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10 Statement Of Purpose Examples: How To Wow The Admission Committees Of Fully-Funded MFA Programs With Your Personal Statement (Guide + Samples +Tips)

10 Statement Of Purpose Examples: How To Wow The Admission Committees Of Fully-Funded MFA Programs With Your Personal Statement (Guide + Samples +Tips)

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Have you been struggling to write your personal statement or SOP? Reading some good statement of purpose examples and MFA personal statement samples can make your application season easier and less stressful. Also, it helps to read practical advice by professors who have sat on MFA in Creative Writing Admissions Committees, particularly professors who know what makes a good MFA personal statement.

This article will take you through the process of writing an SOP. Attached, herein, are 10 statement of purpose examples (or 10 MFA Personal Statement examples, if you like), contributed by writers who gained admission into fully-funded MFA in Creative Writing programs. We’ve also shared tips from creative writing professors on how to write a personal statement. 

The purpose of this article is to help you write a personal statement that will wow the admission committee members in the English, Literature and Creative Writing programs you’re applying to. 

What is a Statement of Purpose or a Personal Statement?

A statement of purpose, in the context of applying to a graduate writing program, tells an admission committee about who you are, what your work focuses on, why you are applying to their program, and what you will do in the future.

Writing a statement of purpose is akin to attending an audition or an interview or a workshop . You need to stamp your suitability and prospects as best as you can.

Owing to this, a statement of purpose or personal statement should do more than what it is called. It has to show your purpose.

Before you start the process of writing your graduate school essay, take note of the following:

Focus on your Interest.

Know what you are interested in as a creative person, or what your work focuses on. For example, if you are interested in Memoir writing , Travel writing, or Speculative Fiction , or Historical fiction or Ancient Greek poetry , you should be able to write a few words regarding your approach to that area. 

successful mfa personal statement

Many writers cannot really point a finger to what they are interested in because of their fecundity. And that’s okay.

In fact, writing tutor, Daniel Galef, with his untrammeled imagination wrote in his SOP:

“It’s difficult to describe what kind of fiction I write, because I’m not sure there is a kind of fiction I write. No two stories I’ve written have been alike. One of them is alike, but none of the others are.”

Research the Programs you are Applying to.

Read widely about the programs you are applying to and note your findings systematically. There is no escaping from this exercise because you need to know about the schools of your interest. In turn, that knowledge needs to reflect on the pages of your SOP.   

This will tell the admission committee that you care about their creative writing program and that your SOP is not generic.

For instance,

  • Who is on the faculty of XYZ arts program?
  • What are their specializations?
  • Have the faculty members published any books or stories or poetry collections?
  • If yes, what works have they published?
  • What fascinates you about their English and creative writing program?
  • What are their acceptance rates of this MFA or PhD in Creative Writing Program?
  • How does their funding work? Does the MFA or PhD program provide full-funding for students who want to study creative writing? 
  • How many years will it take to complete the MFA program? Do they allow students to run an MFA and PhD joint program?
  • What is the workload like?
  • Where are they located?
  • What are your general thoughts of their Creative Writing program?

Knowing these will help you decide whether a grad school program is best for you.

This article has been broken into four parts with headings of no consequence.

(Note: The headings mean nothing. They are just to stimulate understanding. You should not break your SOP into headings. Very few, if any, creative writing programs will be impressed with a segmented statement of purpose or personal statement.)

We’ll Call The First Part ‘The Open Window’

The initial part of your SOP should make a commanding entry with the essence of your being. It should offer little windows into you, and reveal profoundly what you are about as a person, and as a creative, taking into consideration where you are from.

This is that place you afford the admission committee a brief uncensored moment about your ‘who’. It should be so transparent that they can look through it and see your world.

MFA Personal Statement Examples

One of the most transparent “window” statements I think I have heard about oneself is from Shane Patton in the movie ‘Lone Survivor’. At the tail end of his speech, Shane, while trying to join a band of war brothers, says with gusto,

example statement of purpose

Pardon the asterisks. Your SOP does not have to be Shane-Pattonesque. However, it has to have some art-mosphere. It must be written in a style and voice that are unique to you. However, your SOP should employ the ‘story approach’.

Important Questions These Statement Of Purpose Samples Address.

This guide will help you to address the following questions in your personal statement or letter of intent:

  • What kind of a storyteller or poet are you?
  • Where are you coming from?
  • How has your socialization/environment/formative years/job experience informed the way you view the world?
  • What are your motivations?
  • Also, what feeds your imaginations?
  • More importantly, what inspired you to start writing in the first place?
  • What has sustained it? 

Here, Okwudili Nebolisa gives us a perfect window statement in this sample statement of purpose. Here’s how he opens his grad school essay:

It’s one of the most insightful MFA personal statement examples I’ve read in a while.

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From the foregoing, Okwudili created a short background of himself and gave an idea why he had first chosen a path outside the art. It’s one detail many Creative Writing admission committees would be interested in.

He went further (though, not included in this article) to tell the committee how he found his way into the arms of poetry .

Here is another statement of purpose example that has a compelling window ‘personal’ statement:

Good statement of purpose example

Simply put, this MFA applicant talks about her approach to writing fiction , speaks of how it has become a tool in her hand against societal norms, mentions her writing influences, and states what draws her to them.

Note: You should be able to say who and what influences you, and clearly express the ways in which they do.

This sample statement of purpose opens with a vivid and memorable story.

examples statement of purpose grad school essay MFA Creative writing

Here’s another opening statement from another MFA personal statement example or letter of intent. It also exemplifies the important point I was trying to make. It says:

Statement of purpose sample for MFA creative writing English and Literature

We’ll call the second part ‘the Briefcase’

Here, you supply the gist of your educational experience. You may add your professional interest and inform the admission committee about relevant activities you have been engaged with recently.

Assuming you work as a content writer/creator , how has it helped your craft? The same thing applies if you work in any other endeavor outside the literary sphere.

For example, an applicant says in this MFA in creative writing personal statement sample:

PhD statement of purpose sample

Note: Non-writing related jobs and experiences are important. Think about the many ways they can give you insight about your craft. They are worth the mention in the sense that they set you apart because of the experience you must have had, and add to what your craft can gain.

Here’s how a teacher explained her experience in her MFA statement of purpose example. It can also work in a teaching statement:

sample teaching statement and SOP MFA

Going further, you may emphasize on your literary achievement and recognition here. Here’s another good example of a statement of purpose. Here’s how this MFAyer stated his/her literary achievement:

samples statement of purpose grad school MFA in Creative Writing

Note: you may say one or two things about your publishing history.

Let’s call the third part “the Knock”

You must exemplify clear-headedness here in talking about why you are seeking this degree now.

In one of the grad school statement of purpose examples we received , one MFA in Creative Writing applicant wrote:  

Letter of intent samples

Another sample statement of purpose for an MFA in Creative Writing Application put it this way:

How to write a statement of purpose examples

Write About Your Dreams, Hope and Intentions

Next is to inform the graduate committee on why you are knocking on their doors.

Are there members of the faculty you want to work with? If yes, state why. Is it something about their academic tradition or vision? Does the school’s location appeal to you? Or is it about their commitment to diversity?

You should end this part of the statement of purpose with an idea of the project you hope to write during your time on the program. This will inform the professors that you already have an idea of what kind of book your thesis will be.

It shows seriousness. Also it shows that you’re more likely to begin once you arrive. We have more statement of purpose examples to illustrate how this can be done in your MFA portfolio.

Note: Your intended project should contain the promise of presenting something fundamentally new and important to the literary world.

For example, in her statement of purpose, this MFA in Creative Writing applicant wrote:

Writing a statement of intent Grad school

Here’s an excerpt from another sample statement of purpose for a graduate school (MFA) application:

How to write a personal statement example

We’ll Call The Last Part The Telescope

Here you have to be futuristic. Talk about the big picture. What do you intend to do with the knowledge and network you would have acquired in the MFA program? 

Do you want to go on to teach creative writing professionally , (If yes, where do you have eyes one? ) Do you want to start a publishing outfit or a literary magazine ?

What other career plans do you have? Do you want to go back to your job? (If yes, how would the degree help in making you better at your job?)

Telescope phase of writing an SOP

Note: Ensure you close your grad school statement of purpose on a hopeful note. Show preparedness to start. Exude confidence. Express anticipation on getting in. 

Hopefully, these statement of purpose examples have given you a clear idea of what a successful personal statement looks like.

But that’s not all. Some MFA Admission Committee members have shared a couple of tips on Twitter. So we’ll share more of them alongside tips sent in by some generous past and current MFA students..

Tips For Writing A Good Statement of Purpose or Letter Of Intent .

If you’re applying to graduate creative writing programs, pay attention to your writing samples first. But also, craft your SOP with the following tips in mind.

There Are No Hard and Fast Rules To Writing An SOP.

There is no hard and fast rule in writing an SOP. Just ensure that yours is well-knit, with flowing ideas and a fantastic rhythm. Keep it organized and clear. Stick to the manuscript formatting guidelines. As with everything else, make your submissions error free.

Here’s what MFA Admission committee member has to say:

how to start a Personal statement examples MFA

Now, on to our next point.

Ensure That Your Writing Samples and SOPs Are Creative, Well-written and Workshopped.

Your writing sample largely pre-determines the success of your SOP. The admission committee may not open your SOP if your samples aren’t any good.

So, ensure your writing samples matter and are on the verge of saying new things. If you’re eligible, you can apply to get feedback from volunteer MFAyers at the MFA App Review .

And if you’re lucky, the MFA App Review might match you with a reviewer who will send you more unique statement of purpose examples.

More from Elizabeth McCracken who, if you don’t already know, has been a longstanding member of the admission committee at the University of Texas’ MFA in Creative Writing program.

successful mfa personal statement

Be Original.

Resist the temptation to copy other writers’ personal statements or statement of purpose examples and samples you might find online.

Trust your story, your style and voice. The adcoms can tell when everyone sounds the same. And they don’t like it. Here’s a quote from Elizabeth McCracken’s Twitter page:

successful mfa personal statement

Consider Starting With a Story 

“While your personal statement can’t be wildly creative, it is important to show your storytelling skills if you want to get into a creative writing program,” advises Elyse Hauser .

“One way to do this is to open with a story, giving you a chance to “show, not tell” your writing abilities. This also helps your personal statement stand out from the rest. [Also] admissions staff are likely to keep reading a statement of purpose that has a unique and exciting beginning.” 

Don’t Be Afraid To Assert Yourself. In Your Statement Of Purpose.

MFA programs are avant-garde compared with other university grad school and undergrad programs so feel free to assert yourself even if you feel you are without the “right” credential and publishing history.

Another tip from Matt Bell Of making your statement of purpose stellar.

successful mfa personal statement

What you think serve as your ‘shortcomings’ can work for you if you stir them properly. It matters so much that you have the right motive and that you show promise. Do not play small. Play confident. 

More from Matt Bell.

Statement of purpose sample for MFA in Creative Writing

Employ A Memorable Tone.

“The standard Personal Essay Voice, like the droning and soporific Poetry Reading Voice, is forgettable and undermines its own content,” says Daniel Galef. “Trying for a different tone is a gamble—nothing is so unfunny as someone trying to be funny and failing—but if you can pull it off it makes you stand out.”

Comply With The Creative Writing Program’s Submission Guidelines.

Check for specific information required by the English and creative writing program you are applying to and ensure you stay within the shores of their requirement.

Get Feedback From Current and Past Students.

It is important to get feedback from people who may be on writing programs or who have extensive knowledge of graduate school application processes.

A couple of MFA groups on Facebook offer beneficial company. For example, join the MFA Draft ’21 if you intend to apply this Fall. This Facebook group offers support and advice to anyone applying to get into a writing program next year.

Wrap Up On Statement of Purpose Examples, Samples and Tips:

At this point, you’re no longer asking questions like: what is a statement of purpose? How can I write a good MFA or PhD statement of purpose that will earn me a spot in that fully-funded Creative Writing program.

The aforementioned grad school statement of purpose examples will guide you in your journey. As one of the professors advised, take a deep breath. 

The next step is to start writing that personal statement or letter of intent, because quite frankly, it won’t write itself. You can always edit your SOP. 

Please edit it. Remember, the admission committee members are also accomplished writers and writing teachers. They’re primed for spotting and frowning at grammatical errors.

While writing and editing your personal statement, take note of the admission committee’s advice above. What are they often looking for in a good statement of purpose for graduate school? If in doubt, you can always return to the great statement of purpose examples we’ve published above.

Wondering if you need an MFA in Creative Writing to be a writer? Then you should definitely read our take on the topic . Also, we have more on writing scholarships here .

Have you written a successful statement of purpose for a creatIve writing program? Please leave a comment below. We are open to adding more tips and samples that readers might find helpful.

Authors’ Bios: 

Tega Oghenechovwen has published work in  Longreads, The Rumpus,  Black Sun Lit, Litro UK, and other venues. He tweets @tega­_chovwen.

Chioma Iwunze-Ibiam is a lecturer in Cornell University’s MFA in Creative Writing Program. Her work has appeared or is forthcoming in Mukana Press Anthology of African Writing, MTLS, Fiction 365, Asterix Journal and elsewhere. She tweets at @chiomaiwunze_

Interested in  writing for Creative Writing News ? See our  Write for Us page . We look forward to hearing from you.

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How to Write Your MFA Statement of Purpose: A Success Story

  • By Jordan Dotson
  • Updated: March 1, 2023

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Though they may not realize it, Fine Arts students are cursed. (Believe me, I know, I was one.) Not only are they more stubborn than engineers, but often they suffer the misfortune of being shackled to creative self-expression. Of course, unbounded creativity is a necessary and glorious aspect of their existence. But when it comes time to write an MFA statement of purpose, this same creativity can be a kiss of death.

It doesn’t matter that we’re applying for a somewhat non-academic degree. It doesn’t matter that we’re being judged on our ability to produce meaningful art. All that matters is that this one aspect of the application – the SOP – is NOT the same as a portfolio, in which we unleash our most potent creative juices. Instead, the SOP is a test for how clearly we can articulate our goals .

