal; after linking himself with political figures like Lincoln and the Founding Fathers, King’s ethos adopts a distinctly religious tone, recalling Biblical prophets and preachers of change from across history. This adds significant force to his words; standing before an audience of hundreds of thousands, he states not just what the future should be, but what it will be: “The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.” This warning is almost apocalyptic in tone, though it concludes with the positive image of the “bright day of justice.” The power of King’s rhetoric thus stems not only from the pathos of his vision of a brighter future, but from the ethos of the prophetic voice he adopts in expressing this vision.

Literary analysis

A literary analysis essay presents a close reading of a work of literature—e.g. a poem or novel—to explore the choices made by the author and how they help to convey the text’s theme. It is not simply a book report or a review, but an in-depth interpretation of the text.

Literary analysis looks at things like setting, characters, themes, and figurative language. The goal is to closely analyze what the author conveys and how.

The introduction of a literary analysis essay presents the text and background, and provides your thesis statement; the body consists of close readings of the text with quotations and analysis in support of your argument; and the conclusion emphasizes what your approach tells us about the text.

Mouse over the example below, the introduction to a literary analysis essay on Frankenstein , to learn more.

Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein is often read as a crude cautionary tale about the dangers of scientific advancement unrestrained by ethical considerations. In this reading, protagonist Victor Frankenstein is a stable representation of the callous ambition of modern science throughout the novel. This essay, however, argues that far from providing a stable image of the character, Shelley uses shifting narrative perspectives to portray Frankenstein in an increasingly negative light as the novel goes on. While he initially appears to be a naive but sympathetic idealist, after the creature’s narrative Frankenstein begins to resemble—even in his own telling—the thoughtlessly cruel figure the creature represents him as. This essay begins by exploring the positive portrayal of Frankenstein in the first volume, then moves on to the creature’s perception of him, and finally discusses the third volume’s narrative shift toward viewing Frankenstein as the creature views him.

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At high school and in composition classes at university, you’ll often be told to write a specific type of essay , but you might also just be given prompts.

Look for keywords in these prompts that suggest a certain approach: The word “explain” suggests you should write an expository essay , while the word “describe” implies a descriptive essay . An argumentative essay might be prompted with the word “assess” or “argue.”

The vast majority of essays written at university are some sort of argumentative essay . Almost all academic writing involves building up an argument, though other types of essay might be assigned in composition classes.

Essays can present arguments about all kinds of different topics. For example:

• In a literary analysis essay, you might make an argument for a specific interpretation of a text
• In a history essay, you might present an argument for the importance of a particular event
• In a politics essay, you might argue for the validity of a certain political theory

An argumentative essay tends to be a longer essay involving independent research, and aims to make an original argument about a topic. Its thesis statement makes a contentious claim that must be supported in an objective, evidence-based way.

An expository essay also aims to be objective, but it doesn’t have to make an original argument. Rather, it aims to explain something (e.g., a process or idea) in a clear, concise way. Expository essays are often shorter assignments and rely less on research.

The key difference is that a narrative essay is designed to tell a complete story, while a descriptive essay is meant to convey an intense description of a particular place, object, or concept.

Narrative and descriptive essays both allow you to write more personally and creatively than other kinds of essays , and similar writing skills can apply to both.

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Duke University is a great fit for students looking for a blend of lively student culture and academic rigor. Located in Durham, North Carolina, Duke has long been regarded as one of the most prestigious academic institutions in the country. Students are empowered to explore innovative fields of research in subjects as disparate as political science and astrophysics. Its vibrant student body cannot be overlooked, either. It’s often said that Duke students bleed blue (their school color), and basketball culture runs deep at Duke! Overall, Duke University produces graduates that are highly sought after by businesses all around the world, thanks to its large student population, distinguished professors, and varied array of resources.

Unique traditions at Duke

1. The Devil's Stomp: This occurs at the end of each academic year and is a campus-wide dance-off held in the Duke Chapel. 2. The Iron Dukes: This tradition dates back to the 1950s and is still practiced today. It is a group of students showing their loyalty to Duke athletics with creative cheers and music. 3. Vespers: Every Sunday, students and faculty meet at Duke Chapel to sing psalms and hear catholic Mass. 4. Duke Farms: This is a tradition that began in the 1930s and is still ongoing to this day. It is a program that lets Duke students connect with nature and become more sustainable. 5. Ring Dance: This is an end-of-year tradition at Duke where seniors wear their ring and celebrate the accomplishments with a formal dance.

Programs at Duke

1. DukeEngage: DukeEngage provides students with the opportunity to participate in community service projects around the world. Through this program, students gain both valuable experiences and a greater understanding of social justice issues. 2. Flipside Improv Troupe: Flipside is an entirely student-run improv comedy troupe at Duke University. Through their performances, they offer students an opportunity to explore their creativity and take a break from the stresses of school life. 3. Student Rescue Team: This volunteer organization focuses on urban preparedness through education and training. Student volunteers participate in teaching, training, and responding to emergencies. 4. Duke Debate: Duke Debate is the official debate team at Duke University and is the oldest organization on the campus. They have won numerous awards across the country and have been a driving force in cultivating public debate on issues facing society. 5. Devil’s Tale Literary Magazine: The Devil’s Tale is a literary magazine dedicated to showcasing student written works creations. The magazine accepts submissions in all genres, from stories, poems, and plays to non-fiction and visual art.

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Prompt: why duke.

I’ve always been a storyteller, whether I’m telling my own stories with creative writing, another creative’s story with theater, or a business’s story with marketing. Duke is an ideal match for me because its interdisciplinary focus would allow me to pursue a variety of avenues within storytelling.

As part of Duke’s English Department, I would explore a range of courses: seminars on Jane Austen and Grimm’s fairy tales, workshops in writing fiction and screenplays, and instruction on navigating the publishing industry. The Duke in New York program would also contribute to my learning with hands-on experience in media and entertainment. Outside of my major, the “Markets and Management” certificate would further my marketing skill set.

As part of Duke’s diverse student body, I would be an active member of Hoof’ N’ Horn, eagerly running shows as stage manager or director and collaborating on the Production Council. Editing for The Archive would build my skills in literary analysis and editing. By fully embracing the academic and extracurricular opportunities, I know I would thrive as a student and storyteller at Duke.

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