The funny thing is, these difficulties apply to ALL kinds of MFA applicants, from creative writing to visual arts to theater. (Creative writing students might be the worst.) Though the art differs, all seem to have trouble articulating their goals and inspirations without resorting to artful prose gimmicks. In fact, they face the exact same obstacles that ALL graduate applicants face.

That’s why I was so impressed by Yuxuan.

A color-blind graphic designer and painter, and non-native English speaker, Yuxuan wrote an SOP that puts many creative writing students to shame. And it earned admission to 5 fully funded MFA programs.

But before we read Yuxuan’s amazing essay, let’s examine how he started planning, so we can help you achieve the same wild success.

Getting Started

When he looked back on his applications, Yuxuan expressed his anxieties this way:

“I think the pandemic was a huge disadvantage. It increased the number of applicants and also reduced schools’ funds. This was a big challenge for me since I mainly applied for fully funded MFAs. At the same time, the pandemic reduced available studio time, and I had to complete a lot of my projects at home. The lack of space and equipment gave me a lot of concerns about my portfolio, so I knew I needed a statement of purpose that showed I could be better than other applicants.”

Luckily, Yuxuan was a willing student. When he read the Structure is Magic template , he understood immediately that the SOP isn’t a work of creativity, but a job application. His portfolio would reveal his artistic potential. But the essay had to reveal his potential as a clear thinker who knew exactly why he was applying to each program.

What did he want to convey?

  • The over-arching theme of his work; the artistic problems that really motivate him.
  • Why each individual school was a perfect place for him to develop those themes.
  • How his past successes prove he’s ready to succeed as an artist (and maybe…teacher).

What’s Great About This SOP?

Yuxuan followed Structure is Magic as if it were a paint-by-numbers exercise, and the results were spectacular.

  • Two paragraphs in the Introductory Frame Narrative
  • One paragraph for Why This Program
  • Two paragraphs for Why I’m (Overly) Qualified
  • One resounding frame narrative conclusion paragraph

Amazingly, this paragraph-by-paragraph structure is almost exactly the same as that used by uber-successful Neuroscience PhDs . (When I tell you these narrative structures are universal and timeless, I ain’t lying!)

The frame narrative starts with the compelling story of how color-blindness makes Yuxuan a truly unique artist. It’s funny, humble, and it teaches us something. Quickly, this evolves into a description of the techniques he obsesses over in his pursuit of barrier-free art, and how this defines his goals.

Next, it goes into great detail to explain why two professors at his target school are the absolute perfect mentors for Yuxuan: they share the same artistic obsessions, and have much to teach him. Then, he gives a “highlight reel” of his artistic and academic achievements, proving that he’s ready to continue succeeding in graduate school.

Finally, the SOP ends with a clear rearticulation of Yuxuan’s goals, proving that his “genetic color weakness is actually an invaluable lens for viewing the world.”

This essay is beautiful. After reading, we walk away knowing we’ve encountered a true and talented artist, one with a uniquely powerful mind. Let’s read it and find inspiration for your own writing.

A Brilliant MFA Statement of Purpose

I have a red-green color weakness, one most people know as color-blindness. Most people think this means I see the world without green and red. Actually, in my world, reds and greens are grey shades with variegating shadows. I also have difficulty distinguishing pink from grey, and purple from blue. Curiously, this makes me think of animals. Dolphins are dichromats. They can see only two colors. Humans are trichromats. We see red, blue and yellow. Pigeons are tetrachromats. They see the world in a way people cannot even imagine. All creatures see the world through the heteronomy of their colors, and I exist somewhere between humans and dolphins. This fascinates me deeply.

In college, I have largely worked with chiaroscuro and high-contrast color. Chiaroscuro has always been provocative, as my insensitivity to color only increases my sensitivity to light and shadow. No shadow is a single shade of darkness, and I have found high-contrast color offers the same points of inquiry, especially blue, which is as bright as red in the eyes of people with color weakness. Color is thus an expression of self-identity. In most of my work, it is not an emotional expression, but a rational guide in a metaphysical dialogue that alters over time, and this issue of barrier-free visualization is exactly what I hope to explore in the MFA program at Gotham City School of Design.

I am particularly inspired by the work of Professor Karl Banksy. His work often deals with underserved public interest issues, echoing my own pursuit of barrier-free visual experiences. As I create designs for people with achromatopsia, color disorders, and others with visual impairment who are often overlooked in social services, I believe Professor Banksy will be a great mentor. I also feel inspired by Professor Wang Lu, whose research focuses on historical and cultural influence in graphic design. As a Chinese-diaspora artist, I often explore design themes idiosyncratic to Asian culture in my work. I experimented with this in my contribution to “Seeking Plural Narratives,” a recent anthology which sought to examine Eurocentric design and typographic cultures. My pieced discussed Cuban graphic design and its similarities to communist iconography from China. Therefore, I think Professor Lu will be a reliable mentor as I grow my international, multicultural vision for design.

As I consider working with these ideas at GCSD, my academic experiences give me confidence. At Metropolis University, I have excelled as a Graphic Design major, earning a 3.8 GPA even as I took graduate-level coursework in design and computational thinking. These latter courses allowed me to explore philosophy of art, particularly regarding deep fakes and artificial intelligence, as I combined critical reviews of important texts with coding experiments. By studying our emerging culture of disinformation selectively deployed as media manipulation, I learned how new modes of thinking are required to critically and artistically engage with computer culture in the public realm. This use of technology is also an area I hope to explore at GCSD. At the same time, I have interned for one year at the Metropolis Center for Arts and Technology, where among other tasks I serve as a teaching assistant for students from low-income families. Teaching these students, many of whom work part-time to fund their art tuition, has been one of the most rewarding experiences of my life. It has taught me new degrees of empathy, inspiring even more my desire to study barrier-free visual experience, and sparking my a desire to become an educator.

This is why I apply to GCSD: to study barrier-free visual experiences, to contemplate art in a multicultural and technological world, and to prepare to become a teacher myself. If given the chance to pursue these goals, I will work hard to be a credit to the university, and prove that my genetic color weakness is actually an invaluable lens for viewing the world.

Professional, Powerful, Persuasive

I admit that Yuxuan has a unique background that not everyone can match. A colorblind artist?! C’mon. But either way, it’s easy to see how everyone can model his essay and speak to program directors in a professional, powerful, and persuasive way.

1. Start with a compelling Frame Narrative

What is it about your art that makes you unique? What are you trying to accomplish? What stories are you trying to tell? Which aspects of humanity are you trying to draw out and explore? Most importantly, how are these inspired by your own life and experiences?

Don’t devolve into hackneyed proclamations about social issues. I assure you, every MFA program receives 500 essays a year about social inequalities and art-as-activism. Instead, focus on the things that make you and your art different from everyone else’s.

2. Explain “Why This School” is perfect for you

Once you’ve established the goals for your art, it’s time to explain how this school will help you achieve those goals. Look at the studios and resources available. Look at the faculty. Look at their work. See which courses and workshops you can take under them. Make sure they’re actually teaching next semester! Draw connections between your own themes, obsessions, and questions, and those in the work of your hopeful professors.

A warning, however: don’t claim that a school is perfect because they have a famous professor. Fame is not a good reason to want to work with someone. You need to find real connections between their work and yours. If the connection isn’t there, you’ll only look immature. Remember: if a school has a famous professor, everyone who applies will mention them in their MFA statement of purpose.

3. Prove that you’re ready to succeed

You’re applying to be a graduate student . Here, give them proof that you’ve been a good student in the past, and will continue to do so in the future. Remember, your portfolio proves how good an artist you are. This section shows that you take everything else seriously as well.

Good GPA. Awards you’ve won. Unique design internships you’ve held. Whatever constitutes your “Greatest Hits List,” include it here.

4. End your Frame Narrative

In the beginning, you showed how your life has been unique, and how this gave you unique artistic goals. Now, restate those goals. Remind us of them. Be circular. Take us back to the beginning. Give us a feeling of harmony as we finish your essay.

I’m grateful to Yuxuan for allowing me to republish his work and brag about his success. I originally met him through BosonEd in Philadelphia, a fantastic organization that helps internationals study in elite universities in America. Right from the start, I knew Yuxuan would be an artist of true consequence one day, and I hope his writing is an inspiration for you.

As you craft your MFA statement of purpose, do exactly what Yuxuan did: follow the Structure is Magic template or the SOP Starter Kit . Use the timeless, universal lessons of narrative structure to compose an essay that actively persuades programs to choose you.

Don’t make the mistake of thinking: “Oh, I’m an artist, I’m a creative writer, I know how to do this.” Chances are, you don’t. The SOP isn’t a short story. It’s not a film script nor a personal memoir. It is, however, the easiest part of the application to screw up. But if you treat it properly, as a clear, mature, professional statement of your plans for the future, then I’m sure you too can achieve wild success, and I wish you all the luck in the world!

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Sample MFA Personal Statement (admitted to New School and Rhode Island)

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by Talha Omer, MBA, M.Eng., Harvard & Cornell Grad

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The following personal statement is written by an applicant who got accepted to top graduate programs in fine arts (MFA). Variations of this personal statement got accepted at Rhode Island School of Design, New School–Parsons School of Design, and School of the Art Institute of Chicago. Read this MFA personal statement to get inspiration and understand what a top MFA essay should look like.

You might also be interested in reading this Sample MFA Statement of Purpose  that got admitted to Yale, UCLA, and Virginia Commonwealth University.

Sample MFA Personal Statement

Art rescued me from an abusive marriage in an oppressive society where human life is dispensable. It gave me the courage to stand up for myself and talk about uncomfortable things in our society. Born and raised in a conservative family, my father had conformist female values like; girls don’t answer doorbells and playing in public parks. So, while growing up, I wasn’t allowed to explore the outside world. The only thing that interested me indoors was the art section of weekly magazines. It was my first window to art.

My mother was always fond of making handcrafts like wooden crafts, flower making, and embroidery. As a curious child, I learned these techniques from her. Unfortunately, following a path dictated by my father, I completed high school in science instead of arts. Nevertheless, thanks to the Internet, I became aware of how vital it is to pursue my passion and then decided to apply to an Arts school. With only four months to prepare for the competitive entry test, my mother and I found a drawing studio where I religiously practiced 18 hours a day for the next four months.

Against all the odds, I went to the top art school in the country and graduated with honors on a scholarship. My thesis got a distinction and the Principal’s Honors award. Dr. Virginia Whiles, a UK-based Art Historian, saw my thesis and was awestruck. She remarked, “I hadn’t seen anything like this before,” and purchased my work for her collection. Later, she sent me an email from the UK informing me that she had quoted my work in an international art magazine (Art Monthly UK). This small but meaningful event consolidated my belief that art could transcend cultural boundaries.

As a child at home, I witnessed gender inequality. This created a perception that women are not welcome in a conservative household. In grade 6, I complained to my father, “I know you are not fond of daughters, but your behavior is hurting me.” He was astonished. I guess he was not expecting this from a naive 11-year-old. But something changed after that day. My father started to redress.

Eighteen years later, I still explore social, personal, and political discomforts. However, this time through my art, I translate what I see and experience into my own “language,” primarily sculptures. My father talks with pride about me being a first-generation college graduate and a financially independent woman. He also boasts about my work exhibited in London and the sculptures I created as a studio assistant to Benedict Cumberbatch, an Oscars Prize nominee. I guess generations-old taboos could be challenged. However, one needs the courage to be articulate, and I found myself most articulated through art.

I have always embedded social and cultural factors in my artwork. Whether they were community-based women empowerment projects with CED and CDC or my studio practice as a sculptor. Where my peers opted for jobs at fashion houses, I instead chose community-based projects. These projects allowed me to travel worldwide and offered me the experience of interacting with women in remote areas, discovering their untapped potential, and listening to their fascinating stories.

Moreover, teaching helped me boost my confidence and polish my art practice. It also taught me multitasking and teamwork. I realized social engagement through arts is rewarding, so I began teaching at a local art school. This experience taught me how therapeutic it is to share an artistic space with students. However, I need further education, an MFA precisely to teach at the university, alongside my studio practice.

Working in various locations has been challenging. Currently, I have a small studio set up at my home. I am proud of this studio as my work speaks to many viewers worldwide. Working with limited resources is hard, but I am trying.

The last five years of abusive marriage and divorce were tragic for me, and the most freedom I got to express myself was through art. It gave me the courage to face the world, pay collective homage to women’s struggles, and encourage them to break the silence and realize their potential. Therefore, I seek an artistic community where I can refine my practice in a true essence while defying social norms and taboos. An MFA will allow me to explore societal norms and female roles.

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Writing a Winning MFA Statement of Purpose: Example & Advice

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Are you applying to a master’s in fine arts program and looking for advice on how to make your statement of purpose stand out? Writing an effective statement of purpose can be challenging – but with some guidance, it doesn’t have to be. The Admit Lab is here to provide tips and insight into the statement-writing process, including an MFA statement of purpose example that demonstrates the components of a winning MFA application essay. Let us help take the stress out of making your writing shine!

Know thyself

Writing an MFA statement of purpose begins with a deep and introspective examination of one’s unique experiences, interests, and goals. The essence of the statement lies in the ability to convey your journey and the specific motivations that drive your desire to pursue a master of fine arts. The document should provide a detailed account of your artistic journey so far, punctuated by the experiences that sparked your interest in the arts. Whether it was an early childhood fascination with colors, your first drawing class at school, or the pivotal moment when you realized that art was your calling, these experiences are instrumental in detailing your artistic evolution. Reflect on the moments that challenged you, those situations that pushed you to evolve and grow as an artist. Perhaps it was a critique that made you rethink your work or a piece that didn’t turn out as expected, leading you to explore a new technique or medium. Finally, consider your future goals. Why are you pursuing an MFA? How do you envision it helping you achieve your artistic objectives? Remember, this statement is your opportunity to show the admissions committee not just who you are as an artist today, but who you aspire to become.

Speaking to Fit

When it comes to articulating your fit for a particular MFA program, it’s vital to conduct thorough research on each institution you’re applying to. Unlike an undergraduate program, an MFA is highly specialized and significantly influenced by the ethos, facilities, faculty, and community of the program. Begin by delving into the curriculum, understanding the course offerings, the teaching methodology, and the predominant artistic philosophies that the program adheres to. Understand the core values of the institution and how they resonate with your own artistic beliefs. Explore the faculty profiles, their work, and their accolades, and see if their style or approach to art aligns with yours. The community is another crucial aspect to consider. Does the program foster a collaborative environment, or is it more individualistic? What opportunities exist for exhibitions, internships, or collaborative projects? As you gather this information, identify the facets that make this program an ideal fit for you. Maybe it’s a particular course that perfectly aligns with the skill you wish to master, or perhaps it’s the opportunity to work under a faculty member whose work you’ve long admired. These specifics should be woven into your statement, crafting a narrative that not only showcases your understanding of the program but also highlights why you’re a great match.

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Highlight Strengths and Skills

As demonstrated in the MFA statement of purpose example below, when writing your statement of purpose for an MFA program, it’s imperative to highlight your strengths and skills, particularly those that are transferable and align with the qualifications sought by the program. Start by analyzing the program’s requirements and identifying the skills and qualifications they value the most. Then, reflect on your artistic journey, your academic accomplishments, past projects, internships, or any relevant work experiences. Identify the skills and strengths you’ve developed throughout these experiences and articulate them in your statement. These could range from technical skills specific to your art form, like mastery in a particular medium or technique, to soft skills like creativity, perseverance, critical thinking, or collaboration. Emphasize how these skills have shaped your artistic practice, and supported your creative growth, and how they will contribute to your success in the MFA program. For instance, if you’ve honed your skills in digital art through a series of projects, discuss how this technical expertise will allow you to experiment and create innovative art in an MFA program that values digital mediums. Similarly, discuss transferable skills, such as your ability to work collaboratively on projects or your experience in organizing art exhibits, depicting how these skills make you a valuable addition to the program. By weaving these elements into your statement, you demonstrate not only your qualifications and preparedness for the program but also your potential to contribute to their community.

Choose Your Focus

When crafting the focus of your statement of purpose for an MFA program, it’s essential to illustrate a clear understanding of your artistic discipline and your specific creative intentions within it. This focus forms the crux of your statement, providing a lens through which the admissions committee can view your artistic aspirations. Start by elaborating on your chosen art or discipline – be it visual arts, creative writing, theatre, or any other art form. Discuss what drew you to this discipline, share your exploration and evolution within it, and the unique perspectives or techniques you’ve developed. Then, transition into your intended creative focus within this discipline. For this, discuss your future goals, the kind of projects or works you wish to create, the themes or issues you wish to explore, and how you intend to push the boundaries of your craft. It’s essential to be specific and articulate here; don’t just assert your passion for your art form, demonstrate it by discussing your ideas, inspirations, and creative vision in detail. Show how these align with the MFA program’s philosophy and how the program will provide the perfect platform to realize these ambitions. Remember, your focus is not just about what you wish to do, but also about who you wish to become as an artist and the impact you aim to make through your art. Thus, use this part of your statement to paint a vivid picture of your artistic journey ahead, making the reader invested in your creative future.

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Craft a compelling narrative

In crafting a compelling narrative for your MFA statement of purpose, ensure that it’s a true reflection of your journey as an artist. Storytelling is a powerful tool that brings your artistic passion to life, connecting with the reader on a personal level. Share your story through a lens of authenticity and honesty, focusing on the experiences that have shaped you as an artist. Talk about the transformative moments, the challenges you’ve overcome, the triumphs you’ve celebrated, and the lessons you’ve learned along the way. Highlight pivotal artworks or projects that have influenced your work, the inspirations behind your creations, and how you’ve evolved artistically over time. As shown in any of our MFA statement of purpose example, this narrative should not be a mere recitation of events; instead, it should be a deeply personal and stirring exploration of your artistic journey. Remember, the purpose here is not to impress but to express, not to showcase your achievements

Show, don’t tell

It’s also crucial to detail specific instances where your creativity was ignited. Rather than merely stating that you’re passionate, demonstrate this passion through concrete examples. For instance, perhaps there was a time when you found inspiration in the mundane, like how the shadow-play of leaves on a sunny day led you to explore light and shadow in your art. Or maybe there was a moment of emotional turmoil that you transformed into a powerful painting, allowing you to process your feelings and create a piece that resonated with others. Don’t shy away from discussing the creative process either – how you felt while creating, the techniques you used, the risks you took, and how you pushed your boundaries. You might also describe how a particular artist, artwork, or art movement has influenced you, demonstrating this through specific projects or pieces you’ve developed in response. Providing these specific examples offers a deeper insight into your creative excitement, making your statement more compelling.

As demonstrate in the MFA statement of purpose example, the degree can be in a variety of disciplines

Capturing Your Audience

You should aim to draw in your reader with creative prompts or reflective vignettes that highlight your writing prowess. This could be realized through the portrayal of the artistic experiments and breakthroughs that excite you, the personal anecdotes that reveal your commitment to art, or the captivating descriptions of your pieces. Using these techniques allows you to paint a vivid picture of your artistic journey and the exploration of your creative voice. It’s important, however, to maintain a balance of creativity with transparency and clarity. You want your statement to be enthralling, but it should also effectively communicate your artistic narrative, your motivations, and your potential in the MFA program. Remember, your reader isn’t just looking for a good story, but also an understanding of who you are as an artist.

Customize for each school

When crafting your statement of purpose for an MFA program, consider the unique strengths and characteristics of each school you’re applying to and tailor your SOP accordingly. Showcase in your SOP how your artistic aspirations align with the school’s offerings and ethos. For instance, if you’re applying to a program known for its strong focus on experimental forms, highlight your interest and past work in this area. If a school boasts a renowned faculty member whose work resonates with your own, mention how you look forward to learning from their expertise. Additionally, if a school offers unique resources such as specialized workshops, state-of-the-art studios, or community engagement projects that will enhance your artistic journey, include these elements in your SOP. By customizing your SOP for each school, you not only demonstrate your thorough understanding and appreciation of the program but also articulate how your artistic journey can be enriched by, and contribute to, the unique fabric of each institution.

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Convey enthusiasm clearly

In the process of authoring your statement of purpose for an MFA program, a crucial element to incorporate is a clear display of your enthusiasm. It’s essential to remember that while the SOP is an academic document, it doesn’t necessarily have to be devoid of emotion. Rather, it is your opportunity to convey your passion for your art, your commitment to honing your craft, and your excitement at the prospect of joining the MFA program. An engaging, enthusiastic tone can truly make your application stand out, prompting the reviewers to envision you as an energetic, dedicated participant in their program. As demonstrate in any of our MFA statement of purpose example below, use vivid, evocative language to describe your past projects, your artistic inspirations, and your future aspirations. Highlight instances where you’ve gone beyond the call of duty in your pursuit of art—be it late-night sessions at the studio, extensive research for a project, or even a piece of art you created that deeply moved your audience. Underscore your eagerness to immerse yourself in the MFA program, the skills you wish to acquire, the faculty you’re keen on working with, and how this journey would contribute to your growth as an artist. Remember, an engaging, passionate SOP can serve as a compelling testament to your dedication, thereby making the admission committee not just consider, but want to admit you!

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Mfa statement of purpose example 1:.

As an artist, I have always thrived on expressing the inexplicable—translating the deepest emotions and profound experiences into captivating visual narratives that resonate with the viewer on a profound level. My unwavering passion for art was ignited during my transformative undergraduate years, where I delved into the mesmerizing power of visual storytelling and discovered the immense potential it holds. Now, with an ardent desire to further harness and nurture this power, I am excited to embark on a remarkable journey by joining the esteemed MFA program at your institution.

The allure of your program lies not only in its prestigious reputation but also in the vibrant artistic community it fosters such as X and Y. It is with great admiration that I have come across the works of Professor X, whose exploration of abstract expressionism aligns seamlessly with my personal artistic inclinations. I believe that under her expert guidance, in addition to the X and Y courses, I will have the invaluable opportunity to push the boundaries of my artistic expression, unravel new depths of creativity, and make meaningful contributions to the ever-evolving art community. Both of these courses will provide me with *** and will help me reach my artistic goals.

By immersing myself in the rich artistic discourse, collaborating with fellow passionate artists, and embracing the diverse perspectives offered by the program, I am confident that I will not only grow as an artist but also develop a profound understanding of the profound impact art can have on society. I am looking forward to joining the X, Y and Z activities, because…With an unwavering dedication to my craft and an insatiable hunger for artistic growth, I am eager to embark on this transformative journey and make a lasting mark in the world of art.

MFA statement of purpose example 2:

“Bridging the gap between digital and traditional art forms has been the relentless driving force of my artistic journey. As an enthusiastic undergraduate art student, I have consistently sought to experiment with a multitude of mediums and techniques, pushing the boundaries of creativity to create art that not only challenges the status quo but also sparks conversations.

The MFA program at XYZ University, renowned for its innovative approach and unwavering commitment to artistic excellence, presents the perfect platform for me to further deepen my understanding and expand my artistic skillset. I believe X, Y and Z will allow me to….

The potential to engage in fruitful collaborations with like-minded peers by joining X, Y and Z, as well as the invaluable opportunity to learn from distinguished faculty members such as the esteemed Professor Y, fills me with immense excitement and anticipation. I believe their expertise will help me…

Through this transformative program, I aim to create art that not only blurs the lines between the digital and the real but also captivates the audience with its unparalleled uniqueness, leaving a lasting impression and provoking thought-provoking discussions within the art community and beyond.”

MFA statement of purpose example 3:

“Art, for me, is not only a medium to engage in dialogue with society, but also a powerful tool to challenge and question existing norms, and ultimately, to invoke meaningful change. With each piece in my body of work, I strive to shed light on pressing social and environmental issues, aiming to inspire reflection, empathy, and action.

The MFA program at XYZ University represents a significant milestone in my artistic journey, as it provides the perfect platform to further refine and amplify my creative voice. The program’s interdisciplinary curriculum, coupled with its emphasis on critical thought and conceptual exploration, promises to equip me with the necessary skills and knowledge to create art that has a lasting impact. I am looking to enroll in courses Z and X because…

One aspect of the program that particularly excites me is the opportunity to work closely with Professor Z, a renowned artist known for his socially engaged art. His mentorship will not only provide invaluable guidance but also inspire me to push the boundaries of my own artistic practice. I cherish this chance to learn from a visionary in the field and am eager to absorb his wisdom and insights. I believe his expertise in **** will help me achieve X, Y, and Z.

As I embark on this immersive journey, I am filled with anticipation and enthusiasm. I am confident that through this program, I will not only create art that matters but also contribute to the ongoing societal discourse, sparking conversations and provoking thought. I am excited to make a meaningful impact through my artistic endeavors and play my part in shaping a better future for our society.”

Navigating the Complexities of Crafting an Impactful Statement of Purpose

Despite the clear and articulate vision presented in your statement of purpose, it is essential to consider the potential uncertainties that may arise. Are you confident that your artistic intent and future goals align well with the program’s objectives? Does the statement effectively capture your unique artistic approach and how it will evolve throughout your academic journey? Have you convincingly conveyed how this program is the ideal fit for your creative aspirations? Remember, the admissions committee will be reviewing countless applications, many of which will be from individuals with comparable talents and ambitions. Therefore, to stand out from the crowd, every sentence of your statement must reflect your passion, dedication, and potential for exceptional contributions to the art world. A mere oversight or misjudgment can be the difference between acceptance and rejection, with significant implications for your career and life trajectory. Therefore, it may be prudent to seek expert feedback on your statement, to ensure it represents the best version of your aspirations and abilities before submission. You wouldn’t want to leave something this important to chance, would you?

Solicit feedback from trusted individuals who can evaluate your SOP objectively. Ask them to focus on assessing the clarity of your message, the flow of your thoughts, and the overall potential of your SOP to impress the admissions committee. Encourage them to be honest in their feedback and to highlight areas where you can improve. Remember, constructive criticism can provide invaluable insights that may not be obvious to you. This step, while sometimes daunting, can essentially help refine your SOP, ensuring it truly reflects your passion, showcases your abilities, and resonates with the admissions committee.

We hope that, with the advice we’ve given, you now have a greater understanding of how to write an effective MFA statement of purpose. Remember: when you write for your master’s degree program in fine arts, be focused yet concise; demonstrate why you’re uniquely qualified but humbly aware; and use powerful language to make your point stick. If you feel that you need more help perfecting your statement for success, The Admit Lab can assist with everything from essay review to crafting original content tailored just for you. Don’t struggle alone – we are here to lighten the load and help make sure that your application packs a punch! So don’t delay – check out our graduate school application essay services and stand out among the rest of the applicants. All the best!

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Hey – if this helps you, leave me a comment! Please… I do this only for the attention

Hi Jamie, I totally enjoyed reading your statement. Your insights and perspective are enlightening and your talent for the written word is evident. Your writing makes me wanting to read more….. It appears that your background, upbringing and of course your keen intellect have provided you with the raw materials and stimulation to create rich stories I would very much enjoy reading. I look forward to following your career!

Thank you! Good luck applying!

Thanks for posting. I enjoyed slipping into your world so quickly and so clearly. I am also battling the systematic process of revealing myself on paper. I hope I come across as honestly as you do.

My pleasure! The trick, I think, is to convey your writing education and career as a problem that XYZ school can solve; if that makes sense.

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Excellent statement, there. Quick question: How much did you alter this for individual schools? Should I really be worrying about personalizing my main personal statement per institution, or should I pretty much leave things as-is?

I left things pretty much as is, but I should have tailored them . Maybe talk about why this particular small/large/urban/whatever program would fits your needs better than any other one… I probably should have talked about writing more as well

I like what you write. It speaks to me.

Thanks! Means a lot. Good luck applying…

this is fantastic!…. i am applying to grad school at the moment…. I would love to use this as a model for my letter…if you don’t mind…

My pleasure (and thank you) – that’s why I put it up

This is the only good one I’ve found. Thank you.

My pleasure! Good luck (and when you do get accepted don’t be afraid to quibble with them for financial aid before you accept, I didn’t and regret it)

Well done! Thanks for sharing. Plenty of us out here looking for some good models.

I’m really glad you posted this. I’ve been looking for examples of personal statements for MFA programs for a while – they really are few and far between! (To use a cliche that I will not put in my own statement.) I presume you got into Columbia with this, right? Have you talked to other people in your MFA program about what they wrote for their personal statement? I’m wondering if most people take a creative approach, as you do, or whether it’s more common to just clearly state one’s goals.

My pleasure… I did get in (and have since graduated). I’ve seen a few other statements. Most do err on the side of caution and clearly state their goals, and people have told me that my voice is a bit too bossy for a personal statement. I’d try to make your statement entertaining to read, but try not to repel anyone!

Thank you so much for this. Very helpful. I’m applying to MFA programs this fall and I’ve been scouring the internet looking for personal statement examples and finding hardly any. I was wondering if you ever sent people your actual portfolio at the time of your admission to Columbia. If you do, I would really appreciate looking at the work of someone who has been a successful applicant to such a quality school. ([email protected]). Either way, thank you so much!

Take a look at some of the fiction on this page: http://jamesmcgirk.com/?page_id=346 that should give you an idea. I used the first thirty pages of a novel but I think I couple of short stories is a much better choice (because it shows you can finish a story)

This is a great resource, thanks so much for posting! I’m applying to poetry MFA programs and I’ve struggled with balancing my rhetorical flourishes and supplying actual information, this is helpful, also just fun to read, interesting life story.

Thanks! And good luck to you. I’m going through it all over again, applying for fellowships – James

Good essay, I’m going to be apply to a screenwriting program and I need an essay too, this one shows a mature voice yet is entertaining and reflective. You’re in NYC? And you’ve graduated? Congratulations. I wish you the best in your career!

Thanks Alex, I’m glad you liked it. I graduated last year and am about to move out of NYC. Good luck getting in (and with your career afterwards–and during).

Thank you for this! I am currently applying for an MFA and have been feeling nervous about using a less formal voice to better describe who I am as a writer. Yours was inspiring!

Thanks, Sarah! Good luck applying – James

Thank you so much for posting this wonderful essay. It’s helped me so much with putting mine together.

I am using one particular scene from my childhood – the body reads like a story really – and I’m flanking the body with an intro that explains me, and what writing means to me, and the ending is still a WIP.

I love the idea of submitting two short stories instead of 30 pages of a novel!! My short stories are much stronger right now than my first novel in progress and it’s been really stressing me out.

I’m going to call my school to see if this is acceptable with them. If it is, I’ll submit two short stories and I’ve got you to thank!!

My the force be with you!

You’re most welcome! Thanks for reading it.

Definitely submit your best work, unless they specifically ask for a novel excerpt… And good luck! Sounds like you’re going about it that right way.

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Looking for grad school personal statement examples? Look no further! In this total guide to graduate school personal statement examples, we’ll discuss why you need a personal statement for grad school and what makes a good one. Then we’ll provide three graduate school personal statement samples from our grad school experts. After that, we’ll do a deep dive on one of our personal statement for graduate school examples. Finally, we’ll wrap up with a list of other grad school personal statements you can find online.

Why Do You Need a Personal Statement?

A personal statement is a chance for admissions committees to get to know you: your goals and passions, what you’ll bring to the program, and what you’re hoping to get out of the program.  You need to sell the admissions committee on what makes you a worthwhile applicant. The personal statement is a good chance to highlight significant things about you that don’t appear elsewhere on your application.

A personal statement is slightly different from a statement of purpose (also known as a letter of intent). A statement of purpose/letter of intent tends to be more tightly focused on your academic or professional credentials and your future research and/or professional interests.

While a personal statement also addresses your academic experiences and goals, you have more leeway to be a little more, well, personal. In a personal statement, it’s often appropriate to include information on significant life experiences or challenges that aren’t necessarily directly relevant to your field of interest.

Some programs ask for both a personal statement and a statement of purpose/letter of intent. In this case, the personal statement is likely to be much more tightly focused on your life experience and personality assets while the statement of purpose will focus in much more on your academic/research experiences and goals.

However, there’s not always a hard-and-fast demarcation between a personal statement and a statement of purpose. The two statement types should address a lot of the same themes, especially as relates to your future goals and the valuable assets you bring to the program. Some programs will ask for a personal statement but the prompt will be focused primarily on your research and professional experiences and interests. Some will ask for a statement of purpose but the prompt will be more focused on your general life experiences.

When in doubt, give the program what they are asking for in the prompt and don’t get too hung up on whether they call it a personal statement or statement of purpose. You can always call the admissions office to get more clarification on what they want you to address in your admissions essay.

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What Makes a Good Grad School Personal Statement?

A great graduate school personal statement can come in many forms and styles. However, strong grad school personal statement examples all share the same following elements:

A Clear Narrative

Above all, a good personal statement communicates clear messages about what makes you a strong applicant who is likely to have success in graduate school. So to that extent, think about a couple of key points that you want to communicate about yourself and then drill down on how you can best communicate those points. (Your key points should of course be related to what you can bring to the field and to the program specifically).

You can also decide whether to address things like setbacks or gaps in your application as part of your narrative. Have a low GPA for a couple semesters due to a health issue? Been out of a job for a while taking care of a family member? If you do decide to explain an issue like this, make sure that the overall arc is more about demonstrating positive qualities like resilience and diligence than about providing excuses.

Specific Examples

A great statement of purpose uses specific examples to illustrate its key messages. This can include anecdotes that demonstrate particular traits or even references to scholars and works that have influenced your academic trajectory to show that you are familiar and insightful about the relevant literature in your field.

Just saying “I love plants,” is pretty vague. Describing how you worked in a plant lab during undergrad and then went home and carefully cultivated your own greenhouse where you cross-bred new flower colors by hand is much more specific and vivid, which makes for better evidence.

A strong personal statement will describe why you are a good fit for the program, and why the program is a good fit for you. It’s important to identify specific things about the program that appeal to you, and how you’ll take advantage of those opportunities. It’s also a good idea to talk about specific professors you might be interested in working with. This shows that you are informed about and genuinely invested in the program.

Strong Writing

Even quantitative and science disciplines typically require some writing, so it’s important that your personal statement shows strong writing skills. Make sure that you are communicating clearly and that you don’t have any grammar and spelling errors. It’s helpful to get other people to read your statement and provide feedback. Plan on going through multiple drafts.

Another important thing here is to avoid cliches and gimmicks. Don’t deploy overused phrases and openings like “ever since I was a child.” Don’t structure your statement in a gimmicky way (i.e., writing a faux legal brief about yourself for a law school statement of purpose). The first will make your writing banal; the second is likely to make you stand out in a bad way.

Appropriate Boundaries

While you can be more personal in a personal statement than in a statement of purpose, it’s important to maintain appropriate boundaries in your writing. Don’t overshare anything too personal about relationships, bodily functions, or illegal activities. Similarly, don’t share anything that makes it seem like you may be out of control, unstable, or an otherwise risky investment. The personal statement is not a confessional booth. If you share inappropriately, you may seem like you have bad judgment, which is a huge red flag to admissions committees.

You should also be careful with how you deploy humor and jokes. Your statement doesn’t have to be totally joyless and serious, but bear in mind that the person reading the statement may not have the same sense of humor as you do. When in doubt, err towards the side of being as inoffensive as possible.

Just as being too intimate in your statement can hurt you, it’s also important not to be overly formal or staid. You should be professional, but conversational.

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Graduate School Personal Statement Examples

Our graduate school experts have been kind enough to provide some successful grad school personal statement examples. We’ll provide three examples here, along with brief analysis of what makes each one successful.

Sample Personal Statement for Graduate School 1

PDF of Sample Personal Statement 1 – Japanese Studies

For this Japanese Studies master’s degree, the applicant had to provide a statement of purpose outlining her academic goals and experience with Japanese and a separate personal statement describing her personal relationship with Japanese Studies and what led her to pursue a master’s degree.

Here’s what’s successful about this personal statement:

  • An attention-grabbing beginning: The applicant begins with the statement that Japanese has never come easily to her and that it’s a brutal language to learn. Seeing as how this is an application for a Japanese Studies program, this is an intriguing beginning that makes the reader want to keep going.
  • A compelling narrative: From this attention-grabbing beginning, the applicant builds a well-structured and dramatic narrative tracking her engagement with the Japanese language over time. The clear turning point is her experience studying abroad, leading to a resolution in which she has clarity about her plans. Seeing as how the applicant wants to be a translator of Japanese literature, the tight narrative structure here is a great way to show her writing skills.
  • Specific examples that show important traits: The applicant clearly communicates both a deep passion for Japanese through examples of her continued engagement with Japanese and her determination and work ethic by highlighting the challenges she’s faced (and overcome) in her study of the language. This gives the impression that she is an engaged and dedicated student.

Overall, this is a very strong statement both in terms of style and content. It flows well, is memorable, and communicates that the applicant would make the most of the graduate school experience.

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Sample Personal Statement for Graduate School 2

PDF of Sample Graduate School Personal Statement 2 – Musical Composition

This personal statement for a Music Composition master’s degree discusses the factors that motivate the applicant to pursue graduate study.

Here’s what works well in this statement:

  • The applicant provides two clear reasons motivating the student to pursue graduate study: her experiences with music growing up, and her family’s musical history. She then supports those two reasons with examples and analysis.
  • The description of her ancestors’ engagement with music is very compelling and memorable. The applicant paints her own involvement with music as almost inevitable based on her family’s long history with musical pursuits.
  • The applicant gives thoughtful analysis of the advantages she has been afforded that have allowed her to study music so extensively. We get the sense that she is insightful and empathetic—qualities that would add greatly to any academic community.

This is a strong, serviceable personal statement. And in truth, given that this for a masters in music composition, other elements of the application (like work samples) are probably the most important.  However, here are two small changes I would make to improve it:

  • I would probably to split the massive second paragraph into 2-3 separate paragraphs. I might use one paragraph to orient the reader to the family’s musical history, one paragraph to discuss Giacomo and Antonio, and one paragraph to discuss how the family has influenced the applicant. As it stands, it’s a little unwieldy and the second paragraph doesn’t have a super-clear focus even though it’s all loosely related to the applicant’s family history with music.
  • I would also slightly shorten the anecdote about the applicant’s ancestors and expand more on how this family history has motivated the applicant’s interest in music. In what specific ways has her ancestors’ perseverance inspired her? Did she think about them during hard practice sessions? Is she interested in composing music in a style they might have played? More specific examples here would lend greater depth and clarity to the statement.

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Sample Personal Statement for Graduate School 3

PDF of Sample Graduate School Personal Statement 3 – Public Health

This is my successful personal statement for Columbia’s Master’s program in Public Health. We’ll do a deep dive on this statement paragraph-by-paragraph in the next section, but I’ll highlight a couple of things that work in this statement here:

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  • This statement is clearly organized. Almost every paragraph has a distinct focus and message, and when I move on to a new idea, I move on to a new paragraph with a logical transitions.
  • This statement covers a lot of ground in a pretty short space. I discuss my family history, my goals, my educational background, and my professional background. But because the paragraphs are organized and I use specific examples, it doesn’t feel too vague or scattered.
  • In addition to including information about my personal motivations, like my family, I also include some analysis about tailoring health interventions with my example of the Zande. This is a good way to show off what kinds of insights I might bring to the program based on my academic background.

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Grad School Personal Statement Example: Deep Dive

Now let’s do a deep dive, paragraph-by-paragraph, on one of these sample graduate school personal statements. We’ll use my personal statement that I used when I applied to Columbia’s public health program.

Paragraph One: For twenty-three years, my grandmother (a Veterinarian and an Epidemiologist) ran the Communicable Disease Department of a mid-sized urban public health department. The stories of Grandma Betty doggedly tracking down the named sexual partners of the infected are part of our family lore. Grandma Betty would persuade people to be tested for sexually transmitted diseases, encourage safer sexual practices, document the spread of infection and strive to contain and prevent it. Indeed, due to the large gay population in the city where she worked, Grandma Betty was at the forefront of the AIDS crises, and her analysis contributed greatly towards understanding how the disease was contracted and spread. My grandmother has always been a huge inspiration to me, and the reason why a career in public health was always on my radar.

This is an attention-grabbing opening anecdote that avoids most of the usual cliches about childhood dreams and proclivities. This story also subtly shows that I have a sense of public health history, given the significance of the AIDs crisis for public health as a field.

It’s good that I connect this family history to my own interests. However, if I were to revise this paragraph again, I might cut down on some of the detail because when it comes down to it, this story isn’t really about me. It’s important that even (sparingly used) anecdotes about other people ultimately reveal something about you in a personal statement.

Paragraph Two: Recent years have cemented that interest. In January 2012, my parents adopted my little brother Fred from China. Doctors in America subsequently diagnosed Fred with Duchenne Muscular Dystrophy (DMD). My parents were told that if Fred’s condition had been discovered in China, the (very poor) orphanage in which he spent the first 8+ years of his life would have recognized his DMD as a death sentence and denied him sustenance to hasten his demise.

Here’s another compelling anecdote to help explain my interest in public health. This is an appropriately personal detail for a personal statement—it’s a serious thing about my immediate family, but it doesn’t disclose anything that the admissions committee might find concerning or inappropriate.

If I were to take another pass through this paragraph, the main thing I would change is the last phrase. “Denied him sustenance to hasten his demise” is a little flowery. “Denied him food to hasten his death” is actually more powerful because it’s clearer and more direct.

Paragraph Three: It is not right that some people have access to the best doctors and treatment while others have no medical care. I want to pursue an MPH in Sociomedical Sciences at Columbia because studying social factors in health, with a particular focus on socio-health inequities, will prepare me to address these inequities. The interdisciplinary approach of the program appeals to me greatly as I believe interdisciplinary approaches are the most effective way to develop meaningful solutions to complex problems.

In this paragraph I make a neat and clear transition from discussing what sparked my interest in public health and health equity to what I am interested in about Columbia specifically: the interdisciplinary focus of the program, and how that focus will prepare me to solve complex health problems. This paragraph also serves as a good pivot point to start discussing my academic and professional background.

Paragraph Four: My undergraduate education has prepared me well for my chosen career. Understanding the underlying structure of a group’s culture is essential to successfully communicating with the group. In studying folklore and mythology, I’ve learned how to parse the unspoken structures of folk groups, and how those structures can be used to build bridges of understanding. For example, in a culture where most illnesses are believed to be caused by witchcraft, as is the case for the Zande people of central Africa, any successful health intervention or education program would of necessity take into account their very real belief in witchcraft.

In this paragraph, I link my undergraduate education and the skills I learned there to public health. The (very brief) analysis of tailoring health interventions to the Zande is a good way to show insight and show off the competencies I would bring to the program.

Paragraph Five: I now work in the healthcare industry for one of the largest providers of health benefits in the world. In addition to reigniting my passion for data and quantitative analytics, working for this company has immersed me in the business side of healthcare, a critical component of public health.

This brief paragraph highlights my relevant work experience in the healthcare industry. It also allows me to mention my work with data and quantitative analytics, which isn’t necessarily obvious from my academic background, which was primarily based in the social sciences.

Paragraph Six: I intend to pursue a PhD in order to become an expert in how social factors affect health, particularly as related to gender and sexuality. I intend to pursue a certificate in Sexuality, Sexual Health, and Reproduction. Working together with other experts to create effective interventions across cultures and societies, I want to help transform health landscapes both in America and abroad.

This final paragraph is about my future plans and intentions. Unfortunately, it’s a little disjointed, primarily because I discuss goals of pursuing a PhD before I talk about what certificate I want to pursue within the MPH program! Switching those two sentences and discussing my certificate goals within the MPH and then mentioning my PhD plans would make a lot more sense.

I also start two sentences in a row with “I intend,” which is repetitive.

The final sentence is a little bit generic; I might tailor it to specifically discuss a gender and sexual health issue, since that is the primary area of interest I’ve identified.

This was a successful personal statement; I got into (and attended!) the program. It has strong examples, clear organization, and outlines what interests me about the program (its interdisciplinary focus) and what competencies I would bring (a background in cultural analysis and experience with the business side of healthcare). However, a few slight tweaks would elevate this statement to the next level.

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Graduate School Personal Statement Examples You Can Find Online

So you need more samples for your personal statement for graduate school? Examples are everywhere on the internet, but they aren’t all of equal quality.

Most of examples are posted as part of writing guides published online by educational institutions. We’ve rounded up some of the best ones here if you are looking for more personal statement examples for graduate school.

Penn State Personal Statement Examples for Graduate School

This selection of ten short personal statements for graduate school and fellowship programs offers an interesting mix of approaches. Some focus more on personal adversity while others focus more closely on professional work within the field.

The writing in some of these statements is a little dry, and most deploy at least a few cliches. However, these are generally strong, serviceable statements that communicate clearly why the student is interested in the field, their skills and competencies, and what about the specific program appeals to them.

Cal State Sample Graduate School Personal Statements

These are good examples of personal statements for graduate school where students deploy lots of very vivid imagery and illustrative anecdotes of life experiences. There are also helpful comments about what works in each of these essays.

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However, all of these statements are definitely pushing the boundaries of acceptable length, as all are above 1000 and one is almost 1500 words! Many programs limit you to 500 words; if you don’t have a limit, you should try to keep it to two single-spaced pages at most (which is about 1000 words).

University of Chicago Personal Statement for Graduate School Examples

These examples of successful essays to the University of Chicago law school cover a wide range of life experiences and topics. The writing in all is very vivid, and all communicate clear messages about the students’ strengths and competencies.

Note, however, that these are all essays that specifically worked for University of Chicago law school. That does not mean that they would work everywhere. In fact, one major thing to note is that many of these responses, while well-written and vivid, barely address the students’ interest in law school at all! This is something that might not work well for most graduate programs.

Wheaton College Personal Statement for Graduate School Sample 10

This successful essay for law school from a Wheaton College undergraduate does a great job tracking the student’s interest in the law in a compelling and personal way. Wheaton offers other graduate school personal statement examples, but this one offers the most persuasive case for the students’ competencies. The student accomplishes this by using clear, well-elaborated examples, showing strong and vivid writing, and highlighting positive qualities like an interest in justice and empathy without seeming grandiose or out of touch.

Wheaton College Personal Statement for Graduate School Sample 1

Based on the background information provided at the bottom of the essay, this essay was apparently successful for this applicant. However, I’ve actually included this essay because it demonstrates an extremely risky approach. While this personal statement is strikingly written and the story is very memorable, it could definitely communicate the wrong message to some admissions committees. The student’s decision not to report the drill sergeant may read incredibly poorly to some admissions committees. They may wonder if the student’s failure to report the sergeant’s violence will ultimately expose more soldiers-in-training to the same kinds of abuses. This incident perhaps reads especially poorly in light of the fact that the military has such a notable problem with violence against women being covered up and otherwise mishandled

It’s actually hard to get a complete picture of the student’s true motivations from this essay, and what we have might raise real questions about the student’s character to some admissions committees. This student took a risk and it paid off, but it could have just as easily backfired spectacularly.

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Key Takeaways: Graduate School Personal Statement Examples

In this guide, we discussed why you need a personal statement and how it differs from a statement of purpose. (It’s more personal!)

We also discussed what you’ll find in a strong sample personal statement for graduate school:

  • A clear narrative about the applicant and why they are qualified for graduate study.
  • Specific examples to support that narrative.
  • Compelling reasons why the applicant and the program are a good fit for each other.
  • Strong writing, including clear organization and error-free, cliche-free language.
  • Appropriate boundaries—sharing without over-sharing.

Then, we provided three strong graduate school personal statement examples for different fields, along with analysis. We did a deep-dive on the third statement.

Finally, we provided a list of other sample grad school personal statements online.

What’s Next?

Want more advice on writing a personal statement ? See our guide.

Writing a graduate school statement of purpose? See our statement of purpose samples  and a nine-step process for writing the best statement of purpose possible .

If you’re writing a graduate school CV or resume, see our how-to guide to writing a CV , a how-to guide to writing a resume , our list of sample resumes and CVs , resume and CV templates , and a special guide for writing resume objectives .

Need stellar graduate school recommendation letters ? See our guide.

See our 29 tips for successfully applying to graduate school .

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successful mfa personal statement

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A successful mfa personal statement.

I recently received great news, that I've been admitted to the MFA program in creative writing at the University of Tampa. I spent a lot of time scouring the web for examples of successful personal statements, those all-important pieces of the application process. After a full day of agonizing over what to say in my personal statement, I finally gave up in exhaustion and submitted the following statement.

I'm posting this for anyone who may be on the lookout for samples that have worked for others. This one helped get me into the program I wanted, and is very much targeted for that specific program, which I think is key. Do some research. Find out what they're looking for. I hope this is helpful to someone, and if you're applying to MFA programs next year, I wish you the best.

(Holy Masochistic Manatees, Batman. Now I have to prove myself worthy of this thing.)

My grandmother rolled cigars in the HAV-A-TAMPA factory during World War II. She tells a story I’ve heard hundreds of times about a young lady working beside her who became so distracted by the smooth baritone of the lector’s reading that she lopped off the end of a finger with her cigar trimmer. Blood flowed, tobacco was ruined, and the woman lost her job. “But the worst thing,” Granny says, “is the poor girl never got to hear the end of that story.”

I am applying to the University of Tampa MFA in Creative Writing program to acquire the skills to produce consistently successful fiction. My goal is to publish novels and short stories for the rest of my life. I hope to find mentors in the program to lead me toward mastery of the craft of writing fiction. I seek to become a strong addition to a mutually supportive community of writers. During the next two years I intend to find my literary voice and establish myself as a serious writer. I am encouraged by having recently sold a short story for the first time.

The U.S. Army has a way of writing a soldier’s life story chapter by chapter. The constant uncertainty is exhilarating, but thankfully doesn’t last forever. Now that military retirement is upon me, I have new creative license to write my own next chapter. This MFA program is the logical next step toward achieving my long-term goals. It’s the right fit for my needs as an emerging writer, and I believe I will be an asset to the program.

This is a program with deep roots in the multicultural community I call home. As I return to Tampa for good, I find no writing program better suited to facilitate my transition from soldier to professional writer. Adding value in any way I could to the creative writing program at UT would be a tremendous enhancement to my sense of homecoming and assimilating back into the community and civilian life.

Writing fiction is my calling, and anything else I do is a means to that end. However, while working toward an MFA, I plan to teach. I am pursuing a high-school teaching position in the Tampa Bay Area through Troops to Teachers, a U.S. Department of Defense program that helps eligible military personnel begin new careers as public school teachers. Regardless of the position I find, UT’s low-residency program allows the flexibility to live anywhere and structure an effective writing schedule around daily work requirements.

I am eager to get to work participating in all the UT program has to offer graduate writing students. I am particularly interested in the Tampa Review Online. The possibility of gaining editing experience while learning what is involved in running a great online journal appeals to me. I look forward to UT’s Lectores public readings of MFA students’ work. I’m excited at the prospect of hearing my own work read there. Gathering together to tell stories is such a fundamental social activity. It fills a hard-wired need we all have as human beings.

My ability to perform independently has been tested and proven in the classroom, the boardroom, and on the battlefield. Each and every one of my performance evaluations attest to it. Hand picked to represent the Army at the U.S. Naval War College, I earned a fully accredited MA in National Security and Strategic Studies during a grueling one-year residence.

Certain aspects of my education and experience do not appear on a transcript. I left home at the age of nineteen with no financial support from my then single mother. The first member of my family to attend university, I lacked money, direction, and maturity. I worked multiple jobs, tutored beginning Spanish, and coached international students preparing for the Test of English as a Foreign Language (TOEFL). Despite my full work schedule, only the desperate measure of enlisting in the National Guard allowed me to continue funding my education. Military life suited me, so I earned an R.O.T.C. commission. Having found direction in life and solved the financial challenges, I soon paid off my student loan and embarked on a military career. Maturity came later. I started writing at the age of twenty-eight, while on my first deployment at Guantanamo Bay Naval Base during the Cuban/Haitian refugee crisis of 1994. I witnessed people reduced to their core natures, many whose loved ones had been taken by sharks, drowned, or simply disappeared. Those stories and others must be told, and only fiction will serve to convey the kind of truth worth a fingertip in the cigar trimmer.

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What to say in your Statement of Purpose? (for an MFA Creative Writing)

Okay, so you’ve decided to apply to an MFA program in creative writing, and you are saddled with the unenviable task of writing a “statement of purpose” or “letter of intent” as I decided to call it in our new low-residency MFA program ‘s application requirements. You’re undoubtedly flummoxed, thinking what the heck do I say, and where do I begin?

This is a kind of writing we’re not used to doing, and it’s a difficult tightrope to walk between bragging about yourself (which of course you need to do, at least a little) and sounding like a blowhard and an egotist; between describing your past and your imagined future, and boring your audience to tears. And there’s a lot riding on this statement or letter. It has to represent you to someone you probably don’t know, whose decision may decide your fate.

So I get it; you’re nervous. So was I when I wrote my first truly awful first draft of a statement of purpose. I showed it to a kind professor, who told me it was terrible and gave me some advice on what to write. Here, after many years of giving similar advice to students applying to graduate programs, and as I contemplate the letters of intent I’m about to receive for our new program, is my best advice for how to proceed, if you’re applying to a program like ours.

Tell about your past

Keep it brief and to the point, but do give some information about where you’re coming from. Remember that your main focus should always be to convince the program that you are ready to take on graduate work in creative writing. We don’t care that you’ve always loved to write (well, we do, but we kind of assume that), or that you only recently discovered your love of writing (if so, how ready are you for grad school?). What we really care about is how you’ve prepared yourself as a writer. That might mean discussing your English major and the kind of reading you like best (in and out of class). Or if you didn’t major in English in college, then you may want to say something about your major, why it led you to creative writing, and what kind of literature background you do have. Bear in mind that writers need to be avid readers, and that an MFA can be a qualification to teach literature. You’ll need to be able to pull your weight in a graduate literature class, so you need some background in literature, and you’ll need good research skills.

If you’re applying to my program, then I’ll see your transcripts eventually, but I’ll see your letter of intent first. We don’t ask for the full application until after we’ve evaluated your letter and writing sample, so we need to know something about your educational background up front. But we’ll get more detail when we see your transcripts.

Tell about your present

If you’re applying to grad school straight out of college, this may not be much different than telling about your educational background. But if you’ve been out of school for awhile, then I’d be interested to know what you’re doing now. Even if you’re in school now, tell some about recent accomplishments and activities. Since my program is a low-residency program, I expect that most students will be working or doing something while they’re in grad school. Let me know a little about what that is. Also, if you’ve published your writing recently, it’s good to let me know about that. I’m also curious about where people live (or plan to live when they’re in our program), since you don’t have to relocate to Columbus, MS.

Tell about your writing

If I could I’d make that heading double-bold, I would. The most important thing you can do in your statement of purpose is to give a clear and concise description of the kind of writing you do. This might mean listing some of your influences, or it might mean describing your style. You can talk about what you want to write, as well as what you have written. And by all means, tell me what genre(s) you’re interested in. Our program doesn’t require that you apply in one genre only, and cross-genre work is encouraged. But remember that I’m thinking about filling classes and putting people together who will work well together. Sure, I want to pick the best writers, but I also have to be pragmatic and pick a range or writers working in different genres and styles. Your writing sample will tell me a lot, but it is likely one piece or one genre, so here you can describe your interests as a writer. There is no ‘right’ answer here, so just be as honest and as clear about your writing as you can be.

Tell about our program

Okay, we know our program, so tell what interests  you in our program. What makes you want want to spend a couple years of your life in it? Be honest, but also tailor what you say to the program you’re applying to. I tell my students all the time that it isn’t lying to say you want to do different things at different places. You’re just omitting the obvious part of the equation: “[If I’m accepted to your program], I want to do X” Chart out your life if it takes the path to the program you’re applying to. What makes you excited about that path? Tell me that. And be as specific as possible. Everyone wants to enter an MFA program to learn to write better. Why is this program the one where you can do that? Why does it meet your needs? Essentially, you want to show me that you know what you’re getting into. You want me to see that you can set realistic goals and goals that my program can fulfill.

Other things you might mention

There are lots of other details about yourself that might be useful to mention in a statement of purpose. They won’t be your main emphasis, probably, but could be worth including. Your family background could be interesting, especially if it relates to your writing goals. Certainly mention it if you have had publications or work experience in writing-related fields. Volunteer work, especially if it is related to writing or literature, can be an asset. And other work experience, especially if you write about it, is worth a mention. Give a little sense of who you are, in other words, but don’t feel like you have to give your life story. Include only the most important details that are relevant to your writing or your education.

How to write the statement/letter

So far I’ve concentrated on what to write in your statement of purpose or letter of intent. But what about how to write it? I’m looking for a somewhat formal letter (which is one reason I like calling it a letter of intent). It doesn’t have to sound as stiff as a formal business letter or an academic essay, but it should sound more formal than an email or post on social media. I don’t mind if you sound excited (I might even like it, unless it feels like you’re overdoing it), but I do want to see your analytical writing skills on display. Your letter should be well organized, and it should contain no grammatical errors (or very few, but do your best to make it as perfect as possible). Your letter should be concise —don’t say in 10 words what could be said in 5.

But maybe the best advice I can give you is to relax and be yourself (or your slightly formal self). After all, I want to accept you into the program. I’m looking for the most exciting and interesting and competent writers I can find. Let me know who you are and what you write (and what your background is), and let me judge whether you seem like a good fit for the program.

How to make your statement/letter better

The best way to improve your statement is to revise it several times before you submit. If you’re a writer, that’s a rule you should live by for any writing. Even better than revising on your own is if you can let someone else read your letter and give you feedback. If possible, give it to someone who knows you and knows what a letter like this should include. I often ask students to let me see their statements of purpose or letters of intent if they want me to write a recommendation letter for them. I want to be able to give advice, but I also want to know what they’ve told the schools they’re applying to. That way, I can pitch my recommendation letter in a way the complements their letter. So don’t feel like you’re burdening your recommenders if you ask them to review your letter. You may be helping them to write a better letter for you!

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I am a poet, translator, and professor of literature and creative writing at Mississippi University for Women, where I direct the Low-Res MFA in Creative Writing, the undergraduate concentration in creative writing, and the Eudora Welty Writers' Symposium. I have published three books of poetry, Barrier Island Suite, Time Capsules, and Landscapes and Architectures, as well as a collection of translations of the Belgian poet Paul Snoek, Hercules, Richelieu, and Nostradamus. I live in Columbus with my wife, Kim Whitehead; son, Aidan; and dog, Aleida. View more posts

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This was helpful. Thank you.

You’re welcome! Thank you for commenting.

hi! Thank you for writing this helpful post. I was wondering if you had a ‘typical’ length of the statements you see? What would you say is the ideal length?

We ask for 1-2 pages single-spaced. That gives you plenty of room to write. I would encourage a statement that is more than one page. Of course, you should always follow the guidelines of the program you’re applying to, and you should try to say as much as you can in the space allotted. You don’t want to write filler, obviously, and you do want to present your best case for why you should be in that program.

Thanks for a great post. Your advice is golden. I was looking for tips on writing for entrance into an MFA Fine Art program, and What you said readily applies. Thank you! By the way- if I was looking for a writing program, I would definitely consider yours based on what you expressed in this post. I wish you the best. 🙂

Thank you, Timothy! I’m glad you found thus useful when applying in art.

A very insightful post. Though I have a question to ask, how should I show my credibility as a writer, if I am not an literature graduate. Like for my case, I am masters in computer science and been working as an engineer from past 7.5 years, but I have been writing from a very young age and I have a literary blog from past 5 years. Apart from it I published a short story on kindle, last year. Your advice would be really helpful.

Thank you, NJ. I think you really have your answer here in your reply. It’s fine to mention your prior masters and your career as an engineer. That’s fascination material. Talking about your blog and your publication is also good, as is talking about your experience as a reader, whether that’s in classes or on your own, and how your career and your reading inform your writing. If you’ve been in a writing group or gone to any workshops or seminars, they’re great to mention, but aren’t a requirement. Think less in terms of sounding impressive and more in terms of showing that you’ve done your homework and know something about the writing world. You don’t have to overdo it in your letter — your writing sample may tell us enough — but the letter is an opportuntiy to fill in some of the gaps about things you’ve done that might not be apparent on your transcript or résumé.

Thank you so much for the advice and help 🙂 I will keep these points in mind while writing my letter.

Well it looks like this is the post that keeps on giving! I, too, am appreciating these pearls of wisdom. Any advice on the letters of recommendation that are required for application submissions? My college years are very spread out over the past couple of decades. I earned my Bachelor’s in 2014. Only one of my creative writing professors remain, and I fully intend to ask her, but I need 3 recommendations. Because I tend to keep my writing to myself, I literally have no one who can speak on my behalf. I’m a great little letter writer, but I hardly think they want to hear from my personal friends! Making a joke, but I really am stuck. How important are these recommendations and who are people using? I have until February 2021 to find 3 people.

Thank you for the compliment. I have actually written a post or two on letters of recommendation. Let me send you to my recent post “MFA Applications Advice 2020,” though. It has links to my most recent posts on the MFA application process and also to that category on the blog, so you can find all the posts I’ve written on the topic. https://kendalldunkelberg.com/2020/09/09/mfa-applications-advice-2020/

Now, let me address your specific question. Having at least one professor is good. If you haven’t worked with anyone on your writing recently, then you might ask if she would be willing to read something you’ve written and are considering for the writing sample. I’m sure I would do that for a former student. In normal times, I might suggest going to a weekend workshop between now and September where you could have someoen look at your work, but those might be hard to find and unsafe to attend. That does put more pressure on applicants right now — it’s hard to connect with people who might recommend you. You’re right that friends should be low on you list unless they are writing friends. Family is generally not a good idea either. I would consider your boss or co-workers who can speak to your professionalism and communication skills. And I would also encourage you to track down one or more of your old professors even if they’ve moved on or retired from your undergraduate institution. Many of us would still write a letter for a former student even if we’re no longer affiliated with their alma mater. The good news is that you are thinking about this early, and you have time to track people down or to find someone who may not be an academic but who can speak to your professionalism. Believe it or not, I’ve had many applicants in your same position, some who have been out of school much longer than you have. If you applied to a program like ours, your letters would not seem unusual at all. In my experience, the letters do not make or break an application: they can help a lot, but they usually confirm what I have come to know about an applicant through the process. A few weaker letters from people who aren’t familiar with the academic world or with writing these kinds of letters won’t kill your application. They won’t help as much as one from someone who knows what to say, but I always consider the letter writer as well as the letter, and I know that it’s not always possible to reconnect with former professors when applicants have been out of school for awhile. The experience you’ve gained in those years will probably far outweigh the lack of a letter from a professor. Find someone who can speak to that experience, even if they aren’t a writer or an academic.

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Personal statement for mfa applicants.

Within your personal statement, we suggest that you think of it as an introduction to your writing sample.  You can talk about yourself, your aesthetics, your past experiences, why you think Brown Literary Arts is a good fit for you, etc. While the Graduate School asks that your personal statement be no more than two pages, our Department recommends that your personal statement be 1-4 double-spaced pages.

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MFA Applications III: The Writing Sample

The writing sample matters. Know what to send, what not to send, when to send it, and for whom to ask for help. Read this guide—the competition is stiff.

Also known as The Only Thing That Really Matters in an MFA application, the writing sample is where you should be putting all your creative energy. It should represent your best work. But can it actually be made better in the few months leading up to application deadlines?

With MFA admissions folks, it’s more about seeking out and recognizing potential, rather than about expecting perfectly polished work. There’s got to be something at the heart of the work that’s purely you and speaks to the latent powers of the Future You after two or three years of intensive schooling.

But make no mistake, it’s got to be good. Competition will be stiff.

This guide in the MFA Applications series is a particularly tough one, because the writing sample is the most important piece of your package—yet it’s also the most personal. So what advice can I give you? Gleaned from personal experience, instructors, professors, articles, and program directors, here’s a shortlist of things to keep in mind.

Quality, not Quantity

Don’t push the 40-page limit if you have an absolutely clean 20 pager that you love. Or a 15-pager, for that matter. The risk is that a more mediocre second writing sample might let the air out of your transcendent shorter piece.

Receiving Rejection

You may only get into a few schools, or you may get into none, but don’t take it personally, and don’t give up on your writing. After you reach a certain level of competence, the admissions process is more a question of taste rather than a lack or abundance of technical skill. In other words, a work may be great, but not up the reader’s alley. All things being equal, admissions readers (like all first-line-of-defense readers) are going to recommend a piece they love, rather than a technically-proficient piece that doesn’t make a personal imprint.

The Importance of Feedback Pay for it if you can afford it, as long as the reader is someone you trust, or try to get it for free from friends, but good God, man, don’t submit without at least a second pair of eyes giving it a once-over. And not just for typos, but for content, flow, thematic power, characterization. Misplaced commas or misspelled words can be a huge irritant, but it may not be a deal killer if you’re the second coming of Michael Chabon. Stories that don’t make sense, or lack well-rendered characters, are a different case all together. In addition to yours truly , there are a number of people and consultancies that provide reading services—just ask Google. If you can...

Solicit feedback from someone whose sensibilities are similar to yours—someone whose suggestions consistently hit the mark without interfering with your story's intent.

This is very important. You don’t want the edits to change the core of your story, its meaning, the thing that makes it important to you. You’ll feel bad about submitting it, and if you don’t get in, you’ll always wonder if it’s because you sold out on the advice of someone you didn’t trust, whose instincts were different from your own.

Following Rules

This one was easy for me, being the anal retentive, OCD, rule-follower that I am. 40 pages means 40 pages. Times New Roman means – guess what - Times New Roman, not Courier. Paperclips don’t mean staples.

Pretty Words—Meh

Some, maybe many, maybe all, admissions readers aren’t content with beautiful passages and evocative descriptions. You need to strike an emotional chord. Magazine readers, agents, and editors say the same; in order to grab your reader, the work has to speak from deep inside your heart. Evocative and emotional resonance is important to demonstrate—because it’s harder to teach than the purely technical stuff. If you can come in with a unique voice and gutsy, emotional chops, someone's going to like you.

MFAs as Readers

It's true. Most—but not all —schools employ their currently enrolled students for a first pass at the appallingly-named "slush pile." I don’t know if that’s good or bad. Maybe some good stuff slips through. Or, one positive aspect of this process may be that the reader on the other side may not be too different than you. You’re relatively new to writing, and you’ve recently discovered you want to do it for a living. Your first-round audience may be, in fact, very much like you, therefore making your work more "relatable." But you and I know relatability is itself a fiction. No two MFAs are the same. Oh well. Either way, it is what it is.

Don’t Write Only for an Admissions Audience

That said, it’s not wise to write purposely for your audience, unless it’s true to your personal style. Don’t pretend to be dark because the director has a reputation for loving literary horror. Don’t keep it short only because a faculty member is a pioneer of flash fiction. And certainly don’t riff on styles of notable alumni only because you think it’ll catch their eye.

Write stuff that means something to you.

You can’t fake a love for your work, nor can you imitate someone else’s style with the same panache with which you deliver your own. And every reader is on the hunt for a sample that’s fun to read, beautifully and meaningfully rendered, and unique to you as a candidate.

Above all, I recommend getting on it ASAP. You need time to draft, edit, rewrite, get feedback, and repeat as necessary. You’ll want to plan ahead out of consideration for your readers, too. Don't ask your supporters to move mountains only because you’re procrastinating, you’ve lost track of time, or because you planned poorly. This is especially true if you’re asking the help of your busy friends on a pro bono basis.

Story coaches can get expensive, so if you’re going down the professional route, you’ll want to give the coach a clean draft, give her time to respond, and work out a revision schedule so she can comment on a second draft. Then when application deadlines start coming round, you can complete a final draft based on a couple rounds of feedback, at least. If you want to do more than a couple of major rewrites, you’ll need to pull the entire schedule in by a few weeks or months, depending on how quickly you can produce. Personally, I'm a slow writer, so I'd err on the side of more, rather than less, time. Once you lay out the schedule, it may appear to you that time is running out. And you would be correct.

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A couple of years ago, I made the decision to apply to MFA programs in creative writing. Compared to medical school or law school, the application process for an MFA can sometimes feel like a crapshoot, with the odds of getting into a fully-funded program hovering somewhere below four or five percent (and some programs like Iowa, Michigan, Michener—gulp—even less!). Still, it seems that every year, a few applicants manage to get admitted to a handful of programs, which brings up the question of whether the process is as random as one might initially think.

As a caveat, I’ve never served as a reader for any programs’ admissions committee (for a genuine insider look, follow Elizabeth McCracken’s twitter and listen to everything she says!), but I happen to have been lucky enough to get accepted to several fully funded schools on my first try. Whenever someone asks me for advice, I get a little queasy, because I barely knew what I was doing back then. However, I’d like to think that I’ve had some time to reflect on the process and have spoken to many people, including students who’ve been accepted and faculty members. I’ve since graduated from my MFA and hold (at the time of writing) a Zell postgraduate fellowship in fiction at the University of Michigan.

I’ll skip the general consensus—polish the writing sample, apply to more than one school, get feedback on your materials, etc. Instead, I’ll offer some less common ones that I thought worked for me. I hope they help with your application, and I’m certainly indebted to many writers who came before me and similarly shed light on their own experiences.

  • Presenting yourself . Most of us writers tend to dislike being pigeonholed, or to accept the idea that there are certain themes or styles we keep reverting to again and again.  I definitely struggled with this (and continue to) but for the application process, presenting ourselves in a way that is unified and meaningful can sometimes spell the difference between sticking out in the pile or not. I write a lot about the Philippines, where I grew up, and this location not only influences the setting of my stories, but also informs my thematic sensibility as well as my identity. My personal statement talked about my background growing up in a predominantly Christian and Chinese-Filipino family, the conflicts at the dinner table as a result of our ethnic and religious upbringing, and how these issues are explored in my work. My fiction samples were chosen with this in mind (of course, they also happened to be my best work at the time), and I imagine my recommendation letters further attested to my experience as an immigrant. As a result, I believe I demonstrated myself as someone who deeply cares about what I write and has something important to say about the world around me. A place or region might not be the element that binds your application materials together. It might be a style, philosophy, or occupation—but whatever it is, it should resonate meaningfully in all aspects of your work (you can even ask your recommenders to talk about it). If readers can come away with the feeling that they know you and what motivates you to write, then you only need to show that you also can write.
  • Range and length of sample . This might sound like a contradiction to the above, but it really isn’t. Rather, this is the part where you get a chance to display your skill and flexibility as a writer. For my sample, I chose three stories with varying styles: fabulist, comedic, and straight realist. They also differed in their lengths: short, medium, and long. What kept them all together was the setting of the Philippines, which again referred back to my personal statement and kept them from feeling haphazardly chosen. You might wonder if this is a good idea, since schools often just ask for 25 to 30 pages of creative sample, and might even say something to the effect that they’re looking for “a demonstration of sustained, quality work.” I debated with myself on the correct approach, and you might not agree with my conclusions: If programs clearly ask for just a single story, and if they feel more traditional in their aesthetics, then perhaps sending a longer story is better. However, the risk of sending one story is the risk of increasing subjectivity, and has to do more with the practical reality of the selection process than anything else. We all know that readers have different tastes, and if for some reason they don’t connect with the first few pages of your work, they most likely won’t read on. If you present them with a shorter work first, they might be willing to read the beginning of the second story, and if they still don’t like that, then the third. If each story is different stylistically, you’re increasing the chances that one of these would be appealing to the readers, and they might reconsider the stories that they passed on the first read.
  • Potential . I’ve heard anecdotes of applicants being turned down because the admission committee thought they were “overqualified” to be studying in an MFA program. This probably doesn’t apply to most of us, but the principle remains: administrators are looking for people they believe can get something out of the two-to-three-year experience. In other words, they’re looking for writers’ potential as much as writers’ ability. I can certainly speak to this. When I applied, I’d barely taken any creative writing workshops. I’d just started writing literary fiction and I was unpublished. I took screenwriting as an undergrad (a related field, I know) but I still emphasized the things I anticipated learning from an MFA, including the benefit of being in a community. I did not downplay my background in screenwriting (and as it happened, also journalism), but I was able to articulate how each tradition influenced me as a writer. You might be someone who’s majored in creative writing as an undergrad and knew for a long time that you want to write literary fiction. That’s okay (in fact I think that’s great!). But you still have to find a way to communicate your limitations while playing to your strengths. To a large extent, it seems to me more of an attitude check: nobody wants to be with the writer who feels privileged and entitled to a seat at the MFA table.
  • Preparedness . Sometimes, perhaps because I got in on my first try, I wonder if my acceptance was a fluke, and if I was really ready for the MFA experience. Of course, I’ve heard many people who felt similarly, some who even have a lot of creative writing background under their belt. The impostor syndrome aside, I do think that it’s good to gain as much exposure to the literary world as possible before applying to an MFA program. This not only gives you a better sense of why you write and what you write (going back to my first point), but moreover it increases the likelihood that once you are accepted, you’ll know how to make the most out of your time and the resources being offered. I had a wonderful experience at the University of Michigan—indeed, I’ve never read or written more in my life than I did at that point, and I could not have asked for a better set of cohort or mentors. I have grown exponentially as a writer. Rightly or wrongly, though, I did consciously set myself apart as someone who was a beginner, who had the most to learn about writing literary fiction. This attitude has enabled me to develop in leaps and bounds. At the same time, I could see how—had I been further along in my progress—I could’ve used the MFA in a different way: writing that novel I’ve always wanted, giving more thought to the direction of my career, the business side of the industry, finding an agent, etc. I think there’s something valiant and admirable about finding yourself as a result of experimenting during the MFA years, but it might also be worth considering and being aware of the different trajectories in entering a program. As a suggestion for preparing yourself pre-MFA-application, I highly suggest going to a conference (the Napa Writers’ Conference, Wesleyan Writers Conference, and the Key West Literary Seminar being some of the more well-known ones I’ve personally attended and recommend).
  • On success . My final note on the application process is less of a tip and more of a reminder. When the time comes around to February or March, and should you find yourself not getting into the programs of your choice, recuperate from the rejections and take them in stride. View the result both as a sobering reminder of the odds stacked up against anyone applying for an MFA, and also as an opportunity to become better prepared, so that if you do get in later, you will be in an improved position. Similarly, should you be fortunate enough to get into your top programs, view the achievement as the means to an end, and not the end in itself. If a study were to be conducted on MFA admittances, I’m almost sure that the findings would show that acceptances to programs are in no way predictive of future success in publishing. Only diligence and perseverance are positive indicators of writerly success, and in this sense, we all can take comfort in the fact that all of us have a fair shot if we’re in it for the long haul.

Image: The Hopwood Room, where some workshops are held at the Helen Zell Writers’ Program, University of Michigan.

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Artist Statement of Purpose Examples: Crafting Your Fine Art Personal Statement

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When it comes to pursuing a career in fine art, a well-crafted artist statement of purpose can be your ticket to success. Whether you’re applying for an MFA, BFA, or a position in the art world, your personal statement holds the key to showcasing your passion, creativity, and dedication.

In this comprehensive guide, we will dive deep into artist statement of purpose examples, helping you understand how to articulate your love for art effectively and create a compelling personal statement.

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  • The Importance of a Personal Statement

Your personal statement, often interchangeably referred to as a statement of purpose (SOP), is your opportunity to tell your unique story as an artist. It allows admissions committees or potential employers to get to know you beyond your portfolio or resume.

Your personal statement should convey your artistic journey, influences, experiences, and future aspirations. It’s a chance to make a lasting impression and demonstrate why you are a perfect fit for your chosen fine art program or career in the art world.

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  • Crafting a Captivating Introduction

Personal Statement

Your personal statement should begin with a captivating introduction that immediately grabs the reader’s attention. Think of it as the opening scene in a captivating movie. Here’s an example:

“Art has always been my muse, guiding my life’s path towards creative expression. From the moment I held a paintbrush, I knew that art was more than just colors on a canvas; it was a form of storytelling, a means to connect with the world and express the deepest facets of my being.”

Expressing Your Love for Fine Art

Your introduction should convey your deep-seated love for fine art. You can talk about when and how your passion for art first ignited. Maybe it was a childhood memory of visiting an art museum, or perhaps you had an inspiring art teacher who encouraged your creativity. Sharing this personal connection with art can draw readers into your narrative.

Defining Your Artistic Identity

In the introduction, you should also touch upon what makes your artistic identity unique. What sets you apart as an artist? Do you have a signature style, technique, or theme that defines your work? This is the time to provide a glimpse into what makes your art special.

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  • Sharing Concrete Examples of Your Work and Experiences

Statement Examples

Once you’ve captured your reader’s attention with a compelling introduction, it’s time to delve into the heart of your personal statement by sharing concrete examples of your work and experiences. This section should showcase your artistic journey and demonstrate your dedication to your craft.

Highlighting Artistic Milestones

In this section, you can mention significant milestones in your artistic journey. These could include exhibitions, awards, or collaborations that have shaped your development as an artist. For instance:

“Over the years, I have had the privilege of showcasing my work in prestigious galleries and museums, such as the Tate Modern in London. These opportunities not only exposed my art to a wider audience but also pushed me to constantly evolve as an artist.”

By highlighting these achievements, you demonstrate your commitment to your art and your ability to thrive in the competitive art world.

Discussing Artistic Influences

Artists are often inspired by the work of others. Share the artists or artworks that have influenced your creative process. You might mention famous painters, sculptors, or contemporary artists whose work resonates with you. Explaining how these influences have shaped your artistic perspective can provide insight into your unique approach to art.

Detailing Your Educational Background

If you’ve pursued formal education in fine art, whether it’s an undergraduate degree, a BFA, or an MFA, this is the place to discuss it. Talk about your academic journey, the courses that had a profound impact on you, and any mentors who guided your artistic growth. Be sure to convey how your education has contributed to your development as an artist.

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  • Exploring Specific Interests and Influences

Art and Design Personal Statement

Art is a vast and diverse field, and this section allows you to explore your specific interests and influences in greater detail. Whether you’re passionate about painting, sculpture, graphic design, or any other art form, here’s where you can delve into the heart of your creative focus.

Passion for a Specific Art Form

Share your deep-seated passion for your chosen art form. Explain why you are drawn to it and how it allows you to express yourself. For example:

“My fascination with seascapes and the fragility of nature has been a recurring theme in my work. It’s a subject that allows me to explore the vastness and immensity of the natural world while conveying its fragility.”

Artistic Inspirations

Discuss the artists or movements that have had a profound impact on your work within your chosen art form. Whether it’s the abstract expressionism of Jackson Pollock or the precision of Renaissance art, detailing these influences adds depth to your personal statement.

Your Creative Process

Take the reader on a journey through your creative process. How do you approach your work? Do you start with sketches, embrace spontaneity, or meticulously plan each piece? Sharing your process can provide insight into your artistic mindset.

  • Articulating Your Goals and Aspirations

Fine Art Personal Statement

Your personal statement should not only reflect on your past but also look to the future. What are your artistic goals and aspirations? Where do you see yourself in the art world? This section allows you to articulate your vision and ambition as an artist.

Short-Term Goals

Discuss your immediate goals within the art world. Whether it’s participating in specific exhibitions, collaborating with fellow artists, or mastering a new technique, these short-term objectives reveal your drive and commitment.

Long-Term Aspirations

Take a broader view and share your long-term aspirations. Do you dream of curating your own gallery, teaching art to the next generation, or becoming an internationally recognized artist? Expressing these ambitions paints a vivid picture of your future in the art world.

Why This Program or Career?

If you’re applying to a specific program, be it an MFA or a job opportunity, explain why it’s the perfect fit for your artistic journey. Mention how the program’s curriculum, faculty, or mission align with your goals.

  • Tailoring Your Statement for MFA and BFA Applications

MFA and BFA

Depending on whether you’re applying for a Master of Fine Arts (MFA) or a Bachelor of Fine Arts (BFA) program, there are specific elements to emphasize in your personal statement.

MFA Program Emphasis

For MFA applicants, emphasize your commitment to furthering your craft and the advanced level of artistry you bring to the table. Discuss your readiness for the intensive program and your eagerness to engage in critical discourse with fellow artists.

“Enrolling in the MFA program at [University Name] is a natural step in my journey to become a professional artist. I am ready to immerse myself in a community of dedicated artists, engage in rigorous critiques, and push the boundaries of my creative practice.”

BFA Program Emphasis

Similarly, BFA applicants should convey their passion and readiness to embark on their educational journey. Highlight your enthusiasm for learning and your willingness to explore various aspects of fine art.

“I am eager to embark on the BFA program, where I can continue to refine my graphic design and photography skills. This program’s focus on nurturing emerging artists aligns perfectly with my goals of honing my craft and exploring new artistic horizons.”

  • Showcasing Your Love for Art History

Art History

For those with a passion for art history, your personal statement should reflect your deep love for the subject and your desire to explore its intricacies.

Unearthing Art Historical Insights

Share your favorite periods, artists, or art movements within the scope of art history. Discuss why you find these aspects particularly fascinating and how they have influenced your perspective.

“Art history has been my guiding light in understanding the evolution of artistic expression. I am particularly captivated by the Romantic period and its emphasis on emotion, individualism, and nature, as seen in the works of artists like Caspar David Friedrich.”

Academic Pursuits

If you’re applying for graduate studies in art history, discuss your academic interests and the areas of art history you wish to explore further. Mention any research projects, papers, or presentations that showcase your dedication to the field.

“ During my undergraduate studies, I delved into the complexities of American art history. My thesis on the impact of Abstract Expressionism on post-war American society was a testament to my commitment to scholarly pursuits in this field .”

  • Conclusion: Crafting Your Artistic Narrative

Crafting a compelling artist statement of purpose is an art form in itself. By drawing inspiration from these examples and infusing your personal experiences, you can create a statement that reflects your passion for fine art.

Remember, your personal statement is your opportunity to shine and convey why you are a perfect fit for your chosen fine art program or career in the art world.

In closing, let your personal statement be a testament to your love for art and your unwavering commitment to the world of creativity. Use it as a canvas to paint your story, one brushstroke at a time, and let your passion shine through every word. Your artistic journey begins with your statement of purpose, so make it a masterpiece.

With this comprehensive guide, you now have the tools and inspiration to craft a personal statement that leaves a lasting impression and sets you on a path toward success in the world of fine art. Embrace your creativity, share your story, and let your love for art guide you on this incredible artistic journey.

What should I include in my artist statement of purpose?

Your statement should cover your artistic journey, influences, experiences, and future aspirations. Use concrete examples to illustrate your passion for fine art.

How long should my personal statement be?

Aim for a concise statement, typically around 500-800 words. Be sure to follow any specific word limit guidelines provided by the institution or program.

Can I use samples of my work in my statement?

Absolutely! Including images or descriptions of your work can add depth to your statement and showcase your artistic abilities.

Should I mention specific artists or artworks that inspire me?

Yes, mentioning artists or artworks that have influenced you can provide insight into your artistic perspective and passion.

How important is the artist statement in the application process?

Your personal statement is a crucial component of your application. It allows admissions committees to understand your unique voice, passion, and suitability for their program.

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Table of Contents

  • • The Importance of a Personal Statement
  • • Crafting a Captivating Introduction
  • • Sharing Concrete Examples of Your Work and Experiences
  • • Exploring Specific Interests and Influences
  • • Articulating Your Goals and Aspirations
  • • Tailoring Your Statement for MFA and BFA Applications
  • • Showcasing Your Love for Art History
  • • Conclusion: Crafting Your Artistic Narrative

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(LANSING, MICH) The Michigan Department of Insurance and Financial Services (DIFS) is warning consumers about the rising frequency of scams where victims receive spoofed calls or texts from criminals posing as bank or credit union representatives in an attempt to access customer accounts and steal customers’ money and information. In a spoofed call, the caller ID will make it look like the call is coming from the credit union or bank even though it is a scam.

“Spoofed call scams are becoming more sophisticated, and once they have you on the line, the caller will try to use fear and false urgency to pressure you to act immediately, putting you at risk of losing substantial amounts of money and disclosing your personal information,” said DIFS Director Anita Fox . “Remember that your financial institution will never reach out to you requesting your password or other personal information to access your account. When in doubt, hang up with the caller and check with your bank or credit union directly using the phone number from your statement or card.”

In these scams, criminals use “spoofing” to make their calls or texts appear as if they are coming from your financial institution. In the call or text, the scammers may falsely claim that there is an issue with your account, such as unauthorized transactions or overdrafts, and offer to resolve it. They will then ask for account credentials or personal information, which they can use to access and drain your account.

These scams rely on psychological tricks to get you to share sensitive information. Never provide your financial details to unsolicited callers.

Here are some key steps to protect yourself from falling prey to financial scams:

  • Do Not Share Information: Never give out personal or account information to anyone who calls you, even for "verification purposes." Only share such details with organizations you have contacted directly.
  • Verify Caller Identity: If contacted about an urgent account issue, immediately hang up and call your financial institution using a trusted number from your debit/credit card, account statement, or official correspondence. Avoid using numbers provided in unsolicited texts or voicemails.
  • Use Multifactor Authentication: Optimize your account security by using multifactor authentication (MFA), which requires a second step after entering your password, such as security codes sent via text or email, in order to access your account. It is crucial that you never share these security codes with anyone. MFA can also include biometric verification like fingerprints, retina scans, face recognition, or passcodes from an authentication app.

The DIFS Fraud Investigation Unit (FIU) investigates criminal and fraudulent activity related to the insurance and financial markets and DIFS works with the Attorney General and other state, county, and local law enforcement to investigate these cases and refer them for prosecution. In addition to the work done by the FIU, DIFS also offers a variety of resources to help fight fraud, including the DIFS website , publications, videos, and the DIFS Locator , which enables consumers to verify that they are working with properly licensed individuals and businesses in the insurance and financial services industries.

Consumers who have questions or disputes that cannot be directly resolved with their financial institutions can contact DIFS Monday through Friday 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. at 877-999-6442 or file a complaint online at Michigan.gov/DIFScomplaints .

The mission of the Michigan Department of Insurance and Financial Services is to ensure access to safe and secure insurance and financial services fundamental for the opportunity, security, and success of Michigan residents, while fostering economic growth and sustainability in both industries. In addition, the Department provides consumer protection, outreach, and financial literacy and education services to Michigan residents. For more information, visit Michigan.gov/DIFS or follow the Department on Facebook , X , or LinkedIn .

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Ticketmaster hacked in what’s believed to be a spree hitting snowflake customers, researcher says snowflake customers hit by mass scraping ... "but nobody noticed.".

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Ticketmaster hacked in what’s believed to be a spree hitting Snowflake customers

Cloud storage provider Snowflake said that accounts belonging to multiple customers have been hacked after threat actors obtained credentials through info-stealing malware or by purchasing them on online crime forums.

Ticketmaster parent Live Nation—which disclosed Friday that hackers gained access to data it stored through an unnamed third-party provider— told TechCrunch the provider was Snowflake. The live-event ticket broker said it identified the hack on May 20, and a week later, a “criminal threat actor offered what it alleged to be Company user data for sale via the dark web.”

Ticketmaster is one of six Snowflake customers to be hit in the hacking campaign, said independent security researcher Kevin Beaumont, citing conversations with people inside the affected companies. Australia’s Signal Directorate said Saturday it knew of “successful compromises of several companies utilizing Snowflake environments.” Researchers with security firm Hudson Rock said in a now-deleted post that Santander, Spain’s biggest bank, was also hacked in the campaign. The researchers cited online text conversations with the threat actor. Last month, Santander disclosed a data breach affecting customers in Chile, Spain, and Uruguay.

“The tl;dr of the Snowflake thing is mass scraping has been happening, but nobody noticed, and they're pointing at customers for having poor credentials,” Beaumont wrote on Mastodon. “It appears a lot of data has gone walkies from a bunch of orgs.”

Word of the hacks came weeks after a hacking group calling itself ShinyHunters took credit for breaching Santander and Ticketmaster and posted data purportedly belonging to both as evidence. The group took to a Breach forum to seek $2 million for the Santander data, which it said included 30 million customer records, 6 million account numbers, and 28 million credit card numbers. It sought $500,000 for the Ticketmaster data, which the group claimed included full names, addresses, phone numbers, and partial credit card numbers for 560 million customers.

Post by ShinyHunters seeking $2 million for Santander data.

Beaumont didn’t name the group behind the attacks against Snowflake customers but described it as “a teen crimeware group who’ve been active publicly on Telegram for a while and regularly relies on infostealer malware to obtain sensitive credentials.

The group has been responsible for hacks on dozens of organizations, with a small number of them including :

  • Online dating app Zoosk (30 million user records)
  • Printing service Chatbooks (15 million user records)
  • South Korean fashion platform SocialShare (6 million user records)
  • Food delivery service Home Chef (8 million user records)
  • Online marketplace Minted (5 million user records)
  • Online newspaper Chronicle of Higher Education
  • South Korean furniture magazine GGuMim (2 million user records)
  • Health magazine Mindful (2 million user records)
  • Indonesia online store Bhinneka (1.2 million user records)
  • US newspaper, the Minneapolis StarTribune (1 million user records)
  • A Microsoft GitHub account .

According to Snowflake, the threat actor used already compromised account credentials in the campaign against its customers. Those accounts weren’t protected by multifactor authentication (MFA).

Snowflake also said that the threat actor used compromised credentials to a former employee account that wasn’t protected by MFA. That account, the company said, was created for demonstration purposes.

“It did not contain sensitive data,” Snowflake’s notification stated. “Demo accounts are not connected to Snowflake’s production or corporate systems.”

The company urges all customers to ensure all their accounts are protected with MFA. The statement added that customers should also check their accounts for signs of compromise using these indicators .

“Throughout the course of our ongoing investigation, we have promptly informed the limited number of customers who we believe may have been impacted,” the company said in the post.

Snowflake and the two security firms it has retained to investigate the incident—Mandiant and Crowdstrike—said they have yet to find any evidence the breaches are a result of a “vulnerability, misconfiguration, or breach of Snowflake’s platform.” But Beaumont said the cloud provider shares some of the responsibility for the breaches because setting up MFA on Snowflake is too cumbersome. He cited the breach of the former employee’s demo account as support.

“They need to, at an engineering and secure by design level, go back and review how authentication works—as it’s pretty transparent that given the number of victims and scale of the breach that the status quo hasn’t worked,” Beaumont wrote . “Secure authentication should not be optional. And they’ve got to be completely transparent about steps they are taking off the back of this incident to strengthen things.”

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WASHINGTON — Following a successful filing season pilot and feedback from a variety of partners, the Internal Revenue Service announced today that it will make Direct File a permanent option for filing federal tax returns starting in the 2025 tax season.

The agency is exploring ways to expand Direct File to make more taxpayers eligible in the 2025 filing season and beyond by examining options to broaden Direct File’s availability across the nation, including covering more tax situations and inviting all states to partner with Direct File next year.

The IRS plans to announce additional details on the 2025 expansion in the coming months.

The decision follows a highly successful, limited pilot during the 2024 filing season, where 140,803 taxpayers in 12 states filed their taxes using Direct File. The IRS closely analyzed data collected during the pilot, held numerous meetings with diverse groups of stakeholders and gathered feedback from individual Direct File users, state officials and representatives across the tax landscape. The IRS heard directly from hundreds of organizations across the country, more than a hundred members of Congress and from those interested in using Direct File in the future. The IRS has also heard from a limited number of stakeholders who believe the current free electronic filing options provided by third party vendors are adequate.

The IRS will continue data analysis and stakeholder engagement to identify improvements to Direct File; however, initial post-pilot analysis yielded enough information for the decision to make Direct File a permanent filing option. The IRS noted that an early decision on 2025 was critical for planning and programming both for the IRS and for additional states to join the program. IRS Commissioner Danny Werfel recommended to Secretary of the Treasury Janet L. Yellen to make Direct File permanent. He cited overwhelming satisfaction from users and improved ease of tax filing among the reasons for his recommendation, which Secretary Yellen has accepted.

“The clear message is that many taxpayers across the nation want the IRS to provide more than one no-cost option for filing electronically,” said IRS Commissioner Danny Werfel. “So, starting with the 2025 filing season, the IRS will make Direct File a permanent option for filing federal tax returns. Giving taxpayers additional options strengthens the tax filing system. And adding Direct File to the menu of filing options fits squarely into our effort to make taxes as easy as possible for Americans, including saving time and money.”

State and eligibility expansion

Building on the success of the limited pilot – where taxpayers with relatively simple tax situations in 12 states were eligible to use Direct File – the IRS is examining ways to expand eligibility to more taxpayers across the country. For the 2025 filing season, the IRS will work with all states that want to partner with Direct File, and there will be no limit to the number of states that can participate in the coming year. The agency expects several new states will choose to participate.

The IRS is also exploring ways to gradually expand the scope of tax situations supported by Direct File. Over the coming years, the agency’s goal is to expand Direct File to support most common tax situations, with a particular focus on those situations that impact working families. Announcements about new state partners and expanded eligibility are expected in the coming months.

“User experience – both within the product and integration with state tax systems – will continue to be the foundation for Direct File moving forward,” Werfel said. “We will focus, first and foremost, on continuing to get it right. Accuracy and comprehensive tax credit uptake will be paramount concerns to ensure taxpayers file a correct return and get the refund they’re entitled to. And our North Star will be improving the experience of tax filing itself and helping taxpayers meet their obligations as easily and quickly as possible.”

Direct File’s role in the tax system

During the agency’s review, many taxpayers told the IRS they want no-cost filing options. Millions of taxpayers who did not live in one of the 12 pilot states visited the Direct File website to learn more about this option or asked live chat assistors to make Direct File available in their state.

As a permanent filing option, Direct File will continue to be one option among many from which taxpayers can choose. It is not meant to replace other important options by tax professionals or commercial software providers, who are critical partners with the IRS in delivering a successful tax system for the nation. The IRS also remains committed to the ongoing relationship with Free File Inc., which has served taxpayers for two decades in the joint effort to provide free commercial software. Earlier this month, the IRS signed a five-year extension with industry to continue Free File.

As the IRS works to expand Direct File, it will also work to strengthen all free filing options for taxpayers, including Free File, the Volunteer Income Tax Assistance program (VITA) and the Tax Counseling for the Elderly program (TCE).

Pilot analysis and feedback

In the six weeks following the close of the Direct File pilot, the IRS closely analyzed pilot data and gathered feedback from diverse groups of stakeholders, including Direct File users, state officials and representatives across the country’s tax community.

While data analysis and partner engagement are ongoing, the IRS’ post-pilot analysis has yielded three conclusions that support making Direct File a permanent tax filing solution:

1. Taxpayers overwhelmingly liked using Direct File

As detailed in the IRS Direct File Pilot: Filing Season 2024 After Action Report PDF , more than 15,000 Direct File users participated in the General Services Administration’s Touchpoints survey, which collects comprehensive user feedback about government systems:

  • 90% of respondents ranked their experience as Excellent or Above Average.
  • When asked what they particularly liked, respondents most commonly cited Direct File’s ease of use, trustworthiness and that it was free.
  • Additionally, 86% of respondents said that their experience with Direct File increased their trust in the IRS.
  • 90% of survey respondents who used customer support rated that experience as Excellent or Above Average.

For the primary quantitative measure of taxpayer opinions of Direct File, the IRS selected the Net Promoter Score (NPS) customer sentiment metric, which asks users, “On a scale from 0 to 10, how likely are you to recommend Direct File to a friend or family member?” NPS scores range from -100-+100. Direct File has a NPS of +74. If compared to benchmark scores from financial services companies, Direct File would lead in eight of nine categories.

2. Direct File made the tax filing experience easier

Direct File’s users reported saving time: Filing taxes with Direct File generally took less than an hour, and many reported filing in as little as 30 minutes. Nearly half of Direct File users reported paying for tax preparation the previous year, and the Treasury Department estimates that Direct File users saved $5.6 million in tax preparation fees this filing season.

3. Direct File helps catalyze the IRS’s digital transformation

To build Direct File, the IRS assembled a team of experienced tax experts, digital product specialists, engineers and data scientists from across the federal government. The agency partnered with the U.S. Digital Service and GSA’s 18F, as well as private sector partners, who all brought critical agile technology expertise. Working side by side at IRS headquarters and collaborating with remote team members across the country, the Direct File team developed and delivered a strong technology product.

The Direct File pilot also gave the IRS the chance to test customer service innovations on a large scale.

Live Chat served as Direct File’s primary customer support channel because it could be integrated directly into the product. This allowed customer support to gradually expand in concert with the overall number of users in each phase of the pilot. The IRS is exploring how this approach could impact taxpayer service overall as the agency works to provide taxpayers with more choices in how they can interact with the IRS.

“We’re mindful that the most important decision we made during the pilot was to focus on executional certainty,” Werfel said. “We took the time to get it right. We found the right first step to test the demand and the user experience and build a strong product. We will apply that same critical lesson for next year as we take a strategic approach to expanding Direct File’s availability and capabilities.”

